Tranquil
Nature feeds the soul.......15 total reviews
Comment from rbutner
Very well done; good luck in the contest. This is very lovely, as is the artwork you selected. The more I read this, the more I like it. I enjoy your rhymes, and the tone is perfect for the art and title.
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Very well done; good luck in the contest. This is very lovely, as is the artwork you selected. The more I read this, the more I like it. I enjoy your rhymes, and the tone is perfect for the art and title.
Comment Written 11-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. I am so glad you enjoyed this poem.
Comment from Corporal Rumjugs
Yours is a work of beauty, in which the heart finds tranquility. I appreciate the fact that you've captured so well the first feeling that overcomes the heart when it comes upon something of beauty. The absolute lack of punctuation does add to the charm, but it keeps the brain from jumping to the meaning at first read. I also find it intriguing that you've elected to describe the sky as purple rather than blue. May I be so bold as to ask why? Is it just to satisfy a syllable count or is there more beneath the surface?
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016
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Yours is a work of beauty, in which the heart finds tranquility. I appreciate the fact that you've captured so well the first feeling that overcomes the heart when it comes upon something of beauty. The absolute lack of punctuation does add to the charm, but it keeps the brain from jumping to the meaning at first read. I also find it intriguing that you've elected to describe the sky as purple rather than blue. May I be so bold as to ask why? Is it just to satisfy a syllable count or is there more beneath the surface?
Comment Written 10-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much for your outstanding review and your exceptional comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
As for the color purple - purple is a spiritual color and I am always drawn to it. The sky in the artwork had a shade of
purple so I decided to use it.
Comment from marthastruber
Well written. Love the peacefulness and tranquility that the poem speaks about. "A purple sky" , how beautiful, I can see it in my mind and "flower art" I see very vibrate colors. I loved reading this. It was fun and the picture above it is beautiful.
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016
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Well written. Love the peacefulness and tranquility that the poem speaks about. "A purple sky" , how beautiful, I can see it in my mind and "flower art" I see very vibrate colors. I loved reading this. It was fun and the picture above it is beautiful.
Comment Written 10-Jul-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jul-2016
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from justafan
Hello, Ms "H". I am not versed in all the different forms of poetry, so I will not be able to "crit" as Jay Squires puts it, but having said that ...I loved this Minute poem.
I do know what touches me and this ...was excellent.
Best of luck in the contest :)
Always justafan,
Missy
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Hello, Ms "H". I am not versed in all the different forms of poetry, so I will not be able to "crit" as Jay Squires puts it, but having said that ...I loved this Minute poem.
I do know what touches me and this ...was excellent.
Best of luck in the contest :)
Always justafan,
Missy
Comment Written 18-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Have a great week!
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Comment from prettybluebirds
Excellent. A truly beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this piece of poetry and could find no mistakes. The artwork is lovely and compliments the writing. good work
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Excellent. A truly beautiful poem. I enjoyed reading this piece of poetry and could find no mistakes. The artwork is lovely and compliments the writing. good work
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for the excellent review. I enjoyed reading your great comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from songlines
I am there with you. I feel the peace. The picture goes very well and you words are also peaceful. I enjoyed this brief respite. Thank you.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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I am there with you. I feel the peace. The picture goes very well and you words are also peaceful. I enjoyed this brief respite. Thank you.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Thank you once again for the 6 star rating and excellent review. I enjoyed reading you kind comments. Have a good night......
Comment from fastdigits
the sense of tranquility is felt
immediately from the moment of
sighting your wonderful choice of
art work that is then exemplified
in the soothing poetic and artistic
phrases that gently fall down the
page.
Well done and good luck
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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the sense of tranquility is felt
immediately from the moment of
sighting your wonderful choice of
art work that is then exemplified
in the soothing poetic and artistic
phrases that gently fall down the
page.
Well done and good luck
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from DonandVicki
I do find the tranquility in your poem, A poem that can take you to such beauty if you just close your eye's and Imagine God's beauty. So many say go outside and take in God's beauty, you become enlightened when you can close your eyes and see God .
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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I do find the tranquility in your poem, A poem that can take you to such beauty if you just close your eye's and Imagine God's beauty. So many say go outside and take in God's beauty, you become enlightened when you can close your eyes and see God .
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and you exceptional comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from William Ross
Very nice, a well written minute poem great rhyme and rhythm, a wonderful read and gives that feeling of tranquility. Good luck on this.
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Very nice, a well written minute poem great rhyme and rhythm, a wonderful read and gives that feeling of tranquility. Good luck on this.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Comment from winnona
The artwork you chose goes well with your poem. I think you did a good job of meeting the challenge of this contest. Your choice of words flow from line to line conveying the meaning to the reader. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2016
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The artwork you chose goes well with your poem. I think you did a good job of meeting the challenge of this contest. Your choice of words flow from line to line conveying the meaning to the reader. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 07-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 10-Mar-2016
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Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments.
