Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 62 "Tennessee"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem caught my attention as I was born in Morristown Tennessee and later this year I will be attending a confrences in Nashville. Good times.
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Your poem caught my attention as I was born in Morristown Tennessee and later this year I will be attending a confrences in Nashville. Good times.
Comment Written 18-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 20-Mar-2016
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Comment from tspeer
Overall very good, and I'd love to hear it set to music. The only drawback I have with it, is I don't get a clear meaning. I assume the writer is leaving a woman behind, but it's unclear whether or not he's happy or sad about it. Maybe that's the intent, but it leaves me a little confused. Again, overall I think it's well written and flows very well.
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reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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Overall very good, and I'd love to hear it set to music. The only drawback I have with it, is I don't get a clear meaning. I assume the writer is leaving a woman behind, but it's unclear whether or not he's happy or sad about it. Maybe that's the intent, but it leaves me a little confused. Again, overall I think it's well written and flows very well.
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Comment Written 15-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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Comment from CivilChick
It is a good tribute to Tennessee, but as I read it, I keep thinking you are talking about a woman...is it both? Perhaps a woman in Tennessee? I am confused by the 7th and 8th stanzas. The first six seemed to be sung directly to a lost lover (Tennessee or a woman), but the 7th and 8th seem to be switching to someone else that could hold the lost love...but maybe I am interpreting it incorrectly. Anyway, it was good!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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It is a good tribute to Tennessee, but as I read it, I keep thinking you are talking about a woman...is it both? Perhaps a woman in Tennessee? I am confused by the 7th and 8th stanzas. The first six seemed to be sung directly to a lost lover (Tennessee or a woman), but the 7th and 8th seem to be switching to someone else that could hold the lost love...but maybe I am interpreting it incorrectly. Anyway, it was good!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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Comment from kathleenspalding
Sounds like a good, proper country song to me! ;-D
Flows well. I don't see anything that needs to be changed. Good choice of artwork. Thanks for sharing and good luck with it!
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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Sounds like a good, proper country song to me! ;-D
Flows well. I don't see anything that needs to be changed. Good choice of artwork. Thanks for sharing and good luck with it!
Comment Written 15-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 16-Mar-2016
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You're welcome
Comment from William Ross
It's very good a song about loving and missing your home state. no matter where I go New York will always be my home. Great job all the way. have a great day.
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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It's very good a song about loving and missing your home state. no matter where I go New York will always be my home. Great job all the way. have a great day.
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 15-Mar-2016
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Comment from Liberty Justice
Such a tribute to Tennessee This name could also be name of a state, a woman and a dog. Sorrowful poem that character can't take loneliness anymore. Misses lover so much. liberty justice
reply by the author on 14-Mar-2016
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Such a tribute to Tennessee This name could also be name of a state, a woman and a dog. Sorrowful poem that character can't take loneliness anymore. Misses lover so much. liberty justice
Comment Written 14-Mar-2016
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Comment from C.J. 16
You have written a very beautiful poem with lovely sentiments expressed. Great flow of words. I enjoyed reading it. Best wishes to you.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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You have written a very beautiful poem with lovely sentiments expressed. Great flow of words. I enjoyed reading it. Best wishes to you.
Comment Written 13-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Comment from Ridley Williams
Hey, Brett,
Well, I see you have developed a good rhythm and abab rhyme scheme in this song about a lost love. Fortunately, a song can play with the meter as you can hold a note to save the beat. still...this one reads pretty well.
Of course, a country western song about losing your girl had been done to death, but I suppose with an original sound track it might fly.
...and God may have created Tennessee, but he lives in the High Sierras of Cal/Nev, dude....yeah, my opinion, again!
Bill
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Hey, Brett,
Well, I see you have developed a good rhythm and abab rhyme scheme in this song about a lost love. Fortunately, a song can play with the meter as you can hold a note to save the beat. still...this one reads pretty well.
Of course, a country western song about losing your girl had been done to death, but I suppose with an original sound track it might fly.
...and God may have created Tennessee, but he lives in the High Sierras of Cal/Nev, dude....yeah, my opinion, again!
Bill
Comment Written 13-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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That is the thing about it.
Everyone fancies where they live to be the best place on Earth.
However, NONE of them can even come close in comparison to Nashville, Tennessee.
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Comment from MizKat
Hi Brett,
Again you have written a very nice poem. You sure are a talented man writing poetry and stories. I love writing them both too. Keep up the good work, my friend.
Kat
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Hi Brett,
Again you have written a very nice poem. You sure are a talented man writing poetry and stories. I love writing them both too. Keep up the good work, my friend.
Kat
Comment Written 13-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Comment from MelB
Another wonderful poem on the loss of a love. A very nice illustration to go with this piece. Tennessee is a lovely state. I have been through it many times.
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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Another wonderful poem on the loss of a love. A very nice illustration to go with this piece. Tennessee is a lovely state. I have been through it many times.
Comment Written 12-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 13-Mar-2016
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My pleasure.
