Comment from johngie

Excellent

Hi Mystery Writer,

I really like your point of view. All bodies are beautiful in their own way. Be proud of the way you are. SI seems to agree with this too.

The best of luck to you in the competition. A true 5-7-5.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Thank you for reviewing.

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

Delightful. Nice play on words with "broader". Good use of alliteration with full figure; assonance with vision, gives, and figure.
The last line is open to question. A polite way of saying "fat"? :-)

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Made some changes Broader view here double entendre for open minded.

reply by Spitfire on 27-Feb-2016

I really like the changes. Kudos to you.

reply by the author on 28-Feb-2016

Thanks, rolled around in my head all night. lol.

Comment from Sambangi

Excellent

Very funny 575 poem meeting all the requirements of the contest. And a nice picture that goes with it. Wish you all the best in the contest

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Thanks for reviewing.

Comment from Stephanie Kastner

Excellent

I found this poem funny and truthful. We should always have a broader vision on a lot of topics! The world would be a better place.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Thanks for the kind review.