Comment from sunnilicious

Excellent

Beautifully written poem. Great narration. Good flow of rhythm and rhymes. Focused and still creative, which isn't so simple for religious/spiritual poem. You followed a poetic format that works together very well for storytelling. Nice work.

 Comment Written 07-Apr-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Apr-2016

How kind of you to drop by to read and leave your delightful review. I haven't posted in a few weeks so I didn't expect any reviews to greet me today. Thank you for the encouraging comments. I appreciate your detailed comments. Thank you for making my day.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

Somehow I missed reading this beautiful and well done poem of faith, which I appreciate. Form and content, as well as all poem are excellent, especially the last stanza and these lines:
"Along the path you choose to tread,
if you will come and follow me,
I'll take from you your darkest dread,
if you will hear and you will see."
Marilyn

 Comment Written 25-Mar-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016

Hi Marilyn,
Thank you for the surprise review. I know I have nothing active so it is very sweet of you to drop in. I am sorry I haven't been around much lately and have missed your writing.

I appreciate the kind words and encouragement for this poem. Thank you so much.

Debi

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Debi,

Your Rondeau redouble is very impressive and
your message is beautifully and poetically conveyed.
"My gospel conquers misery
and makes a joyful heart instead.
Receive this gift of charity,
accept from me the broken bread."

I like how you reminded readers that "if" we listen
and follow we will have "clarity" and the gift of
eternity. Your ending stanza is very powerful.
This poem is uplifting, hopeful and I also like how
it is invitational.

Lovely,
Linda

 Comment Written 28-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 01-Mar-2016

Hi Linda,
Thank you for the encouraging comments about the writing. Thank you for mentioning what you liked about the poem, and that you found it hopeful and invitational. I was hoping to convey that message and I appreciate you noting it. I appreciate the comments about the closing stanza, too.

Debi

Comment from Spitfire

Excellent

I love the way rondeaus come full circle. This poem emphasizes the symbolic bread we share in communion as a means to remind us of his sacrifice. I like the use of first person in this--our Savior speaks with words so kind.

 Comment Written 27-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Feb-2016

Thank you for the encouraging review. Thank you for mentioning the use of first person. You are the only one that mentioned it. I also appreciate your insights on the theme.

reply by Spitfire on 28-Feb-2016

You're welcome.

Comment from nancyrabbrose

Excellent

You have written a brilliant, inspirational poem about the power of God's grace for all of us. And, yes, you selected an excellent illustration. I especially like the concept you poetically described regarding true perspective.
I cannot find any corrections.
Well done.

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016

Thank you for the detailed review and for sharing your insights. I appreciate the encouraging comments. Thank you.

Comment from happykat4

Excellent

I did not have a six or this would have been given it. Your rondeau redouble is perfect. The poem itself contains God's message to all of us and today reading this it gave me comfort and hope. We stray from Him and His commandments, yet He is waiting for us. Thanking Him for sending His Son. Thank you for sharing this with me. Blessings. Kat

 Comment Written 24-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016

Hi Kat. Thank you for the virtual six and your encouraging comments. You made my day! I am pleased you liked the poem and that it gave you comfort and hope. Thank you for sharing your insights and faith. Debi

Comment from artisart4u

Exceptional

Your spiritual poem is inspiring.

It seems as thou you wrote your poem correctly, with this type it probably was a challenge.

Congratulations on your Recognized status you received and
good luck with your poem.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 25-Feb-2016

Thank you for the exceptional six stars!! I am pleased that you found the poem inspiring and worthy of the high rating.I appreciate the encouragement. Debi

Comment from chcbeck

Excellent

I enjoyed reading about the form of this poem and it has inspired me to give it a try. Your poem is beautifully written and a joy to read, the picture is perfect too. A real feel good poem, thanks for sharing.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

It is exciting to hear that you would like to try a rondeau redouble. I look forward to reading what you come up with. Thank you for kind comments about the writing and the picture. I am happy to hear it made you feel good.

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Beautiful artwork and poem. The truth sure does set us free. Great imagery, especially taking His hand and walking with Him. Bright hope has won the victory - favorite line.

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Thank you for taking the time to read and review, and for pointing out your favorite line. I appreciate you sharing your insights, too. I appreciate the comments about the imagery. Thank you.

reply by MelB on 27-Feb-2016

You're welcome.

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

This is a beautiful heart warming read and a wonderful declaration of your faith for us all to enjoy. Your well crafted words hold a message that we should all take note of. Well presented with the artwork. Thank you for sharing.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 23-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Feb-2016

Hi John,
Thank you for the encouraging comments and your insights on the theme. I am pleased you found the poem heart warming. Bless you as well. Thank you.
Debi