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7 total reviews
Comment from Joan E.
I was so pleased to find this new post, which must be for a blind contest, since I didn't get an alert about it. It is very dark, starting with the animated artwork and the "carrion," plus the ominous "this time it's over". I hope you have rid yourself of the "Apocalypse" mood and can have a peaceful sleep and hopeful new week. Hugs galore- Joan
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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I was so pleased to find this new post, which must be for a blind contest, since I didn't get an alert about it. It is very dark, starting with the animated artwork and the "carrion," plus the ominous "this time it's over". I hope you have rid yourself of the "Apocalypse" mood and can have a peaceful sleep and hopeful new week. Hugs galore- Joan
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 21-Feb-2016
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black balling's a sport J and the Olympics aint got nothing on us....smile. I've put out fifteen poems and I continue to sink in the legitimacy....-smile-...do you think somebody up there likes me...? tell the truth...-smile-....i'm sorry about my mix up with limerick J....love ya Michael
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Good morning, my friend! I think it's all just statistics on FanStory, especially since we have lots of new members and at the beginning of a new year the numbers don't mean much. Hang in there- Joan
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I've been here for years J...-smile-
Comment from l.raven
HI Michael, this is really a dark poem...right from the picture to the poem...author unfinished...last act final chapter...very well written...and always in your own unique wording...very deep and dark...love ya Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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HI Michael, this is really a dark poem...right from the picture to the poem...author unfinished...last act final chapter...very well written...and always in your own unique wording...very deep and dark...love ya Linda xxoo
Comment Written 21-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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Hello...-smile-
yes it is...I feel where I go.
thank you Sweetie...hope you're feeling beeter...love you Michael
Comment from P1
wow what a well presented piece
of writing the imagery and graphics alone
are worth five stars the words are dark and
scary and gave me chills. pleasure to read and
review this piece
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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wow what a well presented piece
of writing the imagery and graphics alone
are worth five stars the words are dark and
scary and gave me chills. pleasure to read and
review this piece
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 24-Feb-2016
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Hi Paige...-smile-...thank you very much. love michael
Comment from fafa
A poem of apocalyptic style where itsimages say to us all and its content is verysuggestive, greetings and I congratulate iton the genius
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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A poem of apocalyptic style where itsimages say to us all and its content is verysuggestive, greetings and I congratulate iton the genius
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Hello...-smile-
Well I thank you for enjoying....but i'm afraid I've stopped.
Gump is going to do something else now...before they take the Forrest from me....-smile- love michael
Comment from w.j.debi
You create some powerful and dark imagery. Excellent focus on the mood; it is eerie and leaves a sense of emptiness and futility in its wake. Excellent alliteration to accentuate and punctuate your theme.
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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You create some powerful and dark imagery. Excellent focus on the mood; it is eerie and leaves a sense of emptiness and futility in its wake. Excellent alliteration to accentuate and punctuate your theme.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Hello...-smile-
why thank you Debi...appreciate you're saying so. love michael
Comment from Ricky1024
darkness and death to Christ with AC fingers at every last breath Peter patter heart no motor no mortal matter ever seems to painted the Sistine lost my mind what's my name can't remember who when or what Doorking close door now Ricky 10:24
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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darkness and death to Christ with AC fingers at every last breath Peter patter heart no motor no mortal matter ever seems to painted the Sistine lost my mind what's my name can't remember who when or what Doorking close door now Ricky 10:24
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 03-Mar-2016
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Hey rick...-smile-
absolutely...its a long way to Amarillo...I get going.
love Michael
Comment from I am Cat
Are you ok?
This is some excellent writing... disturbing subject matter, but the imagery is amazing.
but I ask again...
are you ok? ((((hugs))))
just checking.
I'd be remiss if I didn't, right? ;)
the unfinished author of last acts final chapter
autographs and closes the book of your alter
knuckle tapping your shoulder
knocking door answered...
time said its over
powerful stuff, dear 'boy'... powerful stuff...
(you sure you're ok?)
hugs
very well done. I wish I had a six to give you...
great job
Cat
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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Are you ok?
This is some excellent writing... disturbing subject matter, but the imagery is amazing.
but I ask again...
are you ok? ((((hugs))))
just checking.
I'd be remiss if I didn't, right? ;)
the unfinished author of last acts final chapter
autographs and closes the book of your alter
knuckle tapping your shoulder
knocking door answered...
time said its over
powerful stuff, dear 'boy'... powerful stuff...
(you sure you're ok?)
hugs
very well done. I wish I had a six to give you...
great job
Cat
Comment Written 20-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2016
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no.....no I'm not...i'm stupid...i'm sorry. I had a computor melt down today...and when the smoke cleared....I ..well I guess things are different now...usually when I first release it goes into preview mode...until really release it....apprantly it didn't do that this time...and now I'm stupid...as I said I'm terribly sorry....I hope it doesn't disturg anymore of youre evening Kittem...-smile-...love Michael
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what? you're not stupid! and it did that to me the other day as well! went off preview mode.. .i hate it when it does that. :(
lol
((((((((big hugs honey...))))))
don't be so hard on yourself. ok?
mwah
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well I started sleeping on the couch instead of the nails...so I'm I'm heading in the right direction...-smile- love-
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indeed... that's a good thing... I hear that you leak when you sleep on nails. ;) those holes and all
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yes maam...-smile-///I wonder why I cant copy my music anymore....its driving me crazier...-frown-...I want to put sympathy for devil with this...after I tweak it perfect of course...but I cant...copy my music...aaaaaaaAAAAAAHHHHHH!!!
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that's odd... I wonder why not?
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ah I got it google chrome...they don't call me a genius for nothing Cat...lol
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give 'em hell Michael. ;) I'm off to bed... snuggle with my bunny. night Michael. ;)
