The spider and Miss Wigglebottom
Older woman gets fed up with younger one32 total reviews
Comment from amahra
LOL! Loved the story. Funny, sexy and well written. Didn't know where was going. Geat job.
"...going him time for ample view." [you meant 'giving' him time for ample view.]
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2016
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LOL! Loved the story. Funny, sexy and well written. Didn't know where was going. Geat job.
"...going him time for ample view." [you meant 'giving' him time for ample view.]
Comment Written 18-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for your generous rating and the excellent review. Much appreciated. Gretchen
Comment from Mary Wakeford
Cute story, we've all experienced at least one of these fellow employees over the years. I did notice one typo in the last paragraph...placed her hand on Mr. Lumpus shoulder, *giving* him ample time to enjoy the view. (vs. going*). It must have been a giant brown recluse to have that effect on the Mrs. :)
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reply by the author on 19-Feb-2016
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Cute story, we've all experienced at least one of these fellow employees over the years. I did notice one typo in the last paragraph...placed her hand on Mr. Lumpus shoulder, *giving* him ample time to enjoy the view. (vs. going*). It must have been a giant brown recluse to have that effect on the Mrs. :)
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Comment Written 17-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for your nice comments and the great rating. Gretchen
