Political Buggery
Political limerick28 total reviews
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Hi - No this does not offend a all. It is not just a really good Limerick it is a stream of truths. Cleverly constructed and a good read. Warm regards Dorothy
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Hi - No this does not offend a all. It is not just a really good Limerick it is a stream of truths. Cleverly constructed and a good read. Warm regards Dorothy
Comment Written 17-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thanks so much for your positive comments. It is a rather "Present topic" ARF.
Thanks Jim
Comment from Domino 2
It must be great being a perverted over-sexed monkey, Jim - just stroll along and find the nearest female (or male if that way inclined) and give it a good poking. No rape laws in monkey-land. MWAHAHA!
Yep - f*cked up the arse ('buggered') metaphorically is generally what we get when the elected two-faced smiling politicians get in (no pun intended).
Excellent meter and rhyme in your hard (excuse the pun again) hitting political rant.
Best wishes, Ray
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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It must be great being a perverted over-sexed monkey, Jim - just stroll along and find the nearest female (or male if that way inclined) and give it a good poking. No rape laws in monkey-land. MWAHAHA!
Yep - f*cked up the arse ('buggered') metaphorically is generally what we get when the elected two-faced smiling politicians get in (no pun intended).
Excellent meter and rhyme in your hard (excuse the pun again) hitting political rant.
Best wishes, Ray
Comment Written 17-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Love the pun. and love the pun again. I can tell how much you liked this by the great fun in the response. tis the season to vent anger at this ruling class. no laws for them.
Thanks for this wonderful and humerous review.
Jim
Comment from William Ross
This is good I guess the truth had to be told,lol. good job on this i got a lick out of it, Thanks for sharing the witt have a great day.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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This is good I guess the truth had to be told,lol. good job on this i got a lick out of it, Thanks for sharing the witt have a great day.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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It pleases me that you liked it,, it was a fun write.
Thanks jax
Comment from c_lucas
Never apologize for your work. You are writing to adults, It is not your fault your reviewing audience has some reviewers with the mentality of two year olds.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Never apologize for your work. You are writing to adults, It is not your fault your reviewing audience has some reviewers with the mentality of two year olds.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thanks lucas for the good advice and review
Jax
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You're welcome, Jaxpoet. Charlie
Comment from honeytree
The art work is really great for this poem
Yes politicians today practice thuggery
They usually care for the rich and forget the poor
all the time and the poor remain hungry.
Honeytree
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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The art work is really great for this poem
Yes politicians today practice thuggery
They usually care for the rich and forget the poor
all the time and the poor remain hungry.
Honeytree
Comment Written 17-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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They care for themselves and surly just want to keep elite class to themselves. as to feeding the poor, through the enormous amount of $$$ that the capitalist system produces there are 1,000,000,000 billion less starving children in the world today than in the fifties. there has been a tremendous effort by governments that have the money through tax to help those in need. The bankers and fund managers are the bad guys. A company like exxon pays more in tax than they keep in profit. Tax on exxon was billions of $$ that helped feed an enormous amount of people. nobody notices.. Sorry for the rant. Thanks for the review
Jax
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Loved what you wrote.
Annie
Comment from Pantygynt
I can see this might offend but I am impervious to such things and the politicians should not be able to air their political pornography under the cover of the prudery of the public. This is a clever limerick that makes a valid statement in a powerful way.
As far as the artwork is concerned, unless one is aware of the gender of the receiving monkey. We cannot be 100% sure that this is not the ultimate expression of physical love for the electorate. However on balance I would agree with you. Lol.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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I can see this might offend but I am impervious to such things and the politicians should not be able to air their political pornography under the cover of the prudery of the public. This is a clever limerick that makes a valid statement in a powerful way.
As far as the artwork is concerned, unless one is aware of the gender of the receiving monkey. We cannot be 100% sure that this is not the ultimate expression of physical love for the electorate. However on balance I would agree with you. Lol.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thanks for this thoughtful response. I always delight in reading your reviews. Do you think the standing monkey cares? Anyway when buggery is in the title i think folks make the connection
Thanks Jax
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No. I don't suppose he does, and yes I am sure folks made the connection. What worries me is why yo jumped to that conclusion. Lol.
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Not to worry straight as an arrow. at least when the arrow use to work.
Thanks jax
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Lol. Good answer.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
It is very well said, the politicians are a game of who can cheat and lie the best without winking an eye they will lead you in a trap and still feel proud of themselves.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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It is very well said, the politicians are a game of who can cheat and lie the best without winking an eye they will lead you in a trap and still feel proud of themselves.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Well said. Glad I evoked thought on the subject. Thanks fro the read and comment.
Jax
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Jaxpoet,
Nothing offensive there, quite comical and true, sad to say. I would never have thought to rhyme the words that you used in your limerick, but it turned out perfect. What if the governments of this world weren't rife with deceit and corruption. What a world it would be :)
Kim
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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Hi Jaxpoet,
Nothing offensive there, quite comical and true, sad to say. I would never have thought to rhyme the words that you used in your limerick, but it turned out perfect. What if the governments of this world weren't rife with deceit and corruption. What a world it would be :)
Kim
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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Sounds like a good subject for a poem. Thanks for a great great and thoughtful review
Jax
Comment from Liberty Justice
Five 5 stars. Poet is a political critical. Doesn't have much faith in politicians. Says they lie to people to get virus and don't follow through.
liberty justice
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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Five 5 stars. Poet is a political critical. Doesn't have much faith in politicians. Says they lie to people to get virus and don't follow through.
liberty justice
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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Thanks for the review. You peg me right on.
Jax
Comment from scd41
Your poem describes the political class as a whole without mincing words. They exploit the masses by their crafty means and deserve little respect. You have released your hard feelings against them by writing this poem and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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Your poem describes the political class as a whole without mincing words. They exploit the masses by their crafty means and deserve little respect. You have released your hard feelings against them by writing this poem and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016
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The pleasure was mine. It is embarrassing as an American to see the garbage that want to lead our country. Thanks for the review
Jax
