The Lunchroom Affair
Tale of love15 total reviews
Comment from Misrael
That was cute and very short but a good read. Was it two children or what. The drawing makes me think it is children but I am not sure. I enjoyed the read. Keep on writing.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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That was cute and very short but a good read. Was it two children or what. The drawing makes me think it is children but I am not sure. I enjoyed the read. Keep on writing.
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the wonderful things that you side and the great review. Gretchen
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Thank you for the wonderful things that you side and the great review. Gretchen
Comment from anabellapongasi
Haha I love this! Nice flash fiction.
Great ending :)
Through swollen lips he whispers weakly, "Ith was toally worth ith."
I kinda saw that coming with the earlier mention of severe food allergy and peanut butter :)
Blessings,
Anabella
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Haha I love this! Nice flash fiction.
Great ending :)
Through swollen lips he whispers weakly, "Ith was toally worth ith."
I kinda saw that coming with the earlier mention of severe food allergy and peanut butter :)
Blessings,
Anabella
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for the great review. Gretchen
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Thank you so much for the great review. Gretchen
Comment from Deniz22
Ha-ha, you completely took me in! Great surprise ending as I totally missed the clue. Love lover boy's difficult to understand ode to his love at the end. Very creative and funny...great job. Sorry, out of 6s
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Ha-ha, you completely took me in! Great surprise ending as I totally missed the clue. Love lover boy's difficult to understand ode to his love at the end. Very creative and funny...great job. Sorry, out of 6s
Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
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Thank you so much for your wonderful review. Gretchen
Comment from DonandVicki
Ahh yes , the things we do for love. A sweet tale and I can see a young boy going way to far out on a limb for a kiss only to land on his kester.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Ahh yes , the things we do for love. A sweet tale and I can see a young boy going way to far out on a limb for a kiss only to land on his kester.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the wonderful review. Gretchen Have a good night.
Comment from Eric1
Hi Gretchen, well I for one thought this was a brilliant piece of flash fiction and would certainly hold it's own in any competition, that ending was superb my friend.
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reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Hi Gretchen, well I for one thought this was a brilliant piece of flash fiction and would certainly hold it's own in any competition, that ending was superb my friend.
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Comment Written 15-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 15-Feb-2016
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Thank you. It's actually harder than I thought it would be. Lol. Thanks for the wonderful review. Have a great night. Gretchen
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You are most welcome my friend.
