Comment from Caressa_08

Excellent

Oh, Rickey 1024, Wish I had a six to give your poem...You been through a lot & Dedication to your wife is a very good, and yes.. a tearful one. Your Dear wife, Carolyn, I think was depressed & maybe it wasn't suicide, but that as she had a reason to be like that because of what happened to your son...as she was also grief stricken and that was a normal reaction ...I know your Lord, Jesus Christ has gotten you through so much and I Pray your life will continue as such with Hope with him & ...Hopefully that are still here friends and family nearby where you reside you can visit with be your daughters and others.Thanks for letting us know..And you have a Good Day.
Note: Anniversary is spelled wrong in the second to last line.

God Bless...Caressa_08

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016

thanks for your review, so 8 not just because Carissa of my wife's death in my son's death but I've already presenting this once before and if I can get enough more reviews I can get a blue ribbon which is so deserve so well all your writing friends message them tell them to read this poem dedicated home all yo

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi Ricky, this is a tragic poem but a wonderful tribute to the loss of your wife and son, in the second stanza you have used THU instead of thy twice, but who cares, the raw emotion is there and I certainly know how you feel my friend.

 Comment Written 16-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 16-Feb-2016

Thanks so much I wreck I'm trying to get a blue ribbon with this when it was presented once before I pumped it up with a balloon so I wanna see what happens I told the other reviewers that elder their writing frontier to the review it thanks for that Ricky Ricky

Comment from mermaids

Excellent

Your words reflect the love you have for Jason and the importance he has in your life. You have a strong steady beat and a vivid use of words that capture feelings and emotions.

 Comment Written 14-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016

thanks dear as always love wiki Ricky

Comment from Kaydoe

Excellent

I am so sorry for your loss, and I am sure it is difficult at your anniversary. And then loosing your son, my heart goes out to you. Writing and sharing your feelings must be difficult but good to express those emotions.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016

yes kaydon I right sometimes to relieve it help 24 hours

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Parents has to beware of the con games their children will play on them. There is always one who will try to mooch off their parents. This is a very well written tribute to a deceased loved one.

 Comment Written 13-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016

good idea brings me back about 10 years ago to the three children playing a game of hide and go seek to got trapped in the trunk of the car and the cops couldn't find them didn't realize there and back in the trunk of the car cuz it was sleeping when I checked the car but the hood but the trunk was locked they're too stupid to prop it open and next day they cried when the temperature hit about 95 degrees out have a wonderful holiday 24 hour

reply by c_lucas on 13-Feb-2016

Children are not known for their problem solving abilities.

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

Such a loving yet sad tribute to your late wife. The agony that she must have been going through. This story must have been painful for you to write.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 13-Feb-2016

yes wiki painful it all started with my sons accident my wife will be able to leave the house in the daytime she was able to handle things better and me the night time after I woke up around 4 in the afternoon I was trying to sleep as much as I could to heal my pain full brain I was out of my mind she was telling her friend that was a frozen food manager at Pathmark that I was crazy little did she know what she would do 8 months later the truth that she was really the crazy one by stopping horror mystery blood pressure medication refusing to go to hospital and having two heart attacks eventually diagnosed with the DVD which is deep vernacular thrombosis of the leg which released two o'clock to the heart stopped her hard instantly they couldn't even revive or animal with a not did for her I was luckily able to revive her from the first heart attack I had no idea what I was doing I didn't even touch it till I called my mom one and then I will grab her from behind lifted her up and I must have stimulated it or not broken it free and then another one came I don't know I'm not a doctor but they said yes but that's what she wanted she always had to request not to be resuscitated and the reason she did what she did was she threw my son at 3 weeks before he died he was amazing young man is a gift of life donor and she knew that she throw man has he got an argument with one of my two orders the heating get along with and I came back the next day got down on one knee and said that she would be the only woman he would ever love her she say it was her first his last words to her and she didn't forgive him it must been driving her crazy because she would smoke cigarette after cigarette listen to her playing bingo on jasons computer I couldn't have her around in the living room so I could handle this excess smoke so she would stay in there and I couldn't even go over and tap on the shoulder it would shock her she was in her own little world slowly and patiently waiting for the day that she would die from out from the resulting problems from not taking her medications so tomorrow will be my 13th Valentine's day without her 13th Christmas and all those of the holidays and the same without my dear and this son Jason I love my wife but she love me so much and dep gamble all my money away and saw that showed she never really loved me she did she didn't even loved children the word love didn't exist in her category but she did care he was a very caring woman would die for any of those in a second so I still love her never forgave her for what she did what just another thing we sometimes have to go through and I did take care of all that and I'm happy now I have a steady income I must wash my house but that didn't happen so tomorrow on Sunday 7 Valentine's Day remember my words the key and then tell the story to Donald give him a kiss and make sure he knows that you would never do anything like that to him and I say these things in the name of Jesus Christ amen 24 tel

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Such a loving and heart breaking tragedies. You and millions of people have seen hard times and
bad times on our life. I hope you dear poet are
"Love Living Life" one of my poems. You are a survivor. MAKE YOURSELF HAPPY or dwelling on sorrow Will drag you down. lol liberty justice STAY STRONG.

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

plague forever wandering in circles made by 10 smile and laugh from way back when flowers in the background balloon now it all seems like too many gloom pain constantly harassing me mocking and laughing at me finally I go to sleep and it all goes away and then when I wake up it's their against each and every day

reply by Liberty Justice on 12-Feb-2016

I'm so sorry for your
relentless pain. it's
been 13 years so pain
shouldn't be so raw.
WHAT are you doing
to ease the pain?
WHAT are you doing
TO FIND HAPPINESS
RIGHT NOW?

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

writing to you beautiful

reply by Liberty Justice on 12-Feb-2016

Thank you very much
dear fan story friend.

reply by Liberty Justice on 12-Feb-2016

Did I Thank you already Roy
for lovely review.

reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

my name is not Ricky reward shortage for a blessing is Rogers I Drive horses and not cars or motorcycles or bicycles right now Corvettes and Cadillacs with my vehicles of choice for the course is no fun without you anymore love you baby

reply by Liberty Justice on 12-Feb-2016

STAY the course soldier.
You are strong. You are
a survivor. SO SURVIVE
the struggles pains of
life. YOU MUST SURVIVE!

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

I know that I must sound repetative but I sincerely thank you for reaching out to us readers. You have so much that you offer with your words and lines. Xo...

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

yes I do have a lot to offer miss Fox my two beautiful love poems for you but I can't do it like this is too impersonal I even have to call me or me call you so my number is 12609 276-7325 and if you are don't call I can understand you know even a word acquainted through the writing side were still complete strangers but I love you a lot of your work and review a lot of my nuts and we both can you write powerful hiking right beautiful powerful but normally it's beautiful and a lot of grief and near depressive poetry that is written from the heart and in pain is the most people from in the I believe the most touching avenues touches people makes him feel like you appreciative and I know we talked about that so 24 24

Comment from rjuselius

Excellent

i am sincerely sorry for your losses dear ricky! i can't even begin to imagine how much hurt you have gone through and still do. i wish you all the strength in the world!
thank you for sharing this delicate writing!
blessings!
rebekka x

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

thanks ever so much for that have a wonderful Valentines Day this Sunday Ricky 1024

Comment from Serendipity!

Excellent

Thanks for sharing with us. I see where you have gone through some excruciating pain in your life an would like to encourage you to keep on leaning on the Heavenly Father for He can bring the most comfort to you. Just want to encourage you to 'be there' for your daughters for they are suffering to.

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 Comment Written 12-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

thank you for that serendipity and thank you for your review 24