Comment from Narvik

Exceptional

Loved it, Bill. Your usual well-polished writing I remember so well.

Any of this autobiographical? I spent 3 years in the army in Germany, so this brought tons of memories. Our cat house was called the Licht, and the dollar was only worth two marks by that time.

As for the writing, it was your usual relaxed and smooth style. I felt I really got to know the characters.

Adelisa's (c)ousin's
The German(')s seemed to enjoy it

Thanks for posting this, Bill.

~ Erik

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

Hi Erik - too much embellishment to list as non-fiction, but pretty darn close. Thanks for the spots. Bill

Comment from anabellapongasi

Excellent

Bill,
This is a very good story. I was worried that Chuck might have gotten into the trap that many men think harmless. He almost fell and it would really be his fault because he went to Susie's, and then he went "upstairs"...Well he was victorious that first time, but if he ever did that again he would really be looking for serious trouble.
LOL.

Blessings,
Anabella

 Comment Written 12-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

Thanks for reading and for you kind feedback. I appreciate both. Bill

Comment from royowen

Excellent

A fantastic tale, mainly devoted to fidelity, and men and women, even engaging in prostitiution can be normal, and have the same propensities, hopes and aspirations as anyone else. It was very well written, with good strong characters and a journey through what we can reality,. Good characters, well woven story with an unusual plot, well done, blessings, Rot

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

Thank you very much for reading and for your kind comments. You put your finger on a key message I was trying to convey. Regards, Bill

reply by royowen on 12-Feb-2016

Thank you

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

This takes me back to when I was in the military some 25 years ago. This story takes me back to long ago when I was young and strong. Thank you for this.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

Thanks for reading and for you kind comments. Too many embellishments to be listed as non-fiction, but pretty much was. Regards, Bill

Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

Every girl has her own story, seldom is any truth part of it. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read. There is very good imagery.

 Comment Written 11-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016

Thanks for reading Charlie - some of your "girls" have rich stories. Bill

reply by c_lucas on 12-Feb-2016

I trust everything is fine with you, Bill. You're welcome.

Comment from Realist101

Excellent

Hi Bill! Nice to see you posting! First, another really intriguing story, I bet based on someone you know or your reality? I see one nit, remove comma between Northern Alabama. Maybe not use cap for northern? I just watched an old movie "Tank" starring James Garner. 1984...HOW things have changed since then! Hope all is well in your world Bill. Suse

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 Comment Written 11-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016

Hi Suse - thanks so much for reading and for your comments. I'm not posting much but am very active in a writers forum where I live in Fairhope, Alabama.

reply by Realist101 on 11-Feb-2016

Wonderful Bill! So nice to see you here tho. Best wishes!! :)