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Comment from Selina Stambi
Looks like this guilt-laden poet is preparing for a calorie-rich Valentine's celebration.
Eternal romantic, Michael, you are!
Smiles,
Sonali
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Looks like this guilt-laden poet is preparing for a calorie-rich Valentine's celebration.
Eternal romantic, Michael, you are!
Smiles,
Sonali
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Hi Sonali...-smile-...hm I know that name. did you used to be somebody else too...? haha...-smile-...guilt .? Naivety gets caught guilty frequently. yes I am. Eternal romantic and guilty as sin...love Michael
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Good memory. Former profile name - Reachingforthestars.
Comment from scd41
Your poem hinting at the high calorie tempting chocolates to the health conscious is quite appropriate especially when Valentine's Day is not far off. But many may find the heart-shaped and heart-felt symbols of love too irresistible. Some may decide to put off calorie counting till warning bells start ringing.
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Your poem hinting at the high calorie tempting chocolates to the health conscious is quite appropriate especially when Valentine's Day is not far off. But many may find the heart-shaped and heart-felt symbols of love too irresistible. Some may decide to put off calorie counting till warning bells start ringing.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Hi...-smile- why thank you. Its not about the candy but the journey for love....because love always honors its master befor itself.-smile- ...love Michael
Comment from royowen
I think I've encapsulated the general view of Valentine's Day Michael, but their so deeper meanings to love, as you lay out in the richness of the chocolate, excellent to the palette, and yet there can be a bitter aftertaste, well done, in just a few words, well done, regards, Michael, blessings, Roy,
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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I think I've encapsulated the general view of Valentine's Day Michael, but their so deeper meanings to love, as you lay out in the richness of the chocolate, excellent to the palette, and yet there can be a bitter aftertaste, well done, in just a few words, well done, regards, Michael, blessings, Roy,
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Why thank you Sir...-smile- Glad you enjoyed it Roy...love Michael
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Most welcome Michael,
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Well done, Cat
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okay Dog...-headnod-....keep it real-
Comment from Joan E.
Another poem inspired by Valentine's Day--I can see that gleaming Oscar within your reach! You make your point too by repeating "calorie rich"!! But "heart shape sweet" says it all. Happy V-Day- Joan
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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Another poem inspired by Valentine's Day--I can see that gleaming Oscar within your reach! You make your point too by repeating "calorie rich"!! But "heart shape sweet" says it all. Happy V-Day- Joan
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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Hey J...-smile- ...you back in running shape Champ...? ha...yea the carrot never caught cant be eaten thats for sure. Thank you Special...Happy V-Day to you too....give Bob a big bear hug for me...-smile- love Michael
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Bob was happy to receive your greeting. I'm getting back to walking shape! Smiles- Joan
Comment from Leineco
heart on his sleeve
runs through the streets
delivering
bliss that melts on the lips
blows through "don't walk"
too hepped up to stop
a promise awaits
his arrival
no lunch for a week;
banking the savings
roses too dear
but foil wrapped kisses
will please her
;-)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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heart on his sleeve
runs through the streets
delivering
bliss that melts on the lips
blows through "don't walk"
too hepped up to stop
a promise awaits
his arrival
no lunch for a week;
banking the savings
roses too dear
but foil wrapped kisses
will please her
;-)
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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Albert Einstein was right...the whole world lives and dies for love....of one form or another. I would walk forever to find once more. ...-smile-...thank you Poetess. Always a pleasure to read you. love Michael
Comment from IndianaIrish
"speak to me only with your eyes..."'
OH yeah, baby, that's how music is supposed to be! Loved the video and love Led Zep. A nice lovey-DoveyKim poem for your Valentine, Michael. No time to waste and love the knd of chocolates when you don't have to worry about calories...devour without worry.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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"speak to me only with your eyes..."'
OH yeah, baby, that's how music is supposed to be! Loved the video and love Led Zep. A nice lovey-DoveyKim poem for your Valentine, Michael. No time to waste and love the knd of chocolates when you don't have to worry about calories...devour without worry.
Smiles,
Karyn :-)
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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yea thats not her real name though...Hey K...-smile-....good to see you. yea great video....ha, when somebody loves you right...they go unnoticed......-headtilt-....you see how profound I am...I mean I dont even try...and...gold....lol...ah haha...hope you're well. love Michael
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LOL I really have to learn to check my incredible typing skills before I send.
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what the hell I'm already cut wide open...just sever my head Karyn...you said you were my friend...-headtilt-
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I am your friend...takes too much swing and cutting major things to lop off a head...let's have a chocolate and Led Zep party instead! Whadda ya say?
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well...only if I get your t-shirt wet...-smile-
Comment from l.raven
LOL...Hi Michael, I just ate a chocolate candy bar...mini...Hershey's...LOL...I hope your box of chocolates gets where it's going...so sweet...love your poem...and the hearts...and so love this music...a lot to say for Valentines Day...love you Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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LOL...Hi Michael, I just ate a chocolate candy bar...mini...Hershey's...LOL...I hope your box of chocolates gets where it's going...so sweet...love your poem...and the hearts...and so love this music...a lot to say for Valentines Day...love you Linda xxoo
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Happy Valentines Day Linda....you are my best friend in the whole world, I trust your love for me precious...-smile-...I'm sorry I'm not everything I should be, where I should be completely. hard as I try I cant deny what I pray for...its like walking away from Jesus . I dont know how. please forgive me. . I do love you Michael
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forgiven a long time ago...it's going to be ok...you will see...you can't walk away from Jesus Michael...you take two steps away...He takes three steps closer...I do love you too Michael...Happy Valentines Day to you...
Comment from Ricky1024
Michael this reminds me of Forrest Gump when he talks about a box of chocolates and he says it has a funny way actually I've seen a lot of his work and it's amazing but I don't tritiated met an artist since I heard one time he wrote an elevator with a family and a little child asks for his autograph and he said leave me alone kid that's cruel so long but the chocolate for Valentines Day is so common in all done OK and well done and of course the flowers I have a female friend I'll probably do a little something for we're not lovers anymore we just friends. But I have met a new friend at church is 2 years old amazing beautiful little girl who picked on me to talk to during church and smile at and last Sunday she asked me if I haven't even talked to her that a hotdog charity sale for the church to raise money so I said yes and then she stares at meso her name is MIA how many Mia Farrow the actress that married Woody Allen at 2 years old cute theme straighten short hair I think when she was born her mother father that actress and she has the same here and she looks like her as a child so she will get my little box of chocolates for a dollar and a card and maybe I'll get a kiss on the cheek or a hug whatever she wants to give back you never know it's going to come from a two year olds imagination as long as its not kick in the shin so I hope this Sabbath Sunday on Valentine's Day you can find your little piece of me I wish will go on with my latest post a little piece of heaven which is a dedicated song to my legs son Jason so be sure to catch that beautiful and very well. I've written a lot of songs 2400 UT
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Michael this reminds me of Forrest Gump when he talks about a box of chocolates and he says it has a funny way actually I've seen a lot of his work and it's amazing but I don't tritiated met an artist since I heard one time he wrote an elevator with a family and a little child asks for his autograph and he said leave me alone kid that's cruel so long but the chocolate for Valentines Day is so common in all done OK and well done and of course the flowers I have a female friend I'll probably do a little something for we're not lovers anymore we just friends. But I have met a new friend at church is 2 years old amazing beautiful little girl who picked on me to talk to during church and smile at and last Sunday she asked me if I haven't even talked to her that a hotdog charity sale for the church to raise money so I said yes and then she stares at meso her name is MIA how many Mia Farrow the actress that married Woody Allen at 2 years old cute theme straighten short hair I think when she was born her mother father that actress and she has the same here and she looks like her as a child so she will get my little box of chocolates for a dollar and a card and maybe I'll get a kiss on the cheek or a hug whatever she wants to give back you never know it's going to come from a two year olds imagination as long as its not kick in the shin so I hope this Sabbath Sunday on Valentine's Day you can find your little piece of me I wish will go on with my latest post a little piece of heaven which is a dedicated song to my legs son Jason so be sure to catch that beautiful and very well. I've written a lot of songs 2400 UT
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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I love Forrest Gump....I wish everybody was like him....or wanted to be like him....-smile- Oh dont worry about that Tom had just found out his wife was banging his agent....its understandable...now that you know....-wink-...Appreciate you Buddy....love Michael
Comment from AnnaLinda
Michael,
What a beautiful presentation you have!
Well, here you have me reading your poem
several times...;)
I agree with your lines here:
"no time...
to waste is sacrilegious "
this promise *(to) precious to miss" typo: *(too)
"calorie rich with oh so
careful"
Nice music choice as well.
Linda
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Michael,
What a beautiful presentation you have!
Well, here you have me reading your poem
several times...;)
I agree with your lines here:
"no time...
to waste is sacrilegious "
this promise *(to) precious to miss" typo: *(too)
"calorie rich with oh so
careful"
Nice music choice as well.
Linda
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Thank you Dear....-smile-...i got an "o" thing going with this one...so one more will fit right in...you say the last "to" is a doublewide...? why wouldn'T be the first one...?...it seems to me it should be the first one...just a strong feeling...following familiy and what not....-headtilt-...are you sure...? -smile-...which one...I'm confused...ahhhh ha tell ME!....-smile-....love ya Michael
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I'm a middle kid and I'm sure your middle "to" is not wide enough:)
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ya know Linda I really wish you women would say whats on your mind the first time....-smile-...okay let me fix a to ...again...-tonguestuckout-...love-
