Tetractys-Merging Letters & Numbers
An ABC contest entry/Double Tetractys13 total reviews
Comment from I am Cat
Interesting form which lends itself to this ABC Tetractys form.
It's much more interesting than the regular five line form.
Well done.
One note:
I don't really think you need the article, "a" after the word
create. It speaks for itself and works well without it... are you just using it for the form? you could change the size of the font and make it interesting.... it would be larger, and fit in the space really well.. you could even make the word 'create' a different color, and/or font itself.
just a thought. ;)
well done and good luck in the contest!
Cat
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Interesting form which lends itself to this ABC Tetractys form.
It's much more interesting than the regular five line form.
Well done.
One note:
I don't really think you need the article, "a" after the word
create. It speaks for itself and works well without it... are you just using it for the form? you could change the size of the font and make it interesting.... it would be larger, and fit in the space really well.. you could even make the word 'create' a different color, and/or font itself.
just a thought. ;)
well done and good luck in the contest!
Cat
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Hi Cat,
The 'create' line has to be three syllables. Perhaps I'll play with it a bit more. :) You are right, I should go use the advanced editor and make the font bigger. I was rushing to make dinner lol (Thought James would be home, but he isn't yet, so here I am, back again!)
Thank you for all of your thoughts!
Kim
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ahhhh, I didn't think about the syllable... how about ... creative? I haven't gone back to see if that works?
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I went with creating :)
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awesome! ;)
Comment from lightink
Oh yes! You did exactly as stated in the poem! I love the reverse ABC at the end!
Did you actually create it "handwritten" first?
The only place that made me trio a bit is the word "poem". I pronounce it as two syllables but I know that not everyone does!
Lovely and actually educational :)!
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Oh yes! You did exactly as stated in the poem! I love the reverse ABC at the end!
Did you actually create it "handwritten" first?
The only place that made me trio a bit is the word "poem". I pronounce it as two syllables but I know that not everyone does!
Lovely and actually educational :)!
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Hi Lightink,
I'll rethink the word poem. It is listed both as 1 or 2 syllables, depending on what dictionary you choose. :) Thanks for pointing that out. It is always best not to muddy the waters, especially when trying to teach something new lol
Thanks!
Kim
Comment from Linda Engel
coll beans. I had to stop , read, and count then say my alphabet, and count on my fingers again but i think it came out perfect. Good one Kim. I don't even attempt to do something like this.
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reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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coll beans. I had to stop , read, and count then say my alphabet, and count on my fingers again but i think it came out perfect. Good one Kim. I don't even attempt to do something like this.
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Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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For whatever reason, when I was looking at the ABC contest the tetractys form just jumped in my head and this is where it ended up lol Thanks, Linda. I appreciate you taking the time to read and review.
Kim
