Works of Mercy
These are merciful ways to treat one another.36 total reviews
Comment from Joy Graham
I enjoyed this theme of mercy :) Lovely author notes about the seven mercies. I didn't know that before. We try to do those things, except visiting prisons.
Lovely poem that gets the heart in the right place and formulates plans in my mind of how I can participate too.
"his (advise) is hard work" - should this be advice?
Best wishes in the contest.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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I enjoyed this theme of mercy :) Lovely author notes about the seven mercies. I didn't know that before. We try to do those things, except visiting prisons.
Lovely poem that gets the heart in the right place and formulates plans in my mind of how I can participate too.
"his (advise) is hard work" - should this be advice?
Best wishes in the contest.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the heads up.
Comment from dmt1967
This poem shows some unsung heroes which people forgot. The elderly won us a war but are the first ones to be forgotten. We as a society have got to learn to look after the weak and sick but when the government can't be bothered... Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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This poem shows some unsung heroes which people forgot. The elderly won us a war but are the first ones to be forgotten. We as a society have got to learn to look after the weak and sick but when the government can't be bothered... Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 11-Feb-2016
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Thank you for you feedback
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello,
I like your poem about mercy and i think you have a good chance of winning this contest. Personally I believe mercy is very important in our lives. Good job!
gypsy
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Hello,
I like your poem about mercy and i think you have a good chance of winning this contest. Personally I believe mercy is very important in our lives. Good job!
gypsy
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your feedback
Comment from damommy
A very good message that we don't have to make a big splash to do helpful and merciful things.
I like the line "the importance of small." It carries a big impact.
Good job.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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A very good message that we don't have to make a big splash to do helpful and merciful things.
I like the line "the importance of small." It carries a big impact.
Good job.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your feedback.
Comment from LanceHill
Amen. Every detail you penned were excellent examples of mercy. God showed Hus mercy through His Son. We should let that mercy shine through us. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Amen. Every detail you penned were excellent examples of mercy. God showed Hus mercy through His Son. We should let that mercy shine through us. Thanks for sharing. God bless.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your feedback.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
A great inspiration to everyone to have mercy on others and a few ways how we could spread mercy to others who might need a little help.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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A great inspiration to everyone to have mercy on others and a few ways how we could spread mercy to others who might need a little help.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your insights.
Comment from c_lucas
Mercy has no price, but some find it very hard to give to those in need. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Mercy has no price, but some find it very hard to give to those in need. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your observation.
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You're welcome.
Comment from DonandVicki
I think that we need to see more spiritual poetry like yours on this website. It is obvious that you spent a lot of time on this work. Good use of rhyme that isn't forced.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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I think that we need to see more spiritual poetry like yours on this website. It is obvious that you spent a lot of time on this work. Good use of rhyme that isn't forced.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your encouraging comments.
Comment from Liberty Justice
LOVE THIS POEM. NOW this is what all People who call themselves Christians need to be doing regularly--helping the less fortunate. So me people homeless nit their fault. They lost jobs or significant workers with income and lost homes and couldn't find another good paying job. The Bible states "Faith without works is dead." So true! liberty justice
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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LOVE THIS POEM. NOW this is what all People who call themselves Christians need to be doing regularly--helping the less fortunate. So me people homeless nit their fault. They lost jobs or significant workers with income and lost homes and couldn't find another good paying job. The Bible states "Faith without works is dead." So true! liberty justice
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your good feedback.
Comment from Narvik
Hello, I'm not really the spiritual type, but I can see this poem transcends religion and gets down to the basic human element. Which I guess is a spiritual thing in its own right.
And you seem to go down this list of unsung heroes to establish the importance of their unselfishness, and the value this provides to humanity.
Yes, this poem stayed down to earth on this subject, which is hard to do. It's easy to get too flowery about love and peace and helping mankind, etc., but this was more real.
~ Jack
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Hello, I'm not really the spiritual type, but I can see this poem transcends religion and gets down to the basic human element. Which I guess is a spiritual thing in its own right.
And you seem to go down this list of unsung heroes to establish the importance of their unselfishness, and the value this provides to humanity.
Yes, this poem stayed down to earth on this subject, which is hard to do. It's easy to get too flowery about love and peace and helping mankind, etc., but this was more real.
~ Jack
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your encouragement.
