Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

I love your story about dainty fairies who are so tiny and cute. Playing winter games and snowball fights. Such lovely scene. Poet gives lively vivid descriptions.
liberty justice

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Comment from papa55mike

Excellent

This a well written poem and I love the rhyme.
We are almost at the season in Tennessee. Personally, I'm ready for warmer weather. I wish I had a six for you. Have a great day and God bless.
mike

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Comment from Eternal Muse

Excellent

This is such a great winter poem. Visuals hit the roof! Wonderful rhyming and cadence. This brought winter right into my living room?

Winter Fairies dance with care
Sending spells to warm the air
Soon to let the snow reside
Forming mulch to bring forth life

The only thing, the color scheme doesn't do this poem justice, in my opinion. I feel, it will be more complimentary with a blue background and darker text font. This is up to you, if course.

I really enjoyed this.

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Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I really like the imagery produced in this poem. It is vibrant and strong. The idea of the warring winter fairies is cool.

All the best
GMG

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

A nicely designed work, that works really well amidst descriptive prose and even timed rhyming. The winter theme is a consistently articulate and gives off a feeling of joy in a cold environment. The winter fairies theme is worked well with even meter and aabb rhyming, wel done, blessings, Roy

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Comment from Ricky1024

Excellent

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Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Very good another great addition to the winter fairy series again well written and well done. Thanks for sharing. have a wonderful day.

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Comment from c_lucas

Excellent

It has been my observation that Winter saves the worse weather toward the end. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very good read.

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Thanks for the comments. War is always the harshest of times.

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You're welcome, Dan. Charlie

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

The fight between the winter fairies and the warmer air is on. The fairies know their time is nearly over and try to keep the snow in place a little longer but eventually the warmer air will win.

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