A Taste of my Life
Fun with my cuisine21 total reviews
Comment from c_lucas
Each of us have a favorite food/dessert. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Each of us have a favorite food/dessert. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a very interesting read. Good luck in your contest.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Thank you Charlie.
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You're welcome, Amada. Charlie
Comment from Eric1
Hi Mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition my friend, a wonderful nonet compilation of couplets telling of your life through love and food, I truly wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Hi Mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition my friend, a wonderful nonet compilation of couplets telling of your life through love and food, I truly wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Thank you Eric for your continuous support to my work.
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Always a pleasure to read your work amada.
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Thank you for your support to my work.
Comment from Dean Kuch
Well, this was certainly an interesting way to incorporate food into a autobiographical story concerning your life, from Alpha to Omega, Mystery Writer. It's nice to know that food has become safer, an not altogether bland. Although slightly less savory I suspect, given your closing statement.
A very unique approach. Very straightforward, emotionally driven, and genuine.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Well, this was certainly an interesting way to incorporate food into a autobiographical story concerning your life, from Alpha to Omega, Mystery Writer. It's nice to know that food has become safer, an not altogether bland. Although slightly less savory I suspect, given your closing statement.
A very unique approach. Very straightforward, emotionally driven, and genuine.
Good luck in the contest.
~Dean
Comment Written 10-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Thank you Dean for your lovely and eloquent comments. And yes, genuine.
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Anytime, Amada. You're very welcome.
~Dean
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Anytime, Amada. You're very welcome.
~Dean
Comment from frogbook
Oh my. I love this. It is wonderful, clever, original and really quite genius. What a way to explain life and how I identify especially with the last line, now that I'm am growing older and not savoring it much. Excellent. Had I the power I would proclaim you the contest winner now-LOL.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Oh my. I love this. It is wonderful, clever, original and really quite genius. What a way to explain life and how I identify especially with the last line, now that I'm am growing older and not savoring it much. Excellent. Had I the power I would proclaim you the contest winner now-LOL.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thank you for this delightful review and your best wishes.
Comment from AnnaLinda
Author,
You surely have a unique approach to this Enjoyment of Eating contest and
I enjoyed every bite...I mean season...I mean entree ...no I meant to say
every word and every reflection and memory of what certain foods represent
to you. Very creative and a pleasure to read...for me it was those days of:
"Motherhood: roosting days with four kids under ten...cereal cartons, pepperoni pizza, plastic forks, and paper plates. Foods were frozen, parboiled, portable, and recyclable. My heart, however, was soaked in syrupy spoonful for winter colds, my hands, garnished with running noses. Love was grand. "
Want to tango?
Linda
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Author,
You surely have a unique approach to this Enjoyment of Eating contest and
I enjoyed every bite...I mean season...I mean entree ...no I meant to say
every word and every reflection and memory of what certain foods represent
to you. Very creative and a pleasure to read...for me it was those days of:
"Motherhood: roosting days with four kids under ten...cereal cartons, pepperoni pizza, plastic forks, and paper plates. Foods were frozen, parboiled, portable, and recyclable. My heart, however, was soaked in syrupy spoonful for winter colds, my hands, garnished with running noses. Love was grand. "
Want to tango?
Linda
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Want to tango, indeed...Those were my fave times as well, dear Linda. Thank you for your very "savored" comments.
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bon appetit
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
A enjoyed this piece. The writing was very warm and inviting. I liked the structure you employed for the piece. Somewhere between poetry and prose. Very effective.
Good luck in the contest.
GMG
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Hi there,
A enjoyed this piece. The writing was very warm and inviting. I liked the structure you employed for the piece. Somewhere between poetry and prose. Very effective.
Good luck in the contest.
GMG
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thank you for noticing the structure, poetry and prose. I couldn't decide...so I combined them. Freedom!
Comment from davisr (Rhonda)
A wonderful journey through the different stages of life and the food that became a part of those experiences. A lot of these images most of us can relate to, and smile with. Great job, and good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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A wonderful journey through the different stages of life and the food that became a part of those experiences. A lot of these images most of us can relate to, and smile with. Great job, and good luck in the contest,
Rhonda
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thank you Rhonda for your savvy comments and your best wishes.
Comment from Jeffers63
thank you for this interesting piece of the food throughout life. I love how you have tied them all together to give a sense of the history and the flow through you life. This is really fun and great entry, good luck in the contest.
Regards
Jeffers63
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reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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thank you for this interesting piece of the food throughout life. I love how you have tied them all together to give a sense of the history and the flow through you life. This is really fun and great entry, good luck in the contest.
Regards
Jeffers63
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Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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Thank you for reading my work and for the stars.
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
What analogy you have written. You have created a feast from childhood to growing old and many of us can identify with your sentiments. You have a great imagination, well done.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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What analogy you have written. You have created a feast from childhood to growing old and many of us can identify with your sentiments. You have a great imagination, well done.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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Thank you for your insightful comments.
Comment from Marykelly
You have chosen a very creative way to include the topic of food in your piece of non fiction. I love the set up of introducing the stages of your life and choosing the accompanying food for each stage. In addition you are able to introduce an emotional component to supplement the stage and the food. This is a very nicely crafted piece of non fiction that includes food. Well done
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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You have chosen a very creative way to include the topic of food in your piece of non fiction. I love the set up of introducing the stages of your life and choosing the accompanying food for each stage. In addition you are able to introduce an emotional component to supplement the stage and the food. This is a very nicely crafted piece of non fiction that includes food. Well done
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thank you Marykelly for the great understanding of my work in here. It was a labor of love to go back to those days and those emotions. It was well worth. Thank you!
