I've walked this road...
So I'll not walk in sad regret.102 total reviews
Comment from Deborah Marie
Well penned writing and nice artwork. Love your color scheme, progression, rhythm and airy flow. A job well done. Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming, Deb
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Well penned writing and nice artwork. Love your color scheme, progression, rhythm and airy flow. A job well done. Thanks for sharing and keep 'em coming, Deb
Comment Written 13-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Many thanks Deb, for these kind and gracious words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Deniz22
I've had many sad times in my life, I'd have to say I've been the cause of a great deal of them myself. But my life, when I look back, God has graciously repaired the broken walls of my existence, and somehow turned them around miraculously I have been a very fortunate and blessed man, and I am truly grateful to Him. (my testimony as well to His grace and faithfulness) Thanks Roy!
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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I've had many sad times in my life, I'd have to say I've been the cause of a great deal of them myself. But my life, when I look back, God has graciously repaired the broken walls of my existence, and somehow turned them around miraculously I have been a very fortunate and blessed man, and I am truly grateful to Him. (my testimony as well to His grace and faithfulness) Thanks Roy!
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Feb-2016
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Thanks so much Dennis, for these kind words and a lovely, gracious review, and God centred comments blessings, bro, Roy
Comment from Alan K Pease
We all have had our share of bumpy days so frequently that our poems often speak of this. You are a good man to read when we are puzzled why our mistakes and foibles trouble us for you always put them in perspective. Regards Alan
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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We all have had our share of bumpy days so frequently that our poems often speak of this. You are a good man to read when we are puzzled why our mistakes and foibles trouble us for you always put them in perspective. Regards Alan
Comment Written 11-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 14-Feb-2016
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Many thanks Alan, for these kind and gracious words and great review, blessings, Roy
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Many thanks Alan, for these kind and gracious words and great review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Roy
= This is such a heartfelt write.
= I believe we all have done things we regret, wish we could do over--differently.
= But, had we not gone through those trials--would we be the person we have become now?? I think not.
= I would not want to go back and repeat any of them, mind. Nay, I say!
= Such an excellent write, my friend.
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie <> Jax (*>*)
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Hi, Roy
= This is such a heartfelt write.
= I believe we all have done things we regret, wish we could do over--differently.
= But, had we not gone through those trials--would we be the person we have become now?? I think not.
= I would not want to go back and repeat any of them, mind. Nay, I say!
= Such an excellent write, my friend.
* Cheers & Blessings *
Keep Smilin'... Jackie <> Jax (*>*)
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 10-Feb-2016
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Thanks again, for this fantastic review and great comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
Hi royowen,
This is a very poignant poem which has a main thread of defiance to be celebrated. In the first verse I wonder if you could use this line instead: 'and sung many a sad song' for the rhyme to be complete. Thanks for sharing this! R
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Hi royowen,
This is a very poignant poem which has a main thread of defiance to be celebrated. In the first verse I wonder if you could use this line instead: 'and sung many a sad song' for the rhyme to be complete. Thanks for sharing this! R
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thanks, for this fantastic review and great comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from Eternal Muse
Another great poem. The author tells of the losses he experienced, and holding on to faith was the cure.
Your poems are spitually healing to me, and this one is no exception.
So I'll not walk in tears' regret
like flotsam lost at sea,
for loss is really gain to me
from burdens I am free.
Your poetry instills hope, and sheds light.
Thank you.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Another great poem. The author tells of the losses he experienced, and holding on to faith was the cure.
Your poems are spitually healing to me, and this one is no exception.
So I'll not walk in tears' regret
like flotsam lost at sea,
for loss is really gain to me
from burdens I am free.
Your poetry instills hope, and sheds light.
Thank you.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thanks, for this fantastic review and great comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from GWinterwin
Great poem Roy with good word flow, and rhyming. It tells such truth of not looking back, and shedding tears but being thankful for the burdens left behind. Good job my friend, thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Great poem Roy with good word flow, and rhyming. It tells such truth of not looking back, and shedding tears but being thankful for the burdens left behind. Good job my friend, thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 09-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thanks, my friend, for this fantastic review and great comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from duchessofdrumborg
"I've walked this road......" is an exceptionally-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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"I've walked this road......" is an exceptionally-written and spiritually-uplifting piece. It was a privilege to both read and review this talented poet's work.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thank you dear Duchess for these fantastic review, and supportive and very generous rating, blessings, Roy
Roy, as always you're more than welcome.
the Duchess
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You're still a peach Duchess.
Comment from GWHARGIS
Funny how you can read something at just the right time. Great rhythm. Your choice of words is flawless and moving. Great job. You made my night.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Funny how you can read something at just the right time. Great rhythm. Your choice of words is flawless and moving. Great job. You made my night.
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thanks Gretchen, they're the best reviews the ones that are needed, thank you for these fantastic words, blessings, Roy
Comment from Selina Stambi
Hello Roy,
One of the reasons I enjoy your poetry is the traditional form you use - rhyming verse. Your rhyme and metre, as always, are spot on,, a delight to read.
I've walked this road so many times
and sung those sad, sad songs; - lovely intro lines with a Jim Reeves feel to them.
for loss is really gain to me
from burdens I am free - amen, brother! Hallelujah!
Sonali
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Hello Roy,
One of the reasons I enjoy your poetry is the traditional form you use - rhyming verse. Your rhyme and metre, as always, are spot on,, a delight to read.
I've walked this road so many times
and sung those sad, sad songs; - lovely intro lines with a Jim Reeves feel to them.
for loss is really gain to me
from burdens I am free - amen, brother! Hallelujah!
Sonali
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Thanks, Sonali for this fantastic review and great comments, very timely, blessings, Roy
