The Wonder
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Comment from Carolyn 'Deaton' Stephens
Wonderful piece..
had to read it several times to let it sink in
then listened to song
read again
then repeated process
wish I had a six...
:-) Carolyn
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Wonderful piece..
had to read it several times to let it sink in
then listened to song
read again
then repeated process
wish I had a six...
:-) Carolyn
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Hi Carolyn...-smile-
thank you very much...this one comes from my special place. appreciate you enjoying....love Michael
Comment from DonandVicki
Your poem is well constructed and leaves a lot to every ones imagination which is what all good poetry should do. Exceptional graphics that enhance your work.
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Your poem is well constructed and leaves a lot to every ones imagination which is what all good poetry should do. Exceptional graphics that enhance your work.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Hi...-smile-
I thank you very much...very happy you enjoyed it. have a great night. love Michael
Comment from Leineco
This is a quite stirring love poem, my friend!
While focused on uniqueness of experience, it
speaks to the generic - allowing the reader the
luxury of polishing the imagery to suit his or
her own specifics.
I was particularly taken by
sightseeing impossible to recreate...
I contemplate how check dies to mate
catechism of beginning-
:-)
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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This is a quite stirring love poem, my friend!
While focused on uniqueness of experience, it
speaks to the generic - allowing the reader the
luxury of polishing the imagery to suit his or
her own specifics.
I was particularly taken by
sightseeing impossible to recreate...
I contemplate how check dies to mate
catechism of beginning-
:-)
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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-smile-...you are one of the best Poets on here...I want you to know ...I know that...-smile- thank you Sweet Lady....love Michael
Comment from Jumbo J
Hi Michael,
well-well-well my Brother, from first sight the into taste-- your words weaved the intrigue... the standout for me... once again your ability to play with words and sayings and come out totally original... no better for me than...
I contemplate how check dies to mate.
And of course I am a huge fan of the 'Sons', so the spliced clip went down a treat.
I really enjoyed this reading this fine creation... love is a strange and powerful drug... you know once you've had a taste and it sits in your psyche... no going back... no going forward... checkmate!
With our thoughts we create,
the connection to a good vintage,
James.
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Hi Michael,
well-well-well my Brother, from first sight the into taste-- your words weaved the intrigue... the standout for me... once again your ability to play with words and sayings and come out totally original... no better for me than...
I contemplate how check dies to mate.
And of course I am a huge fan of the 'Sons', so the spliced clip went down a treat.
I really enjoyed this reading this fine creation... love is a strange and powerful drug... you know once you've had a taste and it sits in your psyche... no going back... no going forward... checkmate!
With our thoughts we create,
the connection to a good vintage,
James.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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yea theres always one gem that makes a chest treasure...-smile- Hey Man...that poem Roy brought to life for you...wow. very special.
yea love that series...I didn't watch it when it was on...found it on utube....through the music. but I dont know that their way...is not the "only" way in this dog eat dog world....white wolf black wolf famished for dominance...till were all grey...-smile- love ya Bro....michael
Comment from Joan E.
I relished your love poem and cascading wine glass artwork. Your progression of "wine to grapevine" is compelling. And I was fascinated by the "train" references, especially since my son is a rail buff! Your "check dies to mate" is a neat wordplay and "catechism of beginnings" is quite evocative. Well done! Joan
8/15/16
I still can't get over the animation and cascading love poem. Cheers- Joan
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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I relished your love poem and cascading wine glass artwork. Your progression of "wine to grapevine" is compelling. And I was fascinated by the "train" references, especially since my son is a rail buff! Your "check dies to mate" is a neat wordplay and "catechism of beginnings" is quite evocative. Well done! Joan
8/15/16
I still can't get over the animation and cascading love poem. Cheers- Joan
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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you Know J...its moments like this that confirm life purpose and fill our bellies with the alfalfa male sprout of push forward. It is certainly satisfying to realize there still some who recognize scripture when they read it. I accept this this six star, proud to do so, and salute your wisdom great woman. Your friend forever, the warrior poet...love Michael
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Many salutes back, Warrior Poet! Here's to a weekend of pushing "forward"!! -Joan
Comment from Gloria ....
I always love your moving pictures, Michael. This bottomless glass of wine might not even be such a bad thing.
Love the grapevine allusion. Through the conversation of others we become alive in ways we never knew we could.
But then again we are simply a construct with instructions, how to organize and piece together the bits.
Yes indeed it is all a game, or as some would say, even a joke.
Wonderful free verse from your mind to keyboard dear Michael.
Exceptional!!
Gloria
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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I always love your moving pictures, Michael. This bottomless glass of wine might not even be such a bad thing.
Love the grapevine allusion. Through the conversation of others we become alive in ways we never knew we could.
But then again we are simply a construct with instructions, how to organize and piece together the bits.
Yes indeed it is all a game, or as some would say, even a joke.
Wonderful free verse from your mind to keyboard dear Michael.
Exceptional!!
Gloria
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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headscratch-....huh..? Gloria...c'mon kid....you got way more to say than this....-handtwirl...give it up.....whats really going on. "through the conversations of others we become alive" hmm...well talk to me...-smile-....love Michael
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What would you like to talk about dear Michael?
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well..-palmsout-..I...I can talk about anything...everything. but I was kind of curious what your review meant in ah poorer English if you dont mind mental illness...?
just curious thats all...always love Michael
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Sure then, let's talk about anything and everything. Which mental illness my dear as there are many as you well know. You begin.
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I'm sure I've had them all at one time or another...its ah ...dont matter...you pick one....I got it gorgeous...I got...-wink-
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All of them, Michael? Now I know of a least one fella who claimed he was afflicted with schizophrenia, depression, OCD, bipolar so we can begin there. Then of course there are all the personality disorders such as borderline, malignant narcissists and that sort. They are much harder to diagnose. Any particular person you are referring to?
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Let's talk about the narcissist one tonight...do you mind...? you have my full attention remarkably...-smile-...please...?
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Okay, shoot! First off, what do you know about the disorder?
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um...I think um a controlling need...sort of like you and this conversation. I've noticed you've never answered my first question...and I had to write that down...just so you know...Sweetheart are you calling me names...you looking for a highnoon...-headtilt- haha...now this is different...still interested-
Comment from I am Cat
mmmmm... unexpected booty shot... thank you for that, Dear Michael... ;)
it's been some time since I've had a booty here. ;)
So that was nice. lol
And so is your poem, I see a return of our Michael.. your last two poems seemed to be a slight departure from your regular style, but this is you to a T... well done, I like it either way... shows versatility... love the repeats at the end... brings it full circle... lovely.
meow
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reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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mmmmm... unexpected booty shot... thank you for that, Dear Michael... ;)
it's been some time since I've had a booty here. ;)
So that was nice. lol
And so is your poem, I see a return of our Michael.. your last two poems seemed to be a slight departure from your regular style, but this is you to a T... well done, I like it either way... shows versatility... love the repeats at the end... brings it full circle... lovely.
meow
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Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 06-Feb-2016
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Hey Purty...-smile-....ah well as said handtwirl- earlier today or something....I adimer men who can run around with no pants on and still maintain a certain dignity....oh...you're talking about the video. -shouldershrug- I...i hadn't noticed, I'm... I'm narcissistic. Did he look he could hold his own...? its not as easy as it looks without practice. -headshake- so.... my style...why what is my style Cat...? -smile-....ah I'm always me Babe- dependable as yesterdays tomorrow and new day sun...-smile-. I'm love Michael
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yes you certainly are... ;) your 'style' is this wonderful esoteric dreamy style writing that reaches into your soul and soothes you down easy... ;) mmmm...
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All hell Cat...aren't we all...you know when we join the line of perfect rhyme and serious writing sublime. aint nothing but a lil' competition Cat...dont ever get scared...-smile-
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Lol, scared?
I don't get scared... I get.... Tingly. ;)
