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Comment from royowen
Wine from the grape is like life from the blood, wihich carries the life force and nourishment, oxygen to to the cell, we need it for our very existence,not sure about the rest, as Christ is the life of the believer, so the instruction disobeyed is death's warning to the disobedient, well done Michael, a classical abstraction, with hidden gems in the narrative, well done, beautifully written and composed, blessings, Roy
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Wine from the grape is like life from the blood, wihich carries the life force and nourishment, oxygen to to the cell, we need it for our very existence,not sure about the rest, as Christ is the life of the believer, so the instruction disobeyed is death's warning to the disobedient, well done Michael, a classical abstraction, with hidden gems in the narrative, well done, beautifully written and composed, blessings, Roy
Comment Written 14-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Hey Roy...-smile-
yes I suppose this as well as many of my ..most meaningful thoughts....have Biblical reference and root. i've never taken anything more serious and...for granted, as God and me. or the one I wrote this for... sincerely Michael.
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Well done Michael
Comment from His Grayness
Nice work as always from this excellent writer and as always delivered in very unique and ponderable abstraction. I admit, losing the thread of meaning near the middle but (perhaps as intended) it caused me to re-read the work several times. many Thanks for the experience: HIS GRAYNESS
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
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Nice work as always from this excellent writer and as always delivered in very unique and ponderable abstraction. I admit, losing the thread of meaning near the middle but (perhaps as intended) it caused me to re-read the work several times. many Thanks for the experience: HIS GRAYNESS
Comment Written 13-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
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black and white...?........boy - girl....Venus and Mars....."differences make up perfect experience"....explains the "middle part"....-smile-...thanks...love Michael
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Thanks Michael! Much appreciated Vance
Comment from Mae 222
Nice video, picture a poem. Love the way the wine pours from the glass.
Very artistically done. Thank you for sharing it.
Blessings be yours.
Mae 222
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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Nice video, picture a poem. Love the way the wine pours from the glass.
Very artistically done. Thank you for sharing it.
Blessings be yours.
Mae 222
Comment Written 13-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 13-Aug-2016
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why thank you Mae...appreciate you enjoying this with me....-smile-...love Michael
Comment from AnnaLinda
Michael,
Congratulations for your poem of the month entry!
This is a special one. Of course your presentation
is brilliantly stunning and your music choice superb,
but your word pictures are intoxicating (pun intended)
and the depth and creativity is right up there.
Your repeating line is fantastic...Love your entire poem,
Linda
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Michael,
Congratulations for your poem of the month entry!
This is a special one. Of course your presentation
is brilliantly stunning and your music choice superb,
but your word pictures are intoxicating (pun intended)
and the depth and creativity is right up there.
Your repeating line is fantastic...Love your entire poem,
Linda
Comment Written 26-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 26-Mar-2016
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Hey you...-smile-..wondered where you were.
thank you sweets...it means a lot...appreciate your say so...love michael
Comment from RGstar
Hi, my friend. So glad to see you in the poem of the month.
I wrote a review thinking it was your work a while, but there will be a next time my friend, for you are deserved.
Best wishes,
RG
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2016
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Hi, my friend. So glad to see you in the poem of the month.
I wrote a review thinking it was your work a while, but there will be a next time my friend, for you are deserved.
Best wishes,
RG
Comment Written 24-Mar-2016
reply by the author on 24-Mar-2016
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Hey bro....listen man that you respect my words is more than expected and all I need....smile....you got my vote Poetry. Love michael
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you got mine my brother...you are all class
Comment from NicciFaye
THIS IS definitely vibrant and beautiful. I love the opening and closing stanza. The you align alive order my world like blood through veins is so dramatic but the analogy is uniquely worthy. Blood flooding through ones veins is a necessity as the are we breath. Also... Differences make up perfect experience.... Sweet like the wine to grapevine... This is definitely vibing piece. Love it!
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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THIS IS definitely vibrant and beautiful. I love the opening and closing stanza. The you align alive order my world like blood through veins is so dramatic but the analogy is uniquely worthy. Blood flooding through ones veins is a necessity as the are we breath. Also... Differences make up perfect experience.... Sweet like the wine to grapevine... This is definitely vibing piece. Love it!
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 09-Feb-2016
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Hey Nic...-smile- how are you Beauty...you havent written anything in a while now...you okay...? thank you sweetie....I was feeling this....love Michael
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Michael am doing well. I am trying to get a lot of things off my plate. I will inbox you later. Keep me in prayer please.
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yes Maam...-smile-
Comment from Ricky1024
blood through the veins seemingly gaya past experience of aggressive pain depression agony misery all seem to blend well with the glass of wine aight I know that you had a bad past experience of perhaps this is your pain coming out Mr Michael all I have a wonderful day and I hope you do have a happy valentines day I do have a female friend but we're still a bit but up to something with her
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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blood through the veins seemingly gaya past experience of aggressive pain depression agony misery all seem to blend well with the glass of wine aight I know that you had a bad past experience of perhaps this is your pain coming out Mr Michael all I have a wonderful day and I hope you do have a happy valentines day I do have a female friend but we're still a bit but up to something with her
Comment Written 08-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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well I aint had a lot a happy in my past...not that happy anyway. Hey Rick...-smile-...well I suppose all misery ends in the tipped rim of a glass...its tradition man...haha....this is my "truth" coming out Rick...truly the best of me. love Michael
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hi Michael I like the way you always in your messages out to my comments and reviews with love Michael it makes me feel good to know that even though we never met and we can view our pictures on the site that we're complete strangers I'm not sure your age but I'm sure you're not much younger or older than Jason Jason with it was born in 1984 so get back to me on that but its good that you think that I may have a person who loves me that I can call and consider my son over in England who has a lot of the same qualities in me at such a young age that I admire in myself something next Sunday is Valentine's Day here in United States and I go on dating sites and I tell these young women your age and younger all the same thing I have 4 beautiful daughters and I raised them well and I & I have to them the signs that say watch for the stay away from the wrong ones in to get attached to the right one so so even though you're not my daughter and you're not my son I would gladly give you that advice so perhaps your Valentine's Day even if you don't celebrate it in England is at your local church so what more can I say in the name of Jesus Christ amen 24 out
Comment from l.raven
HI Sweetie, it's beautiful...sometimes it just takes that one special someone....to make your world...a beautiful love poem...and your picture...mesmerising ...I love the color...brilliant...it's beautiful Michael...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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HI Sweetie, it's beautiful...sometimes it just takes that one special someone....to make your world...a beautiful love poem...and your picture...mesmerising ...I love the color...brilliant...it's beautiful Michael...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 07-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016
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Hey ya...-smile- why thank you Dear...yes, everyone of us can make someone special by loving them above us. you know my mother was never a Mother to me....I mean I'm not crying...way past that now...I understand um her why...figured it out along time ago.
but I still would put her before me...if a need were asked of me. I still wish with pain we had been different....that we didn't miss what we didn't make special. Anyway cheer up buddy....-smile- love Michael
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you cheer up as well...took a break...LOL...over now...smile you...love Linda xxoo
Comment from amada
Oh that bottle of red wine is very telling..." order my world like blood through veins" sort of makes me dizzy. Delightful work dear friend. Are you sure you don't have a glass of red wine by your side?
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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Oh that bottle of red wine is very telling..." order my world like blood through veins" sort of makes me dizzy. Delightful work dear friend. Are you sure you don't have a glass of red wine by your side?
Comment Written 07-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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Hi....-smile- ha...naw...this wine is alive inside me without blush of shame....this wine is Holy...mine. But I'll pour out some more and pray she wakes up. love you Lady...michael
Comment from PoemsOfDD
Reconciled - Wow!! What a fantastic picture. I love it. Your poem too is just as interesting and profound as the photo. It is a very reflective piece of love poetry having more meaning with every read.
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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Reconciled - Wow!! What a fantastic picture. I love it. Your poem too is just as interesting and profound as the photo. It is a very reflective piece of love poetry having more meaning with every read.
Comment Written 06-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 08-Feb-2016
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Why thank you very much...-smile- Amen...its full of two lives meant to be. you ever all the sudden get this ah feeling that you've forgotten something....well some people feel that way forever...-smile-....love Michael
