The Wonder
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Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
This is simply you, Michael. You want the wine, but to have that, you need the vine, you must have both or you have nothing. Very simple summery of one person needing another. Together they are (mostly) perfect. Divided, what is the point? You truly are a poet at heart, my dear friend. Love you loads. xxx Sandy
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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This is simply you, Michael. You want the wine, but to have that, you need the vine, you must have both or you have nothing. Very simple summery of one person needing another. Together they are (mostly) perfect. Divided, what is the point? You truly are a poet at heart, my dear friend. Love you loads. xxx Sandy
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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Hey...-smile-
perfect is hard to recreate...believe me.
how are you...? Ian...?
I heard about the test results...
you know I've been thinking...we all have to transitions from this life to the real world. when...is not ours. Does prayer work to save this life...yes....but only for a time.
do you think Jacob prayed to God for the life of his son Joseph....when his brothers lied and deceived for jealous love. I know he did in mournful separation. but as we find there was reason. I dont know the why for ah the way things happen...but I trust He does. I sure hope you're okay Sandy...
this life is but many memories in the next. love you Michael
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We are doing okay, Michael, I've just been to the hospital again with Ian. I told him he should move in permanently, he laughed. It's going to be a long process from the looks of it, but just so long as he is with us for a while longer, we are not complaining. Thank you, you are so sweet, asking. I doubt I'll ever get to meet you in this life, but I'm going to make a date to catch up with you when we meet up top! (I'm hoping I'll be accepted, of course. :) Always love you, my dear friend, you have a special corner in my heart. xxx Sandy.
Comment from dmt1967
Have you won, poem of the month? If so, congratulations, and if it is still being judged... good luck and you should win with this one. I did enjoy the wine to grapevine line. Thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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Have you won, poem of the month? If so, congratulations, and if it is still being judged... good luck and you should win with this one. I did enjoy the wine to grapevine line. Thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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yes...yes I did...back in the early 1800's I sure did. "innocence slaughtered"...all it did was give em' ideas....-headshake-....fans go figure. Anyhoo....this is one of my many nominated since...Attila the hun moved into hearts. -smile-...but I'm very happy you enjoyed this with me...cigarette...? love Michael
Comment from DR DIP
I love this song it has wonderful words that compliment your wonderful poem perfectly I love the accompanying image and your poem set out. thanks for sharing
dip
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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I love this song it has wonderful words that compliment your wonderful poem perfectly I love the accompanying image and your poem set out. thanks for sharing
dip
Comment Written 16-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 16-Aug-2016
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Hey Doc....good to sede you...-smile-....I'm dying.
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Huh? Dying? I hope that this is just metaphorical
dip
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I hit the button to soon...tic tic tic...whoops....-smile-..ah just my opening...its kinda funny right...your doc Dip...and I'm glad to see you cause ...well I'm dying. haha....ah well try my material out here before gazebo at wal-mart...haha
Comment from Mystic Angel 7777
WOW!! Congratulations on being nominated for poem of the month - that is quite an accomplishment for the spiritual genre. I thought this wonderful and very uplifting as I tend to see my personal connection with God as a branch on His wonderful vine of life, love, and joy. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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WOW!! Congratulations on being nominated for poem of the month - that is quite an accomplishment for the spiritual genre. I thought this wonderful and very uplifting as I tend to see my personal connection with God as a branch on His wonderful vine of life, love, and joy. Nicely done and I thank you very much for sharing it.
Comment Written 15-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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yea yea yea...thanks...I get nominated all the time...just not the votes....-smile-...well yes it is spiritual to me. glad you enjoyed a glimpse of my Cathedral...love Michael
Comment from Lisa Deverick
I love this! Your words would make for an awesome song. You have wonderful wordage throughout making this a very enjoyable read. well one
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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I love this! Your words would make for an awesome song. You have wonderful wordage throughout making this a very enjoyable read. well one
Comment Written 15-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Hey Ninja...-smile-
ha...yea me too...its a personal favorite. well thank you Lisa...hope youre doing well. love Michael
Comment from Thomas Bowling
Great writing, but I've come to expect nothing less. I see that you are a Son's of Anarchy fan. My wife and I are bikers and were heart broke when they took it off the air. Two Broke Girls is still on, but Son's of Anarchy is gone. Go figure.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Great writing, but I've come to expect nothing less. I see that you are a Son's of Anarchy fan. My wife and I are bikers and were heart broke when they took it off the air. Two Broke Girls is still on, but Son's of Anarchy is gone. Go figure.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Hi Tom...-smile-
ah well thanks, that sounds better than "must you make us suffer this"....ah just a lil' love note I received from a fan recently....she's a Darling. love Michael
Comment from Dean Kuch
In vino veritas, Michael, which translated to English from the Latin means, In wine there is truth.
We are all as uniquely and individually made as is the intricate structure of a single snowflake. We are all different, in other words, with different experiences, likes and dislikes, and opinions.
Some like red wine, others enjoy white.
But aren't those differences what makes living life so wonderfully interesting?
Well done, Michael.
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
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In vino veritas, Michael, which translated to English from the Latin means, In wine there is truth.
We are all as uniquely and individually made as is the intricate structure of a single snowflake. We are all different, in other words, with different experiences, likes and dislikes, and opinions.
Some like red wine, others enjoy white.
But aren't those differences what makes living life so wonderfully interesting?
Well done, Michael.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
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ya know I saw the picture first and was hoping you were a girl...-frown-...well I hope its expensive Dean...I'm certainly not gonna piss the night away on that cheap shit...-smile-...ah thanks, good to see ya.
yes indeed same patterns tend to creative Stepford wives after while...even out of men. its not a pretty sight....so indeed variety is blessing not curse. love Michael
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Hahaha,
You're very welcome, Michael.
Anytime.
~Dean :}
Comment from Bill O'Bier
Excellent use of words and music. The artwork provided certainly compliments the theme. Thanks for sharing and good luck in this contest..
Wishing you all the best--
Bill~
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
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Excellent use of words and music. The artwork provided certainly compliments the theme. Thanks for sharing and good luck in this contest..
Wishing you all the best--
Bill~
Comment Written 14-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
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Alright a man with Exceptional taste....hey Bill...-smile-....appreciate you enjoying this with me. its one I hold Dear. love Michael
Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
Hi reconciled,
If I am correct, this is a tribute to wine int he guise of a lover or perhaps it is vice versa? Either way, this is rich in imagery and I wish you all the best in the contest! R
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
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Hi reconciled,
If I am correct, this is a tribute to wine int he guise of a lover or perhaps it is vice versa? Either way, this is rich in imagery and I wish you all the best in the contest! R
Comment Written 14-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 14-Aug-2016
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Hey Man...-smile-....ah its what...makes you remember...very special. you cant have wine without the grapevine ....its about completely different needing each other to be complete...its about finding that need finally met from a sea of maybe....its about missing it now. ...love Michael..
Comment from barbara.wilkey
I can easily see what this poem was chosen to be an entry for the poem of the month contest. The flow and the descriptions are well done.
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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I can easily see what this poem was chosen to be an entry for the poem of the month contest. The flow and the descriptions are well done.
Comment Written 14-Aug-2016
reply by the author on 15-Aug-2016
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Hi Barbara...-smile-
why thank you...I'm fond of it too...love to you...Michael
