Comment from Janet Foor

Excellent

Lovely mono rhyme and near rhyme in your cloud poem. Vivid imagery throughout with a wonderful message.

Blessings
Janet

 Comment Written 07-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Hope you had a great weekend!

Comment from bayoupoet

Excellent

this is a very well written poem. It has good rhyme, rhythm and flow. I have written a poem or two with each line rhyming. It's not as easy as it looks. I enjoyed reading for you.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Hope you had a great weekend!

Comment from Treischel

Excellent

You captured the pure essence of that image, making this an ekphrastic poem. All the ekements were there; the clouds, the wind, the ocean. Nicely written using mono- rhymed quatrains, you gave it a lovely spiritual theme. Nicely done.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Hi Tom, Thanks so much for the excellent review and your exceptional comments. Hope you had a great weekend!

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

I like this one very good the relation between clouds and God. Great job and a great write. Good luck and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 06-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 07-Feb-2016

Thank you so much for the excellent review and your great comments. Hope you had a great weekend!

Comment from Lynn27

Excellent

I loved this little poem, and I just adored the photo. Your words were fun, and full of emotion too. There was serious side to your poem about finding God.

 Comment Written 05-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016

Thank you so much for the excellent review and your exceptional comments. I am so glad you enjoyed the poem.
Have a great weekend!