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Comment from Eric1
Hi Micheal, I absolutely loved this brilliant moments of reverence poem, written beautifully in free verse it has a lovely flow and good rhythm my friend.
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016
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Hi Micheal, I absolutely loved this brilliant moments of reverence poem, written beautifully in free verse it has a lovely flow and good rhythm my friend.
Comment Written 04-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016
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Hey Eric...-smile-...thank you Sir. Appreciate you enjoying it.Have a great day....love michael
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My pleasure Micheal
Comment from l.raven
Michael, May you stay in the arms of the angels...I love this song...
God granted patience to collect thoughts
priceless gold of treasured awareness
cautious does a victor life approach next...
always in your own words Michael...I don't know how in your mind you put them together...but they come out brilliant...like no other...
very well written baby...and a great video...love Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016
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Michael, May you stay in the arms of the angels...I love this song...
God granted patience to collect thoughts
priceless gold of treasured awareness
cautious does a victor life approach next...
always in your own words Michael...I don't know how in your mind you put them together...but they come out brilliant...like no other...
very well written baby...and a great video...love Linda xxoo
Comment Written 04-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016
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Thank you Linda...I know you mean that.
and I love you for loving me so much....-smile-
did you know everyday somewhere another warrior poet exits stage left...our turn. love Michael
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love you too Michael...and I do...it's a strange world we live in you...talk later...love Linda xxoo
Comment from Ricky1024
review coming from a lg android phone on a jitney in Atlantic City heading to Ballys nice work here Mr Michael you know a Charles Tyrwhitt in the England I saw her $200 worth of shirts 3 shirts from them yesterday with monogram divorce read your piece until little vague kind of hard to figure out what exactly you're talking about
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016
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review coming from a lg android phone on a jitney in Atlantic City heading to Ballys nice work here Mr Michael you know a Charles Tyrwhitt in the England I saw her $200 worth of shirts 3 shirts from them yesterday with monogram divorce read your piece until little vague kind of hard to figure out what exactly you're talking about
Comment Written 03-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016
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Hey Rick...-smile T-shirts huh...well good deal, i'm glad it worked out. ...-smile- well....yea it is kinda hard to figure out...this life and death thing. I suppose its about trying to walk right, believing when you dont see it, its about being bound to your own conscious...I think. . -smile- Be careful out there Rick. love Michael
Comment from Liberty Justice
Seems costly mistakes cause many people. This crossing guard is real superstitious. Every time comes to crack in sidewalk or street he stops. He's afraid step on it. liberty justice
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016
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Seems costly mistakes cause many people. This crossing guard is real superstitious. Every time comes to crack in sidewalk or street he stops. He's afraid step on it. liberty justice
Comment Written 03-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016
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Do you think the "good" samaritan....hesitated, um thought about what if... he didn't help the "man" of his enemy. I think so...I think he had to try , or forever live with the wonder if he should have. It not always easy to "do right"...infact...its probably always harder...while we live in flesh in constant need of superficial food. love Michael
Comment from I am Cat
Hello Sweet Michael...
I love your repeating tercet:
frozen frames silent moments...
cross guard stopped in tracks
lest footfall on that one missed crack
that brings back so many memories and maybe even a poem or two.. ;)
thanks for that. Well done, I really liked this.
Do you know why this is so HUGE on the page? the poem in the background is so big that your profile pic and blurb are OVER it... like it's out of sync...
odd... I've only seen one other person's do that... Gloria's... like it doesn't fit.
Anyway, just something I noticed.
Good to see you, handsome... are you doing better?
;)
*gentle hugs*
Cat
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
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Hello Sweet Michael...
I love your repeating tercet:
frozen frames silent moments...
cross guard stopped in tracks
lest footfall on that one missed crack
that brings back so many memories and maybe even a poem or two.. ;)
thanks for that. Well done, I really liked this.
Do you know why this is so HUGE on the page? the poem in the background is so big that your profile pic and blurb are OVER it... like it's out of sync...
odd... I've only seen one other person's do that... Gloria's... like it doesn't fit.
Anyway, just something I noticed.
Good to see you, handsome... are you doing better?
;)
*gentle hugs*
Cat
Comment Written 03-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
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Well Gloria and I ...well... we went to the ...the "other" school. -shouldershrug-...thats where they put the "odd" and "out sync" back in the day Cat. We dont like to talk about it too much so...lets keep this between us K...? ah haha...why whatever are you talking about Kitten...looks like Pulitzer on my end.
am I'm doing better...hm...ah...than who...? lol...thanks. love Michael
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you said you had 'hurt' yourself last we spoke.
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No...I said..."i have"...and havent we all...or something like that. No I'm fine...I'm Bruce Willis remember...-wink-
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Ohhhh... so you've lost all that gorgeous red hair? :( lol ;)
that's ok, I like bald men too. ;)
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no...no I still got it...its just rearranged now...someday I'll let you brush my back...hows that.....lol
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ROFL... I once knew a man, he wanted me to shave his back... I told him find a new barber. LOL ;)
lol
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well as far as I know I dont need you to just yet.....but ..ya know purty if the time ever did arrive...I...I'd like to think you'd be there for me...-smile-...will talk about it later...gimmie a big bear squeeze....haha
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((((((((((((((( mwah )))))))))))))))
not too much of a bear squeeze... you know how strong bears are. ;) lol
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well its a musk scent I've been working on...its supposed to drive the woman crazy..c'mere...
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*wrinkles nose*
I'm not a fan of musk... musk we? ;)
Comment from Joan E.
Another eye-catching and dramatic presentation. I especially liked your "tightrope" metaphor and alliteration of "c's". Here's to "patience"! Big hugs- Joan
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
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Another eye-catching and dramatic presentation. I especially liked your "tightrope" metaphor and alliteration of "c's". Here's to "patience"! Big hugs- Joan
Comment Written 03-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 03-Feb-2016
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you know I appreciate you putting up with my mood swings J....if patience is a virtue...you're virgin mary....haha...love Michael
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Hardly, on both scores! I've finally gone back to half of my classes--the bronchitis left me with enough energy to do only one event per day. Take good care of yourself. More hugs- Joan
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well, cough that crap out we got to get back at it...-ouch-...hey...i was just kidding. haha...if only it were that easy or I was your personal trainer.....lol...love-
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If only... Endless hugs- Joan
