Comment from Joy Graham

Excellent

Ohhhhh that picture looks delicious :) At first I thought it was a fruity cocktail, but when I saw the contest calling for a chocolate theme, mmmmmm. I can't imagine what is in that cup, but I'd drink it or eat it all up just knowing it's chocolate lol!

I'm going on vacation next month and look forward to fruity cocktails with dinners :)

Best wishes to you in this contest.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016

Thank you so much. I'm pleased that you liked it.

Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

Yummie makes me want to run out and buy one if I weren't so broke. Writer wants to look other way. Probably worried about calories. liberty justice

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016

Thank you so much.

Comment from Sambangi

Excellent

True, why anybody will not be tempted if you show such nice thing to eat. :) sweet words with perfect count of syllables. Wish you all the best in the contest

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016

Thank you so much.

Comment from MacMhuirich

Excellent

What a feast to enjoy, good wording and excellent art, this is an appetising entry for the 5-7-5 chocolate contest, can I put a bid in for the model when the contest is finished? Best wishes for the contest.
Bless you
John

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016

Ach, what you don't do for a wee sweet. Thanks a lot for this, and as for the bid. We'll see. :))

Comment from Ben Colder

Excellent

Amazing what a little drink can move the mind into whatever. You paint an awareness of a special moment in only a very words. Well done. Hope the best in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016

Thank you so much.

Comment from misscookie

Excellent

Mm.. I love the artwork that you choose to go with your write.
You captured my attention twice, first by the artwork than by your words .
Oh yes, it's to late for me to look away I just gain three pounds.
Have a nice day
Cookie

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016

Thank you so much for this sweet review. :))

reply by misscookie on 04-Feb-2016

It was my pleasure.
Cookie

Comment from scd41

Excellent

Your 5-7-5 entry on chocolate with a tempting picture is a sweet delight. Even for senior citizens like me, the very word chocolate tickles taste buds instantly so much so that it caused a writer's block for me. I wished to enter this contest but could not. Best of luck to you in the contest.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016

Thank you so much. What a shame that was that you didn't enter. Just a bit of fun. :))

Comment from danpald

Excellent

The eye captures the delight
So turn away is always right
For the temptation of the chocolate
Makes the eye ever a culprit

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016

Thanks for this wee poem. Very nice. :))

Comment from Eric1

Excellent

Hi mystery author, this is a really good entry for this particular competition, wonderful well written words that describe the overpowering magic of chocolate beautifully, I wish you the very best of luck in the contest my friend.

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016

Hi there, thank you so very much.

reply by Eric1 on 05-Feb-2016

You are welcome my friend.

Comment from Jacqueline1616

Excellent

LOL. It almost sounds like you're resisting another person. It's a bit the same, trying hard not to look at some gorgeous young guy. Now if he were covered in chocolate. Anyway, I liked it. Thanks for sharing it.
Jackie

 Comment Written 04-Feb-2016

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reply by the author on 04-Feb-2016

Good for you, you are the first and only to see the double meaning in this. That was exactly my intention. And you naughty thing. If he was covered in chocolate indeed! Yum! Thanks a lot for this great review.

reply by Jacqueline1616 on 05-Feb-2016

LOL!! I guess great minds think alike... or was that dirty minds. Ha ha.
Jackie