Comment from Dawn of Tomorrow

Excellent

I guess that could have just as easily said left wing, eh? That's a good one. I don't usually care for these short poems but now and again I find one I like. Good luck in the contest

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Tried left; it did not evoke enough thought. The right is filled with many macho egg heads. So guess who?? What got me started was "right wing king' it was the only thing I could come up with where two rhyming words together did not sound awkward. I just read your bio. So what is the name of your book. Your story is inspiring. Thanks for the read

reply by Dawn of Tomorrow on 27-Jan-2016

Pastel Colored Dreams, Black Ink Realities, that is the name of my book

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Bought your book on amazon used and signed. Thanks

reply by Dawn of Tomorrow on 27-Jan-2016

Wow, I'm touched. I think that one was actually personalized for a friend of mine, when he passed away his family gave that book away. It might be quite personalized in that signing.

Comment from Neonewman

Excellent

LOL! Quite a bit said in this little well crafted 1-6-1 poem you have entered. I am sure everyone will know exactly who your referring to! Best of luck in the voting.
God bless!
Steve

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Blessings count thanks for the read . hope you had a smile

reply by Neonewman on 27-Jan-2016

Definitely had a smile!

reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Thanks that pleases me

reply by Anonymous Member on 31-Jan-2016

Definitely had a smile!

Comment from Judvan2

Excellent

Good poem for the contest. Will the answer be displayed? You're right, fun to do these little poems and try to squeeze as much in them as possible. You've done it! Good luck in the contest.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

I don't know who it is. The poem is an evoker. The way it developed is I was having problems putting two words together that rhyme. then right wing king popped in. I guess i could have used left wing king. but it would not have had the ring. Thanks for the read

Comment from PoemsOfDD

Excellent

This is a good entry into the 1-6-1 writing prompt contest. A limited number of syllables allowed - 8 - but you have managed to write a statement that rhymes sharing subtle political views. Well done and best of luck in the competition.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Thanks for the read and comment

Comment from Pyrrho

Excellent

I was about to complement you on your rhyming this one, but I see it is in the rules of this competition. You did a fine job of conforming to the rules.

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 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Thanks for the read.. This was harder than i thought it would be.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

I guessed but I was way wrong. I picked a queen. Lol. Great one in so few words. You captured every bit of the prompt and then some.

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 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Thanks Hope you had a smile. It is an interesting time

reply by foxangie123 on 27-Jan-2016

Huge Smile..