Comment from acerisestory

Excellent

So well said in so few words, Mystery Poet! Hmmm. It's a thoughtful and impactful write. You are referring to our friend, Trump. Yes?

Your rhyming and syllable count are perfect, and your 'satori' is a clever (and scary) surprise.

Well done! Best of luck in the contest! Alana

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thanks for the read comment and good wishes.

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

A well written 1/6/1 poem with a rhyming message. Well done. I read this as a rhyme about a prominent sport's person but I have no idea who. Be interested to know. Good luck in the contest. Regards Dorothy

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

No one in mind. just had to get two words next to each other to rhyme. wing and king did. that drove the poem Thanks for the read' comment and good wishes

Comment from dmt1967

Excellent

Ok, what king lol. This is a short but fun poem. I liked the way it asks a question in the title and didn't give the answer in the poem. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 29-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Glad you had a bit of fun... Thanks for the read comment and good wishes

Comment from MidnightReicheru

Excellent

I like this 1-6-1 poem quite a bit. I'm not sure who you're referring to but I have an idea and I guess things like this are really up to interpretation. Good luck in the contest and good job. :)

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

I am glad you liked it. I was not referring to anyone.. You could fill in the blank.. the hard part of writing this poem was to get two rhyming words next to each other to rhyme and flow. wing and king worked so I wrote the poem around them.
Thanks for the read comment and good wishes.

Comment from Cheryl9359

Excellent

I really like your poem, it is cute, and a very good 1-6-1 poem. I tried to do this but I was horrible with the rhyming part! You did a great job!

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

The rhyming was the hard part. trying to get two words next to each other to rhyme and flow was the challenge. wing and king worked so I wrote the poem around them. thanks for your kind comments

Comment from Mai Mai

Excellent

This is an interesting piece. It says a lot with so little. Depending on how you see it, it could refer to several different people. Good job and good luck.

Mai Mai

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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Thanks for the read comment and good wishes

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Very good it works it fits, a great entry in the prompt. fits well good thought. good luck in the contest and have a wonderful day.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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Thanks for your kind comments and good wishes

Comment from DonandVicki

Excellent

I have never tried a 1-6-1 poem but you seem to have packed some meaning into so few words. Good construction and I wish you luck with this one.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016

Thanks for the read comment and good wishes

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

It could be Trump or Cruz, depending on one's personal choice. Regardless, I enjoyed your mono-verse rhyme and timeliness of this tiny poem. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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Comment from royowen

Excellent

If I was to take a guess, although I'm Australian, I would have to say it's Donald Trump, but you may well have someone else in mind. Well done with this 1/6/1 poetry entry in this contest, good one, well done, good luck, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

I really don't know. the verse came from trying to have two words in a rhyme that were together. thats where "right wing King" came from. it was all that i could think of that was not awkward. Thanks for the review. thanks for the Blessings
Stay blessed

reply by royowen on 27-Jan-2016

Thanks for the tip.