Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I liked your selection of the symmetrical image in the artwork to compliment your theme. Your addition of the word "harmoniously" makes your message about love in this tiny form even more meaningful. Best wishes in the contest- Joan

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Thank you for the five stars and the comment about the word harmoniously."

Comment from arelby

Excellent

I think you have done about as well as can be done with the guidelines given. You have said in 15 words what others have used up a novel trying to express.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Thank you for the five stars and the encouraging comment.

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

Very good and very well written a great little love poem in just 15 words. Good luck in the contest. have a wonderful evening.

 Comment Written 28-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Thank you for your five stars and comment about my love poem. Thanks for wishing me good luck.

Comment from AnnaLinda

Excellent

Poet,

You've chosen your words strategically to accomplish your goal and you were very successful! I like your idea of symmetrical beauty - love seen within each other and reflecting it back to the other. Living in harmonious love.

Your photo choice is a perfect accompaniment to your beautiful poem and entry.

Thanks so much for entering the contest!
Linda

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment about "... reflecting love back to the other ...."
I saw a heart and how it is the same on both sides and looked it up and it is symmetrical.

reply by AnnaLinda on 28-Jan-2016

Interesting.

reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

May I clear this up further, I was
looking at the geometric shapes
not our beating heart that is in our bodies and saw how both sides are the same.

reply by AnnaLinda on 28-Jan-2016

Yes:)

Comment from busses

Good

I love this piece! I've also found the similar strive for the others attention the hardest part of a relationship. This is a well done piece and relatable to the reader.

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 Comment Written 26-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Thank you for the four stars and the comment about being relatable to the reader.

Comment from foxangie123

Excellent

Gosh, I love this. The picture matches perfectly to your lines. It is magically great and as of now, I really hope you win. This is so sweet and heart warming.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Thank you for the five stars and the comment of encouragement.

Comment from RooBoo

Excellent

This was something I believe I needed to read right about now. This was a great reminder to me. Thank you so much for sharing!

 Comment Written 23-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016

Thank you for the five stars and comment.

Comment from Pyrrho

Excellent

I make an assessment of the subject poem as excellent but I do detect a bit more of the 'need' aspect of love than the 'enjoy' aspect of same.

I do not wish to be needed ... I wish to be enjoyed.

Need kills love.

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 Comment Written 23-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 23-Jan-2016

Thanks for the five stars and comment. I will review what I had. I was looking at the word symmetrical.