The Heart
A harmonious love affair.28 total reviews
Comment from w.j.debi
This is so well constructed. To borrow your words:
a symmetrical beauty-
Everything about your presentation is well formed. The verse is beautifully written, the chose of the artwork compliments it, and your formatting is spot on. Well done.
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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This is so well constructed. To borrow your words:
a symmetrical beauty-
Everything about your presentation is well formed. The verse is beautifully written, the chose of the artwork compliments it, and your formatting is spot on. Well done.
Comment Written 25-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 26-Feb-2016
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Thank you for taking the time to review my work and giving me the five stars and nice comment.
Comment from TallySally
The wisdom in your poem is irrefutable. Some people say TRUE LOVE. I'd rather say LOVE ROOTED IN THE LORD. Just like everything else in life, there is only one way things hold together and/or make any sense. Having Jesus at the center.
Your phrasing is very good, your choice of words immaculate, and your wisdom beautifully shared.
I also love the image - especially the little reflected heart between the swans' beaks.
(my interpretation follows)
God's Mysterious Will - Through Christ, God purposed to bring all earthly and heavenly things, regardless of the time of existence, together under Christ's Lordship!
Ephesians 1:9-10
God bless and my best,
Relda
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2016
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The wisdom in your poem is irrefutable. Some people say TRUE LOVE. I'd rather say LOVE ROOTED IN THE LORD. Just like everything else in life, there is only one way things hold together and/or make any sense. Having Jesus at the center.
Your phrasing is very good, your choice of words immaculate, and your wisdom beautifully shared.
I also love the image - especially the little reflected heart between the swans' beaks.
(my interpretation follows)
God's Mysterious Will - Through Christ, God purposed to bring all earthly and heavenly things, regardless of the time of existence, together under Christ's Lordship!
Ephesians 1:9-10
God bless and my best,
Relda
Comment Written 19-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 19-Feb-2016
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Thanks for your five stars and moving comment. I will surely read Ephesians 1:9-10.
Spiritually you are correct, to have Jesus as the center of your life is the best thing anyone can do.
May God bless you as well.
Comment from acerisestory
What a lovely idea, mystery poet! I'd never thought of being in love as a "symmetrical beauty," but it certainly needs to have symmetry to
work well.
Your well chosen words have a wonderful flow, and your fine use
of imagery is a great addition.
I love your stunning presentation (the geese and black letters on the red background).
This is a strong entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck! Alana
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016
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What a lovely idea, mystery poet! I'd never thought of being in love as a "symmetrical beauty," but it certainly needs to have symmetry to
work well.
Your well chosen words have a wonderful flow, and your fine use
of imagery is a great addition.
I love your stunning presentation (the geese and black letters on the red background).
This is a strong entry for the contest. I wish you the best of luck! Alana
Comment Written 18-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 18-Feb-2016
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Thanks for the five stars and the wonderful comment about symmetry beauty.
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You are welcome! Alana
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You are welcome! Alana
Comment from TAB_that's me
This is a wonderful love poem in only 15 words. You wrote it perfectly. It has so much meaning to it. Good luck in the contest.
teresa
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016
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This is a wonderful love poem in only 15 words. You wrote it perfectly. It has so much meaning to it. Good luck in the contest.
teresa
Comment Written 05-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016
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Thank you very much for your five stars and your comment.
Comment from Caressa_08
FS needs to be giving out more 6's as this truly deserves to be granted the highest star available..Beautiful presentation.... Everything is in unison, the title, description, beautiful photo & your romantic poetry reads as from a someone who possesses a gift of knowing how to use the right words when.
Best Wishes...Caressa_08
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016
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FS needs to be giving out more 6's as this truly deserves to be granted the highest star available..Beautiful presentation.... Everything is in unison, the title, description, beautiful photo & your romantic poetry reads as from a someone who possesses a gift of knowing how to use the right words when.
Best Wishes...Caressa_08
Comment Written 05-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016
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I want to thank you for the five stars and the comment that is so wonderful to read.
Comment from dragonpoet
A nice short definition of love that is illustrated with this picture that definatels shows symetrical beauty and love.
Good luck in the contest.
dragonpoet
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016
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A nice short definition of love that is illustrated with this picture that definatels shows symetrical beauty and love.
Good luck in the contest.
dragonpoet
Comment Written 05-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 05-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the five stars comment about the symmetric in the poem as well as the picture.
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You're welcome.
Joan
Comment from kiwisteveh
It is true that real love demands a balance or symmetry between partners, give and take on both sides. The picture of the two swans perfectly illustrates this and of course swans themselves mate for life, making it doubly appropriate.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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It is true that real love demands a balance or symmetry between partners, give and take on both sides. The picture of the two swans perfectly illustrates this and of course swans themselves mate for life, making it doubly appropriate.
Good luck in the contest.
Steve
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Thanks for the five stars and comment. I did not know about swans mating for life until you put it in your comment and I looked it up, sure enough it true which gives my poem a little extra meaning. That is what my point was about love and two people who wants they lives together to work out until they die.
Thank you once again.
Comment from chcbeck
Swans perfectly accompany your beautiful poem. For love to survive there does need to be a balance. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Swans perfectly accompany your beautiful poem. For love to survive there does need to be a balance. Thank you for sharing and good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Thank you for your five stars and comment about it takes balance for love to survive.
Comment from dmt1967
This is a very insightful poem. I agree with the statement as well. Equal love is harmonious, it is when the love is greater on one side that problems begin. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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This is a very insightful poem. I agree with the statement as well. Equal love is harmonious, it is when the love is greater on one side that problems begin. Good luck in the contest and thank you for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 30-Jan-2016
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Thank you for your five stars and comment. Each comment a person receives is appreciated.
Comment from BeasPeas
Nicely done for this 15-word poetry contest. Sometimes the short ones are the hardest. Yours flows well and captures the thought of equality in the symmetry of love and the heart shape. Marilyn
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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Nicely done for this 15-word poetry contest. Sometimes the short ones are the hardest. Yours flows well and captures the thought of equality in the symmetry of love and the heart shape. Marilyn
Comment Written 29-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 29-Jan-2016
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Thank you for the five stars and comment about "equality in the symmetry of love ...."
