Comment from Writingfundimension

Excellent

Sure a lot going on in this chapter with the surprising move and the finding of the half-sister. So, I wonder who it is that will be helping your mother make her move? I have some thoughts, but will wait to see if I'm right LoL. Another fine chapter, Ulla.

:) Bev

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Thank you so much Bev. yes, things are happening, but more to follow soon. Thanks a lot for enjoying my story. All the best. Ulla

reply by Writingfundimension on 28-Jan-2016

You're welcome, Ulla. :)

Comment from Drew Delaney

Excellent

Another interesting chapter and you do enjoy leaving us in the balance, don't you? Ha, ha!

Is this all fact, or are you adding scenes as well?

Just wondering! Nice job. Keep up the great work.

Drew xx

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Hi Drew, Thanks a lot for a great review. It is all facts, but the conversations we have are re- constructed but pretty much as they were. Nothing is made up. Everything took place in 2003. It was an amazing year. More is to follow soon. All the best. Ulla

Comment from ellie6

Excellent

What a charming chapter. I came to this story late, so I don't know what has gone before, but what I have read is enough to make me go back and read the previous chapters.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for this and nothing would make me happier, if you were to go back and read. Thank you so much. More is to come soon. All the best. Ulla

Comment from trumby

Excellent

I think that your writing is improving.
A man in New York once asked Dale Carnegie how to get to a well known performance hall. He said, "Practice!"
That same philosophy applies to whatever you're doing. Be it writing, singing or martial arts.
KEEP WRITING.
We're enjoying it.

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for this encouraging review. I am so pleased that you like it. All the best. Ulla

Comment from Robert Louis Fox

Excellent

I think your writing has improved. Your story telling has more polish. You are also nicely wrapping up the details of your adventure. I don't know where you are going next, but I find that I am still wondering about your natural father and how you truly feel about all the hurt caused by your grandmother. Keep up the great work. Best regards, BobFox

 Comment Written 27-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Robert, this is a great compliment. I do try to keep in mind all you have told me. I so appreciate your reviews. It's the only way I can learn. My father has not been forgotten. I'll come to that, in not so distant a future but a lot of things are going to happen. This is all in 2003 and the whole story only spans five months at the most. It was an unbelievable year. Please keep reading and reviewing. I value your opinion. All best. Ulla

Comment from Muffins

Excellent

You tell this advantage with enthusiasm, hope and gratefulness. There is nothing shameless or regrettable about how you present your mother, her family ,and her decision. Maybe this is the way it's supposed to be, coming together in a full circle. It's wonderful when meeting such as this are filled with happiness.

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 28-Jan-2016

Thank you much for this. It was wonderful to find my birth mother, but the story is not quite over yet. All the best. Ulla

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi Ulla,

Another revelation about more family too in this chapter and the chance to maintain a close relationship that had been missing for so long. I love reading this but please write more!

G

 Comment Written 26-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 27-Jan-2016

Thanks a lot, G. Great compliment and more is to follow soon. All best. Ulla

Comment from Crennan87

Excellent

I like this piece of work. Your last sentence made me eager for more. In my opinion you did a very good job. Very well done!

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2016

Thank you so much. I'm pleased you liked it. All best. Ulla

Comment from Bryana

Excellent

Dear Ulla, what a wonderful surprise, your mum
is moving to Europe! But she fail to say she was
going to be so happy to be near you! You said it.
Your story is so wonderful. How many people in
your place have the pleasure of finding each other
as you and your mum. I'm so happy.

Have a wonderful week. Un abrazo

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for this Bryana.Yes, it was a pleasant surprise ensuring that we could see each other much more often. More is to follow soon. Un abrazo a ti tambien. Ulla:)

Comment from Ric Myworld

Excellent

Yes, it appears that your mum was full of surprises, and now I'm just hoping they were all good surprises. LOL! Thanks for another of your delightful chapters. You leave me hardly able to wait for the next one. Great job. :-)

 Comment Written 25-Jan-2016

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reply by the author on 26-Jan-2016

Thank you so much for this and for reading my story. I am thrilled that you enjoy it. All the best. Ulla