On Precious Wings or Something
An Irish Poetry Throwdown21 total reviews
Comment from Realist101
Hahahahaa!!!!!! LOL for real Mikey! This is so different! Don't think I've read anything like this ever! I should take up sippin' some of that Kentucky spring water so I can better improve my stuff! Wonderful entry and should do well for you! Thanks for the smiles. Suse
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Hahahahaa!!!!!! LOL for real Mikey! This is so different! Don't think I've read anything like this ever! I should take up sippin' some of that Kentucky spring water so I can better improve my stuff! Wonderful entry and should do well for you! Thanks for the smiles. Suse
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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This is what happens when I decide I'm going to write whatever I want. Wow. I'm so delighted you enjoyed this. It was a major blast to write. Thanks so much for the awesome review. mikey
Comment from nordicgirl
I never know what to expect from you. I recall being recently close to tears for the beauty of your words. Now I am in tears from laughing. Is this good? I don`t know. But it is damn funny. What next? I guess I will have to wait and see. I will.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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I never know what to expect from you. I recall being recently close to tears for the beauty of your words. Now I am in tears from laughing. Is this good? I don`t know. But it is damn funny. What next? I guess I will have to wait and see. I will.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Well, I can't believe this is well received. You're only encouraging me. mikey
Comment from patcelaw
This is just too funny and I enjoyed reading it. it made my day after being a bit on the depressed side today. It is such fun to be on this site and have funny things come across my computer. Good luck in the contest. Patricia
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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This is just too funny and I enjoyed reading it. it made my day after being a bit on the depressed side today. It is such fun to be on this site and have funny things come across my computer. Good luck in the contest. Patricia
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Nothing pleases me more than to hear that. Thank you soooo much. A lot of fun to write. Big smiles. Yep, it is fun here. mikey
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
This is so clever, Mikey. I love it. The interchange between the two 'old birds' is so cleverly written.. I could read that stuff all day, and I love the way you created the interchangeable metaphor, Giddy
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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This is so clever, Mikey. I love it. The interchange between the two 'old birds' is so cleverly written.. I could read that stuff all day, and I love the way you created the interchangeable metaphor, Giddy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Hi. Wow. I'm so pleased you enjoyed this. I get the biggest kick out of writing like this. Perhaps I'll do this more often. Of course I'll be able to blame you!! Thank you so much!! mikey
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looking forward to more, Mikey! :):)
Comment from BOO ghost
Llike that quote: Love is the invisible silken thread
connecting
two souls in flight
together
Yes, when two souls come together they are one. Good slang usage. Yep, your vocabulary is soaring, words i would never dream of saying... overall, good presentation including that Fanart Review image. BOO
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Llike that quote: Love is the invisible silken thread
connecting
two souls in flight
together
Yes, when two souls come together they are one. Good slang usage. Yep, your vocabulary is soaring, words i would never dream of saying... overall, good presentation including that Fanart Review image. BOO
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Always good times when me old drunken uncle shows up. Glad you liked this. Thanks a bunch. mikey
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okie dokie Lion King. I just posted another chapter. Sir Michael cahill has his work cut out for him in me novel.haha, don't know if he will solve the poems.
Comment from Gloria ....
So, let me get my pencil and take notes. The Irish throw down their poetry? Well that is a good thing to know being Irish myself.
HAHA. Love the photo. Looks like Buddy below has a bird's eye view of what's important to his mind. Providing of course that he's of the male persuasion.
Eagles will hit the ground and kill themselves in the act, however odd that is.
Aw, what a sweet ending. The old bird saved him after all. *sigh* that is true love.
This is a terrific poem, full of blarney so best wishes to you in the free form love contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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So, let me get my pencil and take notes. The Irish throw down their poetry? Well that is a good thing to know being Irish myself.
HAHA. Love the photo. Looks like Buddy below has a bird's eye view of what's important to his mind. Providing of course that he's of the male persuasion.
Eagles will hit the ground and kill themselves in the act, however odd that is.
Aw, what a sweet ending. The old bird saved him after all. *sigh* that is true love.
This is a terrific poem, full of blarney so best wishes to you in the free form love contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Aye, he's male alright. Yep, a man can get distracted if'n he's payin' proper attention to his lady. If we die, we die. Was our lady pleasured, that's all that really matters. :))
I'm pleased you enjoyed. I dedicate my inevitable victory to you. mikey
Comment from country ranch writer
A LITTLE UNUSUAL FOR YOU MIKEY I SEE YOU HAVENT LOST YOUR SENSE OF HUMOR, NICE PRESENTATION IN A QUIRKY WWAY BUT IT IS ENTERTAINING TO THE BITTER END
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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A LITTLE UNUSUAL FOR YOU MIKEY I SEE YOU HAVENT LOST YOUR SENSE OF HUMOR, NICE PRESENTATION IN A QUIRKY WWAY BUT IT IS ENTERTAINING TO THE BITTER END
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Ha! So pleased you got a kick out of it. I had a blast writing it! mikey
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YEPPER
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YEPPER
Comment from Pantygynt
If this is a reply to Mark Fowler's love poem it's a damn good one. Even if it is probably far too cynical for the judges of this contest. Never mind I am sure we are ultimately judged by the laughs we raise not by the angels we've cuddled. So there's hope for you and me yet.
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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If this is a reply to Mark Fowler's love poem it's a damn good one. Even if it is probably far too cynical for the judges of this contest. Never mind I am sure we are ultimately judged by the laughs we raise not by the angels we've cuddled. So there's hope for you and me yet.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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There's always hope and short of that there's always whiskey!! For the wise, there's both. Or is that the foolish? Either way, mikey
Comment from Joy Graham
LOL!!! We have a hands down winner with this one, folks! That ol' coot, Uncle Sheamus put forth a gooder.
OMG, Michael. Well done! Once I stop laughing I might just be able to breathe again!
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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LOL!!! We have a hands down winner with this one, folks! That ol' coot, Uncle Sheamus put forth a gooder.
OMG, Michael. Well done! Once I stop laughing I might just be able to breathe again!
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Note to self: Get Joy on the voting committee ... all of them!!
Thank you so much. It was great fun to write, so I'm pleased you got a big kick out of it. mikey
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
Awww! I thought she saved him! But they died together! Awww! Mikey, that was cruel. I am so sad now, lol. That'll teach him eyeballing her bum! lol. Brilliant fun poem, good luck in the contest, my friend. xsx Sandra
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reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Awww! I thought she saved him! But they died together! Awww! Mikey, that was cruel. I am so sad now, lol. That'll teach him eyeballing her bum! lol. Brilliant fun poem, good luck in the contest, my friend. xsx Sandra
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Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 15-Jan-2016
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Naw. They could have landed gently and lived. I'm going with that version. He was a naughty old bird though. But after thirty years together she shouldn't begrudge him a little peak, yes?
Glad you enjoyed, mikey
