Why I Am Writing
A Desire61 total reviews
Comment from godlucifer
i second guess at writing. i achieve at being second guess at. what i achieve in writing is being second guess at. my writing is my own enemy of achieving. my writing is my second nature of achieving. as i write i achieve,as i write i am second guess at,and my writing is achieved at being a writer. your story was well told and well written. i enjoyed n reading your story. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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i second guess at writing. i achieve at being second guess at. what i achieve in writing is being second guess at. my writing is my own enemy of achieving. my writing is my second nature of achieving. as i write i achieve,as i write i am second guess at,and my writing is achieved at being a writer. your story was well told and well written. i enjoyed n reading your story. thanks for the read. "your so vein" means mood or humor.
your so vein
godlucifer
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much. Ulla
Comment from Kingsland
You do really well in your writing endeavors. You get your point across clearly and it was an easy thought process to take in. I could not find any errors in this piece. It was an excellent overall piece of writing and I enjoyed reading it... John
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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You do really well in your writing endeavors. You get your point across clearly and it was an easy thought process to take in. I could not find any errors in this piece. It was an excellent overall piece of writing and I enjoyed reading it... John
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much, I'm pleased that you liked it. All best. Ulla
Comment from Phyllis Stewart
First of all, I'm impressed that you can speak three languages. I studied Spanish for four years in college and barely got by when we vacationed in Spain. Now I don't recall ten words of Spanish. LOL!
I don't think you need to learn to write. I think everyone who can speak can do it. Just "talking" in print is how I see it. So go for it. Start writing a book if that's what you want. THe secret is to ignore all the rules. Know how the book will END first. Don't waste time making an outline, because as the story develops, you'll be changing it constantly. Just start "talking" as a character and describe what's happening, and before you know it, the characters will take over the story and write it for you. Just be sure to guide them toward your predetermined ending.
The first book I ever wrote, ISLAND, began as an exercise in using twenty words in a story. I had never written a story, so I thought the words would help me. Well... once I started writing, I got caught up in the story as it formed and two months later I had finished a novel of 143,000 words. This from a person who had only written poetry for a few years. I NEVER thought I could write a story, let alone seven novels, for which I have three FS trophies. NEVER imagined I could be a "writer".... so if you already know you're a writer, you are already way ahead. So what are you waiting for? START that novel, Ulla. I KNOW you can do it. :)
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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First of all, I'm impressed that you can speak three languages. I studied Spanish for four years in college and barely got by when we vacationed in Spain. Now I don't recall ten words of Spanish. LOL!
I don't think you need to learn to write. I think everyone who can speak can do it. Just "talking" in print is how I see it. So go for it. Start writing a book if that's what you want. THe secret is to ignore all the rules. Know how the book will END first. Don't waste time making an outline, because as the story develops, you'll be changing it constantly. Just start "talking" as a character and describe what's happening, and before you know it, the characters will take over the story and write it for you. Just be sure to guide them toward your predetermined ending.
The first book I ever wrote, ISLAND, began as an exercise in using twenty words in a story. I had never written a story, so I thought the words would help me. Well... once I started writing, I got caught up in the story as it formed and two months later I had finished a novel of 143,000 words. This from a person who had only written poetry for a few years. I NEVER thought I could write a story, let alone seven novels, for which I have three FS trophies. NEVER imagined I could be a "writer".... so if you already know you're a writer, you are already way ahead. So what are you waiting for? START that novel, Ulla. I KNOW you can do it. :)
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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Phyllis, this is great advise. I am so pleased that you are taking your time explaining all this to me. I am beginning to identify with what you are saying, because the minute I start to write the words seems to take over at their own volition. It's something I have no power over. Does that happen to you as well? Thanks for this great review and all the support. All the best. Ulla :)
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Yes, and if you feel that the story is writing itself, then you are already a writer. Good luck with the book. :)
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Thanks a lot Phyllis. Ulla:)
Comment from Pam (respa)
-I like your entry for the contest.
-I would say, "Yes, you are a good writer, and from this short piece, have a lot to draw on for material."
-I find some of your background information very interesting: all the languages you know--what a wonderful skill that is to have; all the reading you do--all of this must have worked for you:
"I remember my early school days, when I was caught out reading a book hidden under my desk laying on my lap... the poor teacher was at times lost for words when he or she caught me reading a classic work. How could they scold me for that? It was a dilemma."
-Reading is a great foundation and added to the languages you speak, and experiences you have had, it is a logical conclusion that "My brain is overflowing, with projects and ideas."
-Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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-I like your entry for the contest.
-I would say, "Yes, you are a good writer, and from this short piece, have a lot to draw on for material."
-I find some of your background information very interesting: all the languages you know--what a wonderful skill that is to have; all the reading you do--all of this must have worked for you:
"I remember my early school days, when I was caught out reading a book hidden under my desk laying on my lap... the poor teacher was at times lost for words when he or she caught me reading a classic work. How could they scold me for that? It was a dilemma."
-Reading is a great foundation and added to the languages you speak, and experiences you have had, it is a logical conclusion that "My brain is overflowing, with projects and ideas."
-Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much for this wonderful review. I am so pleased. All the best. Ulla
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You are very welcome. I am glad you liked it. The best to you, as well.
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Every writer has their reasons for writing.
Most importantly, and the very best advice I ever received as a writer, is ALWAYS WRITE FOR YOUR OWN ENJOYMENT.
The other things, such as being published, if one is good enough, will follow.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Every writer has their reasons for writing.
Most importantly, and the very best advice I ever received as a writer, is ALWAYS WRITE FOR YOUR OWN ENJOYMENT.
The other things, such as being published, if one is good enough, will follow.
Comment Written 16-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much. And you are very right. All the best. Ulla
Comment from heyjude
Ulla, you did very well on this writing for the
I am a writer prompt. English is not your primary
language is a great surprise. You have done a
wonderful job of expressing your thoughts here.
Good luck on this prompt contest.
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Ulla, you did very well on this writing for the
I am a writer prompt. English is not your primary
language is a great surprise. You have done a
wonderful job of expressing your thoughts here.
Good luck on this prompt contest.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much and for your supportive comments. All the best. Ulla
Comment from Dsomboon
Hi,
You are fortunate to have language talent but your English may be a problem if you are not careful. Your sentence structure needs work and you have numerous errors. For instance, your last sentence with ends with the word, that. You also are redundant by saying you, the reader. if you love to write in English, you could easily fine tune your English. I was raised with English and still learn all the time. I hope you get your wish.
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reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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Hi,
You are fortunate to have language talent but your English may be a problem if you are not careful. Your sentence structure needs work and you have numerous errors. For instance, your last sentence with ends with the word, that. You also are redundant by saying you, the reader. if you love to write in English, you could easily fine tune your English. I was raised with English and still learn all the time. I hope you get your wish.
This rating does not count towards story rating or author rank.
The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 15-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 16-Jan-2016
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When you dish out an average it would be extremely helpful to point out all the errors I have made instead of telling be one example of my extremely bad sentence structure How am I supposed to learn if not guided? Next, set an example and make sure your response is correctly spelled.
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Fair enough.
So why don't I write in Spanish you may ask. Well, the answer is the same, as to why I don't write in Danish, the language I was brought up with. That sentence needs work.
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My rewrite?
So why don't I write in Spanish, you may ask? Well, the answer is the same as to why I don't write in Danish, my native language.
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Another example is...
However, back to the question. Why do I write?
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All very well, but then rewrite it for me so I know how to do it correctly. This is getting a bit frustrating. If it is wrong tell me how, and dont talk or more to point write in riddles.
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Let's look at the last sentence.
What I do know is that I still read a lot, and that I will always do, but I am maybe turning into a writer after all. I would like to believe so, and I hope that you the reader may also think that. Here is something I might write instead.
What I have realized is that I enjoy reading very much. I gain a lot from my reading which helps me develop my skills. I want to be an accomplished writer and I hope you think I have the potential to reach my goal.
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Let's look at the last sentence.
What I do know is that I still read a lot, and that I will always do, but I am maybe turning into a writer after all. I would like to believe so, and I hope that you the reader may also think that. Here is something I might write instead.
What I have realized is that I enjoy reading very much. I gain a lot from my reading which helps me develop my skills. I want to be an accomplished writer and I hope you think I have the potential to reach my goal.
Comment from MaBaker
I am a writer because; As a child my life was lonely so I invented an imaginary friend. I never played with girly things like dolls, rather I peopled my world with children who I talked with, asked permission to do things with, and strangely was never lonely. Writing was an extension of my unseen friends. I would get an idea for something great and would run a half-finished plot past my friends. Some ideas they poo-pooed, some they approved. I would write their approval down and so turned them into stories. I don't know when my friends disappeared and my stories just stayed in the background until I needed them. I'd polish one up, send it away and at times got praise or criticism depending on your point-of-view. Regards MaBaker
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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I am a writer because; As a child my life was lonely so I invented an imaginary friend. I never played with girly things like dolls, rather I peopled my world with children who I talked with, asked permission to do things with, and strangely was never lonely. Writing was an extension of my unseen friends. I would get an idea for something great and would run a half-finished plot past my friends. Some ideas they poo-pooed, some they approved. I would write their approval down and so turned them into stories. I don't know when my friends disappeared and my stories just stayed in the background until I needed them. I'd polish one up, send it away and at times got praise or criticism depending on your point-of-view. Regards MaBaker
Comment Written 15-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Thank you so much and the lovely insight to your childhood memories. It's lovely. I can identify with so much of what your are saying. All the best. Ulla
Comment from closetpoetjester
Well Ulla, it sounds like you are certainly on your way to being a writer. Reading is just as important as writing and we must never be afraid to keep learning. Your wonderful attitude should have you in good stead to share your written expressions with one and all. Don't be afraid to say what you think, speak from the heart and write for yourself.
Good luck with your future literary endeavours and you've made a solid start here.
Cheers P
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Well Ulla, it sounds like you are certainly on your way to being a writer. Reading is just as important as writing and we must never be afraid to keep learning. Your wonderful attitude should have you in good stead to share your written expressions with one and all. Don't be afraid to say what you think, speak from the heart and write for yourself.
Good luck with your future literary endeavours and you've made a solid start here.
Cheers P
Comment Written 15-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Thank you. Ulla
Comment from ~Dovey
Hi Ulla!
I believe the three most impressive things I've carried away from your essay are this:
1. You communicate extremely well in English, especially for someone whom it isn't their language of origin. Generally, it is quite easy to tell when English isn't the writer's first language, but with your essay, this was not the case.
2. Wanting to publish or the hope that people will someday want to read what we've written is universal for a writer. Although, we are sometimes shy or skeptical as to how our works might be received, deep down, we all want that eventually. (Isn't that all part of the thrill?) :)
3. Reading and writing go hand in hand. I can remember being a kid and I loved to read. My dad couldn't understand that, as it held no interest for him. If he found me reading he'd decide I had nothing better to do and go find chores for me. (What parent does that? lol) I'll admit it here now, but I would sometimes fib and say I was reading something for school, just so I could read. It isn't like I was reading anything bad, I love the classics, too! After all, reading is knowledge. Even if you are reading fiction, it opens your mind to ideas and possibilities you may never encounter elsewhere. What else could be more enlightening?
I enjoyed your essay and wish you all the best in the contest.
Kim
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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Hi Ulla!
I believe the three most impressive things I've carried away from your essay are this:
1. You communicate extremely well in English, especially for someone whom it isn't their language of origin. Generally, it is quite easy to tell when English isn't the writer's first language, but with your essay, this was not the case.
2. Wanting to publish or the hope that people will someday want to read what we've written is universal for a writer. Although, we are sometimes shy or skeptical as to how our works might be received, deep down, we all want that eventually. (Isn't that all part of the thrill?) :)
3. Reading and writing go hand in hand. I can remember being a kid and I loved to read. My dad couldn't understand that, as it held no interest for him. If he found me reading he'd decide I had nothing better to do and go find chores for me. (What parent does that? lol) I'll admit it here now, but I would sometimes fib and say I was reading something for school, just so I could read. It isn't like I was reading anything bad, I love the classics, too! After all, reading is knowledge. Even if you are reading fiction, it opens your mind to ideas and possibilities you may never encounter elsewhere. What else could be more enlightening?
I enjoyed your essay and wish you all the best in the contest.
Kim
Comment Written 15-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 21-Jan-2016
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Hi Kim, Thank you so much for this encouraging review. I can't believe that I am so late in answering. I simply don't know how I have missed this review.I agree it is important to read a lot and there we are in total agreement. I am looking forward to reading more of your work. All the best. Ulla
