Harley Quinn
Tombstone Poetry20 total reviews
Comment from closetpoetjester
Haha the Lord be praised indeed! A cleverly arranged poetic epitaph complete with a forty five...May the theiving hound, now in-grave-robber haha, be haunted forever by his miserable deeds.
Too funny as always, sixer for you.
Cheers P
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Haha the Lord be praised indeed! A cleverly arranged poetic epitaph complete with a forty five...May the theiving hound, now in-grave-robber haha, be haunted forever by his miserable deeds.
Too funny as always, sixer for you.
Cheers P
Comment Written 15-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 17-Jan-2016
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Many thanks, Phillippa
Steve
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A pleasure Steve!
I know who to call on for an epitaph when I'm struggling for breath and a pen! LMAO
P
Comment from BillyCraven
poor harley, i like how is only sin- was actually multiple sins! nice job on this poem, it contains a lot of humour but i also detected some melancholy in there.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
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poor harley, i like how is only sin- was actually multiple sins! nice job on this poem, it contains a lot of humour but i also detected some melancholy in there.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
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Thanks, Billy.
Alas, poor, Harley.... He probably had a deprived childhood!
Steve
Comment from raineywriter
An interesting piece. Not the sort of poetry that appeals to me, but I can see the merit in it and it's well done. It meets the contest criteria. Good luck in the contest.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
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An interesting piece. Not the sort of poetry that appeals to me, but I can see the merit in it and it's well done. It meets the contest criteria. Good luck in the contest.
Comment Written 14-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
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Thank you.
Steve
Comment from Giddy Nielsen-Sweep
My goodness, Steve! Really? This is a cute little poem which brought a wide grin, and I suppose it must have brought some light relief to write it, too. Good luck for the competition, Giddy
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
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My goodness, Steve! Really? This is a cute little poem which brought a wide grin, and I suppose it must have brought some light relief to write it, too. Good luck for the competition, Giddy
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
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Thanks, Giddy.
Steve
Comment from Gloria ....
Oh man, here I thought you were gonna be writing about the end of those Harley Quinn bodice rippers.
Those are the romance stories I at one point in history tried to read and just could not even force myself to do.
Anyway now that I've talked about everything but your epitaph, great job. Who needs ordinary old bank robbers when we've got investment brokers?
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
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Oh man, here I thought you were gonna be writing about the end of those Harley Quinn bodice rippers.
Those are the romance stories I at one point in history tried to read and just could not even force myself to do.
Anyway now that I've talked about everything but your epitaph, great job. Who needs ordinary old bank robbers when we've got investment brokers?
Best wishes to you in the contest.
Gloria
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
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Could I rite a bodice-ripper - there must be money in it I suppose, but you'd have to read some first to see how it works. Aye, thee's the rub!
Steve
Comment from lightink
I like that you departed from the often used limerick-like form!
"His only sin
was robbin' trains and banks and stuff."
Oh, the irony! Haha!
Also, in this context, the line "The Lord be praised." is pretty controversial, too!
Nice touch! Good luck, my friend!
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016
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I like that you departed from the often used limerick-like form!
"His only sin
was robbin' trains and banks and stuff."
Oh, the irony! Haha!
Also, in this context, the line "The Lord be praised." is pretty controversial, too!
Nice touch! Good luck, my friend!
Comment Written 12-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 13-Jan-2016
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Thanks, Jyoti. I am happy that you got the kind of double meaning in the last line.
Steve
Comment from Gert sherwood
Smiles to you kiwisteveh
Love the rhyme and the catchy epitaph on the tombstone of
Harley Quinn.
Fun to read,
Gert
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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Smiles to you kiwisteveh
Love the rhyme and the catchy epitaph on the tombstone of
Harley Quinn.
Fun to read,
Gert
Comment Written 12-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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Thanks, Gert.
Steve
Comment from nancy_e_davis
It's a good one Steve. Only thing, I stumbled
on the word has, maybe this would work better.
"That's ended Harley's thieving ways"
Just a suggestion Well done. Nancy
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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It's a good one Steve. Only thing, I stumbled
on the word has, maybe this would work better.
"That's ended Harley's thieving ways"
Just a suggestion Well done. Nancy
Comment Written 12-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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Nancy, thanks fir the review and the suggestion.
Steve
Comment from Neonewman
I love the artwork, too cool. Wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered for this Tombstone Poetry contest. I am thinking about trying this myself.
God bless and best of luck.
Steve
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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I love the artwork, too cool. Wonderfully crafted piece you have delivered for this Tombstone Poetry contest. I am thinking about trying this myself.
God bless and best of luck.
Steve
Comment Written 12-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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Thanks, Steve,
Yeah, jump in mate, the water's fine.
Steve
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LOL! I just might do that Steve!
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LOL! I just might do that Steve!
Comment from Just2Write
Someone should've said - Harley Quinn... DUCK!
A very funny Tombstone poem, Steve. I got a kick out of it anyway. Perhaps because I actually know a Harley. That is a great name, but he must hear 100 times a month, some silly reference as to where his friend Davidson is, or some other reference as to how he is named after a motorcycle.
LOLlllzzz.
Anyway - this is a great entry into the contest, m'ducks. I wish you luck!
Rose.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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Someone should've said - Harley Quinn... DUCK!
A very funny Tombstone poem, Steve. I got a kick out of it anyway. Perhaps because I actually know a Harley. That is a great name, but he must hear 100 times a month, some silly reference as to where his friend Davidson is, or some other reference as to how he is named after a motorcycle.
LOLlllzzz.
Anyway - this is a great entry into the contest, m'ducks. I wish you luck!
Rose.
Comment Written 12-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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Thanks, Rose
Some parents don't think ahead too much when choosing names! Don't suppose his surname was Quinn or Davidson, though.
Steve
