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Viewing comments for Chapter 8 "Scene at the Slopes"Pons and Ned meet at different locations
20 total reviews
Comment from lyenochka
Thanks for the new vocabulary, Bill! Lol. That's kinda goofy - all those weird words for snow sports. I could have thought they should have come up with a better word than "biathlon" for shooting while skiing. It also applies to racing on foot while shooting arrows, too.
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Thanks for the new vocabulary, Bill! Lol. That's kinda goofy - all those weird words for snow sports. I could have thought they should have come up with a better word than "biathlon" for shooting while skiing. It also applies to racing on foot while shooting arrows, too.
Comment Written 20-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 20-Feb-2018
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Lots of fun names for stuff.
Comment from Ulla
Hi Bill, as usual, this is hilarious. I have to admit I don't know the first thing about skiing so your notes were much appreciated. All the best. Ulla:))
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Hi Bill, as usual, this is hilarious. I have to admit I don't know the first thing about skiing so your notes were much appreciated. All the best. Ulla:))
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thanks, Ulla
Comment from judiverse
I'm pretty much at a loss when it comes to these skiing and snowboarding events. All is know is I kind of like the outfits the snowboarders wear. Are these guys watching the Olympics? I'd like to know where they're from because they use somewhat backwoodsy language. Your dialogue works well, and shows their good-natured back and forth. With the Olympics going on, you might just have them watching the events on TV. judi
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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I'm pretty much at a loss when it comes to these skiing and snowboarding events. All is know is I kind of like the outfits the snowboarders wear. Are these guys watching the Olympics? I'd like to know where they're from because they use somewhat backwoodsy language. Your dialogue works well, and shows their good-natured back and forth. With the Olympics going on, you might just have them watching the events on TV. judi
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Just up north in Michigan,
Comment from nomi338
Stop! My sides are splitting. That is one of the funniest Ned and Pons routines You have ever written. The writers for Bud Abbott and Lou Costello ain't got nothing on you. This is some funny stuff right here.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Stop! My sides are splitting. That is one of the funniest Ned and Pons routines You have ever written. The writers for Bud Abbott and Lou Costello ain't got nothing on you. This is some funny stuff right here.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thanks, nomi
Comment from prettybluebirds
I'm glad you explained all those fancy terminology words you used in here. I didn't have any idea what most of them meant. Good writing and artwork. Nice work.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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I'm glad you explained all those fancy terminology words you used in here. I didn't have any idea what most of them meant. Good writing and artwork. Nice work.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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Thanks, PBB
Comment from Thomas Bowling
You posted this just in time for the closing ceremony. I'm bulking up for the summer Olympics. I'm ten pounds away from my event. The two-hundred-twenty-pound jerk.
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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You posted this just in time for the closing ceremony. I'm bulking up for the summer Olympics. I'm ten pounds away from my event. The two-hundred-twenty-pound jerk.
Comment Written 17-Feb-2018
reply by the author on 17-Feb-2018
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No one likes a light weight jerk.
Comment from William Ross
Very good , I remember my first time skiing, i went down a double black diamond trail with friends my first time ever on skies. I fell so bad people on the lifts were rating me 9 and 10 on the spills all the way down the mountain.
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
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Very good , I remember my first time skiing, i went down a double black diamond trail with friends my first time ever on skies. I fell so bad people on the lifts were rating me 9 and 10 on the spills all the way down the mountain.
Comment Written 13-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 14-Jan-2016
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Thank you, William, for giving this a look. The hill makes acrobats of us all. Bill
Comment from Dawn Munro
LOL, poor ol' Ned. He just does not get it. Pons, however, seems a mite thick this time too. He doesn't react as if he realizes his cousin is not understanding the terms.
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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LOL, poor ol' Ned. He just does not get it. Pons, however, seems a mite thick this time too. He doesn't react as if he realizes his cousin is not understanding the terms.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 12-Jan-2016
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Thank you, Dawn, for the excellent review. I think Pons is becoming used to Ned's lack of depth. Bill
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:) My pleasure.
Comment from frogbook
Sounds like you know what you are talking about for sure Bill. I am probably a little more "Ned-like" Ha. This was finny and also educational for us, Nedites.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2016
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Sounds like you know what you are talking about for sure Bill. I am probably a little more "Ned-like" Ha. This was finny and also educational for us, Nedites.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2016
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Thank you, FB, for the excellent review. I actually looked up some terms that sounded provocative. Bill
Comment from Ben Colder
I learn something new every day. Glad you wrote the info in your notes. It clears a mystery in my mind. Thanks for sharing. Nothing wrong in this script.
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2016
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I learn something new every day. Glad you wrote the info in your notes. It clears a mystery in my mind. Thanks for sharing. Nothing wrong in this script.
Comment Written 11-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 11-Jan-2016
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Thank you, Ben, for the excellent review. Bill
