Ring the Bell
A silly retelling of the nursery rhyme Ding Dong Bell.10 total reviews
Comment from William Ross
Cute, witty and playful, a good child poem. thanks for sharing this cute little piece.Hope you have a safe and wonderful new year.
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
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Cute, witty and playful, a good child poem. thanks for sharing this cute little piece.Hope you have a safe and wonderful new year.
Comment Written 07-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 07-Jan-2016
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Thank you, William. I decided to unbend and just let go and have a little fun.
Comment from c_lucas
An interesting post combining a nursery rhyme with real life. I see nothing that could offend a reviewer. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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An interesting post combining a nursery rhyme with real life. I see nothing that could offend a reviewer. This is very well written with a smooth flow of words, making for a good read.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Thank you, Charlie. As ever, I appreciate your always welcome comments.
Comment from Pantygynt
Perhaps he should have stuck to beer. I don't know of any wells that provide a source of the amber nectar. Water is a decidedly dangerous substance unless diluted with large quantities of whisky.
A neat reworking of the old nursery rhyme.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Perhaps he should have stuck to beer. I don't know of any wells that provide a source of the amber nectar. Water is a decidedly dangerous substance unless diluted with large quantities of whisky.
A neat reworking of the old nursery rhyme.
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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A person after my own heart. I like the way you think. I think though in this case there might have been one or two too many glasses of the amber nectar which may have led to the bold and brash act. LOL. I appreciate your humorous response.
Comment from RGstar
Ha,ha. I wonder how many will get the 'jist'.Yes, Nomi.Sometimes we head in head first and so blinded by the euphoria, especially if that well will eventually turn dry.
Good humor.
Have a great day, my brother.
RG
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Ha,ha. I wonder how many will get the 'jist'.Yes, Nomi.Sometimes we head in head first and so blinded by the euphoria, especially if that well will eventually turn dry.
Good humor.
Have a great day, my brother.
RG
Comment Written 06-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Thanks, good brother. I was afraid that some might get offended, but I just wanted to write a fun poem for a change. What many may not know about me is that I come from a long line of Jokers, mostly on my father's side of the family. I appreciate your humorous response to my little ditty.
Comment from mbagby23
Ringing the bell for so.e help. My uncle silly indeed and needs some help. I enjoyed your nursery rhyme. The picture goes great with it too.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Ringing the bell for so.e help. My uncle silly indeed and needs some help. I enjoyed your nursery rhyme. The picture goes great with it too.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Thank you, I felt that I have been far too serious for too long and I wanted to have some fun.
Comment from MizKat
Hi Nomi,
As a Christian friend I didn't know what to say about your poem so I kept reading it over and over again. I should have stopped at the first read as it didn't seem to be slightly racy at all. LOL
Kat
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Hi Nomi,
As a Christian friend I didn't know what to say about your poem so I kept reading it over and over again. I should have stopped at the first read as it didn't seem to be slightly racy at all. LOL
Kat
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Thank you MizKat. It was just a little bit naughty and not meant to be offensive at all.
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Yes, I know. That's why I read it. Kat
Comment from Gloria ....
Ha, this is most amusing nomi. I love the fool card too. I've never seen that Tarot deck before.
This is a little risque but no sense in losing our heads or a little tail.
Nicely done, you.
Gloria
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Ha, this is most amusing nomi. I love the fool card too. I've never seen that Tarot deck before.
This is a little risque but no sense in losing our heads or a little tail.
Nicely done, you.
Gloria
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Thank you, Gloria. I have been too serious for too long and I wanted to have a little fun.
Comment from I am Cat
not quite the same thing.... racy? any pussy I know? ;)
lol
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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not quite the same thing.... racy? any pussy I know? ;)
lol
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Hmm, could be. However, I don't know if I would dive headfirst down a well to get it.
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well... if it was good, you might. ;)
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If it was good I would do anything, go anywhere to get it.
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that's the spirit! ;)
Comment from Gert sherwood
Hello author
What fun to read your
silly retelling of the nursery rhyme Ding Dong Bell.
"Ring the Bell"
I'm very religious and no way was I offended.
Gert
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Hello author
What fun to read your
silly retelling of the nursery rhyme Ding Dong Bell.
"Ring the Bell"
I'm very religious and no way was I offended.
Gert
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Thank you, Gert. It means a great deal to me to receive your assurance that I did not offend.
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You are welcome nomi338
Gert
Comment from Bill Schott
These three couplets which make up, Ring the Bell, take the kid's poem past its nursery stage to the humor we like to see in light-hearted poems. Nice.
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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These three couplets which make up, Ring the Bell, take the kid's poem past its nursery stage to the humor we like to see in light-hearted poems. Nice.
Comment Written 05-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 06-Jan-2016
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Thank you Bill, that was exactly me intent.
