365 Valentine Days
Cherish found love every day of the year12 total reviews
Comment from Wabigoon
Sueswrite--
Nice poem. I guess I have a little bit of discomfort with it because you sometimes fill out lines with words that seem maybe extra -- I think that's to fulfill your form.
as in:
(Or) cuddly stuffed bears. -- I don't see "or" here as strictly necessary.
But aside from that minor complaint a well done poem.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
Sueswrite--
Nice poem. I guess I have a little bit of discomfort with it because you sometimes fill out lines with words that seem maybe extra -- I think that's to fulfill your form.
as in:
(Or) cuddly stuffed bears. -- I don't see "or" here as strictly necessary.
But aside from that minor complaint a well done poem.
Thanks
Wabigoon/Jeff
Comment Written 02-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thank you very much for your review and I am sorry for how late this is.
Enjoy your day.
sue
Comment from RoseAnderson
I liked this. It reads like a valentine. This part is very nice:
So, on this day, the pink heart holds dear.
And not just for today, but for each day of the year.
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
I liked this. It reads like a valentine. This part is very nice:
So, on this day, the pink heart holds dear.
And not just for today, but for each day of the year.
Comment Written 02-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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I apologize for this extremely late note to say thank you for the kind review for my poem.
Have a nice day.
Sue
Comment from rjuselius
this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear sue! i especially loved the last line! we definitely should honor our relationships daily. it's like giving water to a flower so it may survive. and we should'nt just survive, we should flourish!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
this is a beautiful piece of poetry dear sue! i especially loved the last line! we definitely should honor our relationships daily. it's like giving water to a flower so it may survive. and we should'nt just survive, we should flourish!
thank you for sharing!
blessings!
rebekka x
Comment Written 02-Feb-2016
reply by the author on 12-Mar-2018
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Thank you so much for this kind review that I am so late to respond to. My apologies!
Enjoy your day!
sue
Comment from michaelcahill
Hi. Yes, I actually review on occasion. :))
I do read your writing and enjoy it, I'm just buried in real life junk and haven't the time to be a good fan.
I LOVE this. A beautiful mix of form here that flows beautifully. So smooth and the great craft makes the content fly off the page. I so agree. Nothing like love. Happy New Year. mikey
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
Hi. Yes, I actually review on occasion. :))
I do read your writing and enjoy it, I'm just buried in real life junk and haven't the time to be a good fan.
I LOVE this. A beautiful mix of form here that flows beautifully. So smooth and the great craft makes the content fly off the page. I so agree. Nothing like love. Happy New Year. mikey
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
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Ha Ha! I read your review and am so relieved from what I read....."haven't the time to be a good fan". I was about to apologize for the delay in commenting on your kind review, but I see that you totally understand. Well, one month later and I thank you for your nice words. Happy New Year to you as well.
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello Sue :)
Nice love poem for the contest. Attractive presentation but the font was hard to read, I would make it bigger and bold. Excellent rhyme. Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
Hello Sue :)
Nice love poem for the contest. Attractive presentation but the font was hard to read, I would make it bigger and bold. Excellent rhyme. Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 31-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
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So sorry for the delay in thanking you for your kind review and great advice! Been caught up in work. Thank you!
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
Beautiful poem and well said. There is no point in love for only one day in a year. Love should be a year round celebration. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
Beautiful poem and well said. There is no point in love for only one day in a year. Love should be a year round celebration. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for the great review and I must apologize for the delay. I've been very busy with work. Thanks again!
Comment from William Ross
This is very nice, sweet, very well written nice verse well read. good luck in the contest with this. hope you have a safe and wonderful New Year.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
This is very nice, sweet, very well written nice verse well read. good luck in the contest with this. hope you have a safe and wonderful New Year.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for the very nice review. I am sorry for the delay in replying to you.
Comment from Zue65
You are truly a messenger of love in this poem, the lines explored the theme on love effectively. It is full of sweetness that young teeners will resonate with this poem and its message. Thanks for sharing.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
You are truly a messenger of love in this poem, the lines explored the theme on love effectively. It is full of sweetness that young teeners will resonate with this poem and its message. Thanks for sharing.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
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Thank you for this wonderful review and your kind words. I am sorry for the delay in responding to you as I have been very busy with work. Thanks again!
Comment from chcbeck
I think you capture every thing about love in this one poem. You shouldn't just celebrate one day a year. Good luck with the contest
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
I think you capture every thing about love in this one poem. You shouldn't just celebrate one day a year. Good luck with the contest
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
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Thank you for the very nice review and I apologize for the delay in returning a reply.
Comment from tfawcus
What a nice thought this is. If only we could be as attentive on other days of the year! Christmas, too, brings out the best of us, but all too briefly. As you suggest, true happiness needs nurturing 365 days of the year.
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
What a nice thought this is. If only we could be as attentive on other days of the year! Christmas, too, brings out the best of us, but all too briefly. As you suggest, true happiness needs nurturing 365 days of the year.
Comment Written 30-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Feb-2016
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Thank you so much for this very kind review. I am sorry for the delay in returning a reply to you as I've been very busy with work.
Thanks again!