Cold Evil Murder
They continue to die19 total reviews
Comment from Liberty Justice
Dang that's realistically scary. Graphic depiction suspeonce event of murder by brute. Didn't have kill child,. Sick people in world. Powerful Poem tragic.
liberty justice
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Dang that's realistically scary. Graphic depiction suspeonce event of murder by brute. Didn't have kill child,. Sick people in world. Powerful Poem tragic.
liberty justice
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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We gota wake up. thanks for the read
Jax
Comment from amada
Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a very graphic but realist work on what is happening in our world today. Unbelievable. Innocent people always pay the price.
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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Congratulations in winning the contest. This is a very graphic but realist work on what is happening in our world today. Unbelievable. Innocent people always pay the price.
Comment Written 22-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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Amen. This is a tough world we live in. follow me or you die and they are winning. Thanks for the congradulations.
Jax
Comment from Louise Michelle
It's easy to see why you won the contest. This is brutally honest and the subject matter not that easy to read, but you wrote it so well. The rhythm and your well chosen rhymes made it so. Hugs, Lou
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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It's easy to see why you won the contest. This is brutally honest and the subject matter not that easy to read, but you wrote it so well. The rhythm and your well chosen rhymes made it so. Hugs, Lou
Comment Written 22-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 22-Dec-2015
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Louise
Thanks first for the hugs; we all need them and secondly for you positive comments. Love " you wrote so well" What a wonderful compliment .
Thanks Jax
Comment from robyn corum
Well, you have not only told a achingly sad story, you have promoted a definite feeling in anger in most who read it, probably. Me, at least. Good write and good luck in the contest!
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Well, you have not only told a achingly sad story, you have promoted a definite feeling in anger in most who read it, probably. Me, at least. Good write and good luck in the contest!
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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You and many others. This verse touched a nerve with many.. I guess that's what we try to do; evoke reaction. Thanks for the read and comment
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a sad poem for the time of year, but it is so true. Brutes like these are just waiting in store if we are not careful. It might be any one of us next.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a sad poem for the time of year, but it is so true. Brutes like these are just waiting in store if we are not careful. It might be any one of us next.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Thanks reading my work and letting it touch you
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My pleasure
Comment from wiljacro
Hi! This is the epitome of the stories we hear of the brutal treatment handed out by the rebels in the middle east to the people that do not accept their interpretation of the religion they follow. You paint a very sad picture of life under them. wiljacrO.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Hi! This is the epitome of the stories we hear of the brutal treatment handed out by the rebels in the middle east to the people that do not accept their interpretation of the religion they follow. You paint a very sad picture of life under them. wiljacrO.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Thanks. this six is a real honor . It is to bad that the world has to go backwards to the ways of these murders. How many years will it take before they win
Comment from foxangie123
How absolutely horrible. I will never understand this or any type of evil inflicted upon innocence. Nit makes me sick. You have definitely filled the prompt and done a great job at it. Wow. I hope you win.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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How absolutely horrible. I will never understand this or any type of evil inflicted upon innocence. Nit makes me sick. You have definitely filled the prompt and done a great job at it. Wow. I hope you win.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Wow! I got a wow. Thanks This verse touched a nerve with nerve with many folks
Comment from angel123
Your poem is very dramatic and well written. It held my attention and it flows and rhymes well. I enjoyed reading it and it has a very dramatic ending. This is a very well told sad story.
Angel123
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Your poem is very dramatic and well written. It held my attention and it flows and rhymes well. I enjoyed reading it and it has a very dramatic ending. This is a very well told sad story.
Angel123
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Thanks for your very kind comments.
Comment from CallieWVU2
This poem really puts you in it, you can feel the flight, sense the fear, if I were to make one suggestion it would be only that "Tore off long cut skirt" sounds a bit awkward, perhaps "Tore off a long cut skirt" I think it would make the piece gel a bit more.
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reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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This poem really puts you in it, you can feel the flight, sense the fear, if I were to make one suggestion it would be only that "Tore off long cut skirt" sounds a bit awkward, perhaps "Tore off a long cut skirt" I think it would make the piece gel a bit more.
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The highest and the lowest rating are not included in calculations.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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It was awkward. thanks. I simply left the word out.. I am pleased that the poem roused your emotions. Thats what writing this stuff is all about. Thanks for reading and commenting
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
It is terrible that we have to fear for our lives, while we are suppose to live carefree. Those terrorists are raised with hate and taught to kill and destruct all that is vulnerable.
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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It is terrible that we have to fear for our lives, while we are suppose to live carefree. Those terrorists are raised with hate and taught to kill and destruct all that is vulnerable.
Comment Written 21-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 21-Dec-2015
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Amen sister.. the world better wake up
