Reflections Of Color
Viewing comments for Chapter 54 "Bedroom Eyes"A collection of my All-Time Best rated song lyrics
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Comment from writergal614
Indeed! I probably would NOT have listened to mama if I was a young man Brett. Lol! This is a great tale that most if not all men could probably relate to. Simple with direct meaning. No word rhyming was needed, the point is clear and well presented. Nice job! :)
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016
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Indeed! I probably would NOT have listened to mama if I was a young man Brett. Lol! This is a great tale that most if not all men could probably relate to. Simple with direct meaning. No word rhyming was needed, the point is clear and well presented. Nice job! :)
Comment Written 01-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 01-Jan-2016
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Comment from Liberty Justice
His "mama never told him about bedroom eyes." This is a power regretful refrain where man is so disappointed that his mother never told him about broken hearts.liberty justice
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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His "mama never told him about bedroom eyes." This is a power regretful refrain where man is so disappointed that his mother never told him about broken hearts.liberty justice
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Comment from flylikeaneagle
Bret: well written, great beat and repetition on your lyrics. Do you sing this?
Trump slams woman. There are woman running, too, for President. Maybe,
bedroom eyes are men, too, depends. Equal time? Husband and wife can still
look at each other with bedroom eyes!
Patricia must have gotten a grand champion ribbon at the open in the fair with her hand made quilt. Congrats to both of you! Happy New Year! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Bret: well written, great beat and repetition on your lyrics. Do you sing this?
Trump slams woman. There are woman running, too, for President. Maybe,
bedroom eyes are men, too, depends. Equal time? Husband and wife can still
look at each other with bedroom eyes!
Patricia must have gotten a grand champion ribbon at the open in the fair with her hand made quilt. Congrats to both of you! Happy New Year! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics.
Believe she did. It is a very nice one indeed.
Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from teols2016
I'll admit that the title "Bedroom Eyes" pulled me in...I wanted to see how this turned out. I was not disappointed. It does stumble slightly in a couple of spots in terms of flow, but those points are minor. Hold on to this one and use it well. Nice job.
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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I'll admit that the title "Bedroom Eyes" pulled me in...I wanted to see how this turned out. I was not disappointed. It does stumble slightly in a couple of spots in terms of flow, but those points are minor. Hold on to this one and use it well. Nice job.
Comment Written 29-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 30-Dec-2015
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Comment from Judvan2
Love free verse. Love the poem. Its so true we never get all the information, but would we believe it anyway. Thanks for writing. It kept me reading on.
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Love free verse. Love the poem. Its so true we never get all the information, but would we believe it anyway. Thanks for writing. It kept me reading on.
Comment Written 28-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
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Comment from robina1978
Excellent photo that complements your song-lyrics perfectly. You chose a good subject: I think most mothers don't tell their daughter about men with bedroom eyes. So one got abandoned.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Excellent photo that complements your song-lyrics perfectly. You chose a good subject: I think most mothers don't tell their daughter about men with bedroom eyes. So one got abandoned.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Comment from JanPerry
I thought this was a song already? Bedroom eyes is a famous song already?
Nicely set out, the thoughts are intelligent. You have thorough explanations of everything on here.
I like the shawl and ribbons a lot.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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I thought this was a song already? Bedroom eyes is a famous song already?
Nicely set out, the thoughts are intelligent. You have thorough explanations of everything on here.
I like the shawl and ribbons a lot.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed these lyrics. You must be thinking about Dum Dum Girls, or Natty's, songs of the same title. In the world of music that happens frequently. Your comments and support appreciated.
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ok, yeah must have heard it from them, thanks
Comment from AnnieDawn
I liked reading this lyric as I could hear it being sung as I read. It would not take much to put this one to music. It would do well with either a male or female vocalist. I will be looking forward to hearing some of your work on the charts in the future as I believe it won't be long. Great job.
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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I liked reading this lyric as I could hear it being sung as I read. It would not take much to put this one to music. It would do well with either a male or female vocalist. I will be looking forward to hearing some of your work on the charts in the future as I believe it won't be long. Great job.
Comment Written 26-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 27-Dec-2015
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Comment from Bill Schott
This reminds us all, I'm sure, about the difference between what Mom has to teach and what matters when hormones meets the pinch and tickle times. Thus is a fun and sad drinking song.
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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This reminds us all, I'm sure, about the difference between what Mom has to teach and what matters when hormones meets the pinch and tickle times. Thus is a fun and sad drinking song.
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Comment from trumby
great lyrics. Terrific country song. Did the dog die as well?
I could really think of a typical country music song with this one.
I think that most blokes have one of those perfumed bitches break their hearts and steal their money, haven't they ?
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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great lyrics. Terrific country song. Did the dog die as well?
I could really think of a typical country music song with this one.
I think that most blokes have one of those perfumed bitches break their hearts and steal their money, haven't they ?
Comment Written 23-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 23-Dec-2015
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Isn't that what happens in most relationships?
Especially in the Bush Country?
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Country men & women are completely different to those bitches in town. I'M a country bloke from Marlborough. Or Clarke Creek to be exact. 2 hr drive to town.
