Inside My Head
Viewing comments for Chapter 21 "then and now"I am what I am,my thoughts, my words,my poems
2 total reviews
Comment from Cumbrianlass
Hello, Bill. A nice reflective piece, prompted by the passing of the years. I enjoyed it - it has a wistful feel.
Couple of things to correct:
but alas, I(')m an old man now it shall be - I'm
I(')ve been there - I've
Hope this helps.
Av
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Hello, Bill. A nice reflective piece, prompted by the passing of the years. I enjoyed it - it has a wistful feel.
Couple of things to correct:
but alas, I(')m an old man now it shall be - I'm
I(')ve been there - I've
Hope this helps.
Av
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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thnx for your review, spelling was a bit rash eh,cheers
Comment from Brett Matthew West
Well written poem that depicts as people age their values tend to change over time.
Uses terms such as "taunt with rebellion" to much better illustrate youthful reaction to the social norms.
However, did the older people not also rebel in their youth once upon a not so long time ago?
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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Well written poem that depicts as people age their values tend to change over time.
Uses terms such as "taunt with rebellion" to much better illustrate youthful reaction to the social norms.
However, did the older people not also rebel in their youth once upon a not so long time ago?
Comment Written 09-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 10-Dec-2015
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thankyou for your time to review my writings, Bill
