Ricky The Rock
The misadventures of a rolling stone15 total reviews
Comment from patcelaw
Brett, I love the way you have personified the rock. There is a message here for all of us to remember. We must never get so full of ourselves that we harm others or do things that are wrong, least we to have the hammer brought down on us and we become just dust in the bin of life. Good write. Patricia
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Brett, I love the way you have personified the rock. There is a message here for all of us to remember. We must never get so full of ourselves that we harm others or do things that are wrong, least we to have the hammer brought down on us and we become just dust in the bin of life. Good write. Patricia
Comment Written 04-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little poem. Several interpretations of it have been suggested. All of them quite good. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Barb Hensongispsaca
INdeed something to think about.
What a cute story in a poem complete with a moral.
If I remember right this is not the first like this you have done and the others were wonderful.
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015
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INdeed something to think about.
What a cute story in a poem complete with a moral.
If I remember right this is not the first like this you have done and the others were wonderful.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little poem. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Sandra du Plessis
When you think and wonder about evil and wrong things, you will one or other time bring action to your evil mind and do what you think your mind tells you to do and that whatever you plan is right, until you have to pay for the evil things you do, then it is too late to change your way of thinking, harm is already done.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
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When you think and wonder about evil and wrong things, you will one or other time bring action to your evil mind and do what you think your mind tells you to do and that whatever you plan is right, until you have to pay for the evil things you do, then it is too late to change your way of thinking, harm is already done.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this poem. Your comments and support appreciated.
Comment from Pyrrho
Ricky the Rock? Are you a Doctor Seuss fan? ... "Just funning you," as the hill-Billy said. I suspect there is a moral within this one but the clock struck two 17 minutes ago and I am punchy.
Hickery dickery doc
Two mice ran up a clock
The clock struck one
The other one got away.
Good night Brett.
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
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Ricky the Rock? Are you a Doctor Seuss fan? ... "Just funning you," as the hill-Billy said. I suspect there is a moral within this one but the clock struck two 17 minutes ago and I am punchy.
Hickery dickery doc
Two mice ran up a clock
The clock struck one
The other one got away.
Good night Brett.
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
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Sleep tight. Watch those bed bugs. Don't let them bite.
Comment from Tessa Kay
A great lesson in a smooth flowing poem. Yes, what goes around, comes around.
People should think more of the consequences of their actions. That would prevent a lot of heart ache. :)
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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
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A great lesson in a smooth flowing poem. Yes, what goes around, comes around.
People should think more of the consequences of their actions. That would prevent a lot of heart ache. :)
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Comment Written 04-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
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Glad you enjoyed this little poem. Your comments and support appreciated.
