Comment from OnyxSapphire78

Excellent

This is a great poem that tells of your journey to Christ. The artwork and presentation are really great as well. I wish others would wake as well and see that their life could be full and happy with Him. This is a wonderful write! Have a great night!

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 Comment Written 04-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015

Thanks Amber for reading and reviewing my poem. Did you mean a four star?

reply by OnyxSapphire78 on 04-Dec-2015

No i did not mean four. I fixed it. I am so sorry. i need to adjust the settings on my mouse. I am so sorry.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I liked your reference to "whispers" and being "picked up...in His Arms" plus your repeats in the rhymes. The resolution with "no alarms" is very effective. Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015

Thanks Joan for the nice review, I am glad you like it.

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

I enjoyed the premise of your poem and I agree wholeheartedly. My girlfriend always says, "God sent me a message in NEON." Sometimes, we need a pretty blatant wake up call. Nicely rhymed, excellent content. Marilyn

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015

Thanks Marilyn for the nice review

Comment from Teri7

Excellent

This is a very wonderful poem you have penned. God will take drastic measure to keep us in line with him. This is very well written poem. I love the art work you chose. Hugs, Teri

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015

Thanks Teri for the nice review. We should listen so the alarms don't have to go into effect.

reply by Teri7 on 02-Dec-2015

amen to that

Comment from Dean Kuch

Excellent

Nicely presented poem with a powerful spiritual message, Patricia. I enjoyed reading it very much. I enjoyed the color scheme too. Your carefully chosen words are a poetic proclamation portraying pure faith. Excellent rhyming and wonderful message as well. Thanks so much for sharing.
~Dean

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015

Thanks Dean for the very nice review. Merry Christmas.

reply by Dean Kuch on 01-Dec-2015

You're very welcome, and Merry Christmas to you and your family as well.
~Dean

Comment from Jannypan (Jan)

Excellent

I enjoyed your poem. I like the color scheme very much. Your words are filled with such emotion and truth. I see no changes. Good job on the rhyme and super message. Thank you for sharing.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015

Thanks for the nice review. Keep the alarm clock off, listen to the still small voice.

Comment from bard owl

Excellent

I have found that God often whispers instead of yelling at us mortals. And when we hear that whisper, we often find a way out of our troubles. That is what your poetic message said to me. Excellent read.
Blessings to you,
Linda

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015

Thanks Linda for the review. Before I was saved, I was a very head strong messed up person. I was sure I could get better on my own but it was not happening. Finally God allowed a trial that I had to either chose to do what was right in His sight, or he may never again draw me to Himself. It is so nice now to hear when He whispers to me and I hear.

Comment from William Ross

Exceptional

This is real nice,has a lot of meaning, faith in God, a powerful message that i believe one can truly believe in and better themselves through God.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015

Thanks you William for the nice review.

Comment from MizKat

Excellent

Hi Patricia,

This is another well written poem that you've written about God and the help He gave you. I love reading these kinds of poems the most. Your other poems are nice too.

Kat

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015

Thanks Kat for the nice review.

reply by MizKat on 01-Dec-2015

You are so welcome. Kat

Comment from MelB

Excellent

Same thing happened to me too. God keeps upping the ante until we crash and burn. We either let it ruin us or decide we need Him. I can't let go of Him now! I like the use of the alarm clock and alarm sounding.

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015

Thanks for the nice review, Melissa. Tis good to be able to hear the whispers with out the alarm going off, huh?

reply by MelB on 01-Dec-2015

Yes!