Baby's Great Adventure
Baby learns a life lesson13 total reviews
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
Wow! Wonderful! And, being a short stand alone, something I can quickly get my mind around and assimilate. Moreover, it's a story for my heart, and creation for my aspirations. Thanks for sharing, Rhonda, I hope to catch up with your book soon. Happy writing, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2016
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Wow! Wonderful! And, being a short stand alone, something I can quickly get my mind around and assimilate. Moreover, it's a story for my heart, and creation for my aspirations. Thanks for sharing, Rhonda, I hope to catch up with your book soon. Happy writing, Maureen*&*
Comment Written 10-Jan-2016
reply by the author on 10-Jan-2016
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Thank you, Maureen. That was sweet of you to go back and review an old story. I had too much fun with it!
I look forward to your reviews!
Comment from Muffins
Is this cutie your granddaughter? What a face.
The point of view's internal thoughts are authentic and funny. All the actions are filled with sensations a baby would ooo and ahh at. Good luck with the contest.
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
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Is this cutie your granddaughter? What a face.
The point of view's internal thoughts are authentic and funny. All the actions are filled with sensations a baby would ooo and ahh at. Good luck with the contest.
Comment Written 04-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
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Yes, she is my granddaughter, and I loved visiting with her over Thanksgiving. I hated to go back to Texas and leave her behind. sniff...and she has a wonderful relationship with the cat. Thanks again,
Rhonda
Comment from MaBaker
That's cute. We don't really think babies have a secret life one we Mothers don't know a thing about, well now we know. Poor cat having a tail pulled hard enough to retaliate. No typos that I could see. Regards MaBaker
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
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That's cute. We don't really think babies have a secret life one we Mothers don't know a thing about, well now we know. Poor cat having a tail pulled hard enough to retaliate. No typos that I could see. Regards MaBaker
Comment Written 04-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 04-Dec-2015
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Well, this baby does anyway, haha. Gotta wonder what they think about all day...
Thanks for the review,
Rhonda
Comment from Green Lake Girl
Very cute story from a unique perspective. I guess we can only imagine what thoughts go through a baby's head. You did a good job--very imaginative. Small children seem to be hugely attracted to animals. Must be the soft fur and wagging appendages! I hope you do well in this contest.
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Very cute story from a unique perspective. I guess we can only imagine what thoughts go through a baby's head. You did a good job--very imaginative. Small children seem to be hugely attracted to animals. Must be the soft fur and wagging appendages! I hope you do well in this contest.
Comment Written 02-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 02-Dec-2015
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Thank you so much for the review and encouragement! Yes, babies are a bit like kitties. They do love to chance wiggling things! Lol.
Comment from Dawn Munro
HAHAHAHAHA! Oh my, this is just adorable! Poor tyke, kitty doesn't care too much for tiny hands, unable to do much more than grasp a handful of fur. Puppy tail better scoot! What a sweet story! Best of luck.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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HAHAHAHAHA! Oh my, this is just adorable! Poor tyke, kitty doesn't care too much for tiny hands, unable to do much more than grasp a handful of fur. Puppy tail better scoot! What a sweet story! Best of luck.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Thank you for the wonderful review, Dawn! Kitties and babies aren't always the greatest mix! Haha
Comment from Tessa Kay
This story made me smile. The baby's voice is really cute. I like the part where she can't think of what comes after two. Very imaginative.
I'm glad real baby didn't get slashed.
Well done
All the best in the contest.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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This story made me smile. The baby's voice is really cute. I like the part where she can't think of what comes after two. Very imaginative.
I'm glad real baby didn't get slashed.
Well done
All the best in the contest.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Tessa. Yeah, there are two cats in the house. One is scared of her and the other one lays and watches over her. Thank you, again!
Comment from giraffmang
Hi there,
I enjoyed this inventive little piece, and I could just picture this going through the mind of a little one. You could just sit and watch them for hours!
All the best and good luck.
GMG
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Hi there,
I enjoyed this inventive little piece, and I could just picture this going through the mind of a little one. You could just sit and watch them for hours!
All the best and good luck.
GMG
Comment Written 01-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Thank you so much for the review and thoughts. Babies, like kitties are fun to try and figure out what they are thinking. Haha
Comment from Dean Kuch
Hahaha. Our poor pets, God bless them -- everyone! They are so tolerant (usually) of all the little ones who grope, grab and choke them half to death, lol. It's almost as if they instinctively sense that this "small thing" really has no idea of what he or she is actually doing.
Well, if we weren't aware of what goes on in the mind of a toddler tethered and tied down by a car seat, we certainly are now.
Great story, very cute and funny. Good luck in the voting booth.
~Dean :)
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Hahaha. Our poor pets, God bless them -- everyone! They are so tolerant (usually) of all the little ones who grope, grab and choke them half to death, lol. It's almost as if they instinctively sense that this "small thing" really has no idea of what he or she is actually doing.
Well, if we weren't aware of what goes on in the mind of a toddler tethered and tied down by a car seat, we certainly are now.
Great story, very cute and funny. Good luck in the voting booth.
~Dean :)
Comment Written 01-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Dean! Babies are a trip! Yeah, gotta wonder what lurks in the minds of tots! Thanks again.
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It was entirely my pleasure. You are more than welcome.
~Dean :)
Comment from Cajungirl
Gotta a big-old Cajun smile on my face. This is most definitely a tale from a child's perspective. Perfect contest entry. Best of luck.
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Gotta a big-old Cajun smile on my face. This is most definitely a tale from a child's perspective. Perfect contest entry. Best of luck.
Comment Written 01-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Thank you so much. How sweet to get a six star review from you. I'll share the surprise with my granddaughter as soon as she's old enough to not stalk kitty tails. Lol!
Comment from Annette Gulliver
Such a cute little story through the eyes of an adventuress young child. It's wonderful when you catch the exact moment a little one manages to achieve something they've been trying so hard to do, such as the rollover in your endearing story.
Annette
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Such a cute little story through the eyes of an adventuress young child. It's wonderful when you catch the exact moment a little one manages to achieve something they've been trying so hard to do, such as the rollover in your endearing story.
Annette
Comment Written 01-Dec-2015
reply by the author on 01-Dec-2015
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Thank you, Annette. It's a whole new world for them!
