Comment from Liberty Justice

Excellent

The picture depicts the ideaology. The words are vivid, shstp to the point of the frustration felt with weight loss programs.

Liberty Justice

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

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Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

I love the monostich format as t has to mean so much with so little. This is a fine example and very, very true.

very nicely penned.

All the best
GMG

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot for considering this very nicely penned. I do appreciate that. Thanks too, for the warm and excellent stars. God bless.

Comment from wordspinner314

Excellent

You used the perfect picture to accompany your poem! A one-line poem must be so hard to write, yet you did it fantastically, making each word count. Great job!

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 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 08-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot for considering this piece a great job. Thanks abunch too, for the warm and excellent stars. God bless.