Comment from ExperiencingLiphe

Excellent

Yeah keeping my taste in food like pizza, cheeseburgers and bacon. Oh and don't forget chocolate. I'm a bad dieter. You did a great job and it looks like the person in the picture also kept her taste in food.

 Comment Written 19-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 24-Dec-2015

Ha, ha, yes, I had fun writing this one, my friend. Thanks again for consistently following my work, words won't suffice to thank you. God bless. Susan

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

I am glad to see that you too tried the monostich form. I liked your wordplay about "exercise" and the perfect picture to reinforce your message. I guess, at this time of the year, we both have eating on our mind! Cheers- Joan

 Comment Written 08-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 03-Jan-2016

Thanks a lot Joan for stopping by and thanks too, for the excellent stars. God bless.

Comment from OnyxSapphire78

Excellent

You have done a great job with this style. You are very good at the short poems always being able to say so much with so few words. The artwork works great with this piece as well. Thank you for sharing! God Bless
Amber

 Comment Written 04-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015

Oh thanks my friend for the warm and heartwarming review. God bless. Susan

Comment from trumby

Excellent

good poem. Flows well. Good concept. I think that most people would relate to it, as, if they don't have a weight problem, they'll probably have a friend with a weight problem.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot for the positive response and the inspiring stars. God bless.

Comment from nomi338

Excellent

All of us who are overweight due to eating too much of the things we love to eat, we have been sabotaged by a food industry that have loaded into the food chemicals that make our bodies crave their fattening goodies. This is much in the same way a drug addict craves illegal drugs.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot for the inspiring stars and the encouraging review. All the best.

Comment from Lulube

Excellent

I love the short humorous poetry styles. Need great imagery for them to have an impact. Not much power when the taste for something is gone, nothing to get excited about. lol

try a Duck Fun style poem, under my profile

lulube

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot Lulube, for the inspiring review and the encouraging stars. I will visit your profile and perhaps try that Duck Fun style poem, thanks again.

reply by Lulube on 15-Dec-2015

Do so, and you^re welcome

lulube

Comment from William Ross

Excellent

This is great, love the picture you picked for the piece fits well. I find these style poems often some of the hardest to work, great job.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015

Thanks for considering this a great job,, thanks too, for the inspiring stars, God bless. Susan

Comment from Bill Schott

Excellent

This monostich, Her Weight Loss Routine, says a lot about the overeating and obesity problem facing people now and in the future.

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot for the positive review and for the inspiring stars. all the best. Susan

Comment from alvina224224

Excellent

I'm a little bit lost here, nassus. I haven't heard of a monostich before, so I must obviously bone up on it. But it is intriguing. Congratulations on the recognition Awards

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot my friend for the inspiring stars. Please read the Monostich poem in Poetry Dances and you will be able to see all the poetic styles there. All the best . Susan

reply by alvina224224 on 05-Dec-2015

Thank you!

Comment from molldoll1116

Excellent

The combination of title, photo, and poem itself are a perfect combination. I appreciate your succinct humor. Well played!

 Comment Written 02-Dec-2015

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reply by the author on 05-Dec-2015

Thanks a lot for appreciating the humor infused in this Monostich poem. Thanks too for the inspiring stars. God bless. Susan