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Truth or Politics

a minor reference to Bob Dylan

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Comment from Sambangi
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Nice couplet comparing a politician with a woman that too a widow. Politicians hear themselves only despite what ever happening. A cool poem lovable to read aloud

 Comment Written 01-Dec-2015


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Raoul D'Harmental
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Hi victortouche

This is a brilliant expose of what politics is and how far it is from Truth. If something is not Truth, then it is a lie but we still somehow find it hard to think of politicians as liars. Perhaps its because we are all liars anyway. No man or woman has ever revealed his true self to all. Thanks for sharong this thought provoking poem. It's inspired me to pen one on this theme too! R

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
    Reads poetry, and a physicist at that. Well, I am impressed, R. And thanks for the review. Doug
Comment from Unspoken94
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I might change taverns or demand to change the channel away from Fox!
A fine poem in couplet form which is a form I have recently embraced.
Your reference to Dylan is duly noted. I agree with your assessment of both
the candidates and the condition that allows them to exist. Nice work. -Bill

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
    Pretty high praise, and from someone I respect. Doesn't get any better for me. :)
reply by Unspoken94 on 02-Dec-2015
    Victor, if you have a moment, would you consider reviewing a short story that I just re-activated? It's called, "As Far As." Thanks, Bill
reply by the author on 29-Dec-2015
    Hi Bill.

    I have not been here for a while.
    I feel guilty not to respond more
    often to you. Somehow, I feel an
    innate trust/attachment to you.
    I will look at your short story.

    Doug

    PS-Another surgery for me. Third in six years. Sheesh, I haven't sinned all that much. Well...
reply by Unspoken94 on 29-Dec-2015
    Doug, I sent you a personal message. Glad to hear from you. I will wait for your response so that I can offer the help you have asked for. =Bill
Comment from Poetofheart2013
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A very good poem a very cool poem that made song out a song.
you did a good job at it. everything flows nicely.
I enjoy reading it keep the good work.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from royowen
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Growing up in the sixties I was very fond of two songs of Dylon's, and still consider them useful for this day, "Masters of war" and "with God on our side" they were brilliant. Well done with your endemic nature of the politician that can still afflict our perceptions today. Articulate and pointed in its thrust, well done, blessings, Roy

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    Thank you, Roy.
reply by royowen on 26-Dec-2020
    My pleasure
Comment from amahra
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Very beautiful art work that you chose for this writing. Loved the ongoing same sound rhyming. Great job.

And...just so happens, by the way,
to be where I drink my beer. [love the last line.]

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    Ha ha. Thank you.
Comment from Lesley Collier
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An interesting poem comparing a politician to an unmarried woman and their role upon society as the nation watches in fear. Well written on an interesting topic with well flowing words!

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    Thank you.
Comment from Pantygynt
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Unfortunately I am not familiar with this particular Dylan number, so I cannot comment on any comparisons that there may be. Regardless of that however it seems to me that this stands alone quite happily as a one off in its own right.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    My thanks, sir.
Comment from TPAC
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Writer in this write illustrates great skills in line structuring, conveyances touching in appeal and captivating in stated interests. I found pleasing in its read.

 Comment Written 30-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 26-Dec-2020
    Thank you so much.
Comment from Nosha17
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In this greed-riddled society anything is possible. Nothing has changed since Dylan's times, still lots to protest about. Well chosen imagery and words. Faye

 Comment Written 29-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 30-Nov-2015
    Ain't it da truth? Thank you.