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Joy

Remembering Joy's participation.

18 total reviews

Comment from ravenblack

Excellent

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Snowflakes tap dancing on the tongue rather than heralding shoveling the driveway; staying up late to hear the bells and maybe even reindeer hooves on the roof rather than Black Friday door busters- Christmas was so much better as a kid. Thanks for taking me back.

Comment Written 28-Nov-2015

reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015

I often wonder why those moments in our past are so memorable. Most of my past was not so wonderful, but what was, I latched onto hungrily, and those memories seem to have been written in indelible ink.

Comment from kiwijenny

Excellent

Awwwwwww this is so nice...send it to hallmark
It's adorable...joy unconfined
Well penned ....I love the red and the font
God bless

Comment Written 28-Nov-2015

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015

Glad you enjoyed. Thanks for the great review.

Comment from Joan E.

Excellent

Thank you for your joyful interpretation of the prompt. I relished your personification of joy and the infusion of alliteration. Best wishes in the contest and continue to enjoy the season of thanks and hopefulness- Joan

Comment Written 28-Nov-2015

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015

Thanks for the great review. I'm in good shape, decorated inside today, lots of baked goods in the freezer and except for gift cards, done shopping.

reply by Joan E. on 28-Nov-2015

I usually finish shopping before Thanksgiving, and this year was no exception. The only decoration I have up is my card tree, because I was get one greeting at Thanksgiving. Now, I just have a few weeks to conjure up my holiday letter. You're way ahead of me with the baked goods--congratulations! -Joan

reply by Joan E. on 28-Nov-2015

I usually finish my shopping before Thanksgiving, and this year was no exception. But the only decoration I have up is my card tree, because we always get one greeting around Turkey Day. Now, I have to focus on composing my holiday letter. You're way ahead of me with the baked goods--congratulations! Enjoy your holiday Sunday- Joan

Comment from Dorothy Farrell

Excellent

This is a lovely Christmas poem Dallas. It's been a while since I saw your name on FS. This poem can be identified by everyone. Good use of alliteration throughout and good use of metaphor in the 'scent of love' - beautiful presentation. Good luck in the contest. Warm regards Dorothy x

Comment Written 28-Nov-2015

reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015

Thanks, Dorothy. Been in and out. Rather sporadic as I am involved in a rather time-consuming project. Should be able to wrap it up in mid-April. Hope you have a joyusChristmas, in case we don't hook up before that.

reply by Dorothy Farrell on 28-Nov-2015

Best wishes to you also Dallas - may it be a good Christmas for you. Look forward to your return - we need the good poets on FS. Regards Dorothy x

Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell

Excellent

What a lovely poem of memories. When we look back on our childhood, remembering those magical moments, what a rush of joy we get in our hearts. This is a wonderful Christmas Poetry contest entry. Good luck! xsx Sandra

Comment Written 27-Nov-2015