Comment from ann marie mazz

Excellent

good morning judester

I am a believer in love
the theme is timeless
the words are so true
with love all things come alive
excellent work
the format is true

thank you for sharing your talent
ann marie

 Comment Written 28-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015

Thanks for the review ann marie, I love the idea of a fresh start, in love and in life, cheers j

Comment from BeasPeas

Excellent

A good reminder to "get back on the horse, after falling off" as they say. Takes a brave person to jump back into the dating game again. Good job.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015

I like the feeling of a new start and fresh beginnings.I'm happily married 20 years, but I am ready to refresh and rejuvenate myself this year, cheers j

reply by BeasPeas on 27-Nov-2015

Great. It's always "refreshing" to "refresh" ourselves. What the heck, Madonna does it. Change is good, especially if we initiate the change ourselves. Marilyn

reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015

I think dropping 3 bad habits and picking 3 healthy ones will make a dent, cheer j

Comment from Jeanie Mercer

Excellent

This short 2-3-2 poems carries with it a beautiful, heart-warming message of hope and resolve. It is nicely presented as well. Good luck to you, Jeanie Mercer

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015

Thanks Jeanie, I love the idea of a new start and fresh beginnings, cheers j

Comment from Curly Girly

Excellent

I like this positive little verse:
renewed,
I live to love
again.

Way to go!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Nicole
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 Comment Written 26-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015

Thanks for the review Nicole, I like the idea of being renewed, cheers

Comment from giraffmang

Excellent

Hi there,

What can you really say in a 2-4-2 poem?!?

Actually I thought this was very good. So true also.

I thought that perhaps the first line might be more grammatically suited to renewed, maintain the syllable count also. - just a thought.

GMG

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015

Thanks for the helpful advice and I agree with you, renewed makes sense, cheers j

Comment from Sandra du Plessis

Excellent

There is always time and room to love. After a broken relationship a person might feel dead and not able to love again, but time heals and you can renew and allow yourself to love again.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2015

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reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015

Exactly Sandra. Even in the throes of loneliness, we must believe that we will love again. Thanks for the insightful review, cheers