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Comment from frogbook
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This has a very lively and happy sound to it. The picture is a beautiful accompaniment also. Great entry for the contest-best of luck.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
    Thank you for your kind review.
Comment from BeasPeas
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Horses are one of the most beautiful animals, graceful, powerful. Your 2-4-2 has a double entendre with the title, "Horsing Around" and horseplay. Not sure how it's meant, but in any case, it works.

 Comment Written 27-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
    Thank you, BeasPeas.
Comment from AnnaLinda
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Poet,

I like your 2-4-2 entry. I think you were quite creative with those few
syllables and I'm guessing you like horses. What a lovely photo and
presentation you have.

Happy Thanksgiving,
Linda

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
    Thank you. Yes, I do like horses.
    Neigh!
Comment from ann marie mazz
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hello poet

this is marvelous
the format is true to form
the theme is wonderful
the words give the entry life
and yes
life freedom and more come alive and come through
the presentation is excellent
well done
the entry has met the challenge

thank you for sharing your talent
best of luck with the contest
ann marie

 Comment Written 26-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
    Thank you, Ann Marie!
Comment from Sambangi
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Nice three line poem. Four words used to describe horseplay are in a very good sequence. This should do well in the contest. All the best

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
    Thank you for reading this.
Comment from PoemsOfDD
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This is a solid 2-4-2 writing prompt contest entry. The few words certainly describe the freedom of being a horse. The picture attached is very fitting and attractive. Well done and good luck for this enjoyable read.

 Comment Written 25-Nov-2015


reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
    Thank you for reading this.