November's child.
Our dear grandson.83 total reviews
Comment from Sis Cat
This is a fine poem for your grandson. Your poem is filled with joy and hope. You also offer a prayer for God to guard Jo through life. This is a tender, loving poem. Thank you for celebrating and sharing.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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This is a fine poem for your grandson. Your poem is filled with joy and hope. You also offer a prayer for God to guard Jo through life. This is a tender, loving poem. Thank you for celebrating and sharing.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Thank you Cat, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from seaglass
I have a November child, a son. He's 45 and calls me nearly everyday. You have written a loving poem for your grandson. Nice rhyme and meter carry your love.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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I have a November child, a son. He's 45 and calls me nearly everyday. You have written a loving poem for your grandson. Nice rhyme and meter carry your love.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Thank you for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, your son sounds like a lovely boy, blessings, Roy
Comment from AnnaLinda
Roy,
Your grandson's are absolutely adorable! Congratulations on Jo-jo's birthday.
You did a fantastic job on your poem of praise and prayer for him. This is
so special and children bring such hope to us all.
Thank you for sharing this day of celebration with all of us,
Linda
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Roy,
Your grandson's are absolutely adorable! Congratulations on Jo-jo's birthday.
You did a fantastic job on your poem of praise and prayer for him. This is
so special and children bring such hope to us all.
Thank you for sharing this day of celebration with all of us,
Linda
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Thank you Linda, for this super review, and gracious thoughts and wishes, blessings, Roy
Comment from mfowler
Congratulations to you, Granddad. We celebrated our eldest grandson's sixth birthday last week, so I know how proud you must be. Your poem is a celebration and an ode of sorts. You centre the attention on his birthday but include him in your umbrella of faith through prayer for the present and future. A fine piece and one I'm certain he will appreciate as he gets older.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Congratulations to you, Granddad. We celebrated our eldest grandson's sixth birthday last week, so I know how proud you must be. Your poem is a celebration and an ode of sorts. You centre the attention on his birthday but include him in your umbrella of faith through prayer for the present and future. A fine piece and one I'm certain he will appreciate as he gets older.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Thank you for this wonderful review Mark, and empathetic thoughts, and gracious well wishes, blessings, Roy
Comment from AnnieGale
Our children are God's masterpiece. Bringing us joy, love and hope for the future. One's love never fades as you say, how true. I loved reading this. I have children and now grandchildren as well...what a precious gift bestowed upon us. Thank you for sharing
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Our children are God's masterpiece. Bringing us joy, love and hope for the future. One's love never fades as you say, how true. I loved reading this. I have children and now grandchildren as well...what a precious gift bestowed upon us. Thank you for sharing
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you Annie, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
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You are welcome...Happy Thanksgiving to you and yours
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You too Annie
Comment from Bill Schott
This sonnet-esque poem, November's Child, written in what looks like iambic tetrameter, will be a special remembrance for Jo Jo and is a nice reminder of the gift of children can be. Nice poem.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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This sonnet-esque poem, November's Child, written in what looks like iambic tetrameter, will be a special remembrance for Jo Jo and is a nice reminder of the gift of children can be. Nice poem.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you Bill, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Very nice photo of your grandsons.
-I am sure the birthday boy is very excited.
-Thoughtful of you to include all children.
-There are so many effective images in your poem.
-A couple of my favorites are:
* "November's child, brought songs to sing."
* "Each child was born to dance on dreams"
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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-Very nice photo of your grandsons.
-I am sure the birthday boy is very excited.
-Thoughtful of you to include all children.
-There are so many effective images in your poem.
-A couple of my favorites are:
* "November's child, brought songs to sing."
* "Each child was born to dance on dreams"
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
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You are very welcome.
Comment from rspoet
Those are three handsome lads
They have the same eyes and the same ties
The same white shirts and same blue vests
The same blond hair, the same physique
but underneath, they're all unique
And each a joy, may they each
dance on dreams
of love's bright beams
Happy birthday Jo-Jo
Well done, proud Grandpa
Well done
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Those are three handsome lads
They have the same eyes and the same ties
The same white shirts and same blue vests
The same blond hair, the same physique
but underneath, they're all unique
And each a joy, may they each
dance on dreams
of love's bright beams
Happy birthday Jo-Jo
Well done, proud Grandpa
Well done
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from redrocklover
What a good-looking trio of grandchildren you have! You've written a lovely poem to commemorate Jo-Jo's birthday (and, as you said, all children). I especially liked your last two lines.
Linda
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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What a good-looking trio of grandchildren you have! You've written a lovely poem to commemorate Jo-Jo's birthday (and, as you said, all children). I especially liked your last two lines.
Linda
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you Linda, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from Jacqueline M Franklin
Hi, Roy
_ Beautiful dedication to your Jo Jo.
_ Such good looking young fellas all around.
_ I can't imagine why you're so proud. (*<*)
_ I hope his birthday was/will be a lot of fun.
_ And, of course, filled with lots of presents, cake and ice cream--yum!
* Happy Thanksgiving & Merry Christmas to you and yours *
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline-Jackie-Jax (*:*)
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Hi, Roy
_ Beautiful dedication to your Jo Jo.
_ Such good looking young fellas all around.
_ I can't imagine why you're so proud. (*<*)
_ I hope his birthday was/will be a lot of fun.
_ And, of course, filled with lots of presents, cake and ice cream--yum!
* Happy Thanksgiving & Merry Christmas to you and yours *
Cheers & Blessings
Keep Smilin'... Jacqueline-Jackie-Jax (*:*)
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thanks for the wonderful review and well wishes for Jo, he's a special little boy, blessings, Roy
