November's child.
Our dear grandson.83 total reviews
Comment from Dean Kuch
What an adorable bunch of boys, Roy. I'm quite sure you consider yourself very fortunate, and justifiably so.
Your poem shows the love you have for not only your grandchildren, but all of God's wonderful children in general.
Wonderfully well done...
~Dean
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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What an adorable bunch of boys, Roy. I'm quite sure you consider yourself very fortunate, and justifiably so.
Your poem shows the love you have for not only your grandchildren, but all of God's wonderful children in general.
Wonderfully well done...
~Dean
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you Dean, who for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
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Blessings to you & yours, Roy.
~Dean
Comment from Poetofheart2013
A very sweet and touching poem you can tell how much you
love your Grandkids by all the really good poems you write about them.
I really reading it keep up the good work.
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A very sweet and touching poem you can tell how much you
love your Grandkids by all the really good poems you write about them.
I really reading it keep up the good work.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from nancyrabbrose
Roy, you have done it again. Another great poem. This heartfelt poem about your grandson and all children is well done.
My mother used to say that she is as rich as many children she has. I value my two children, as well. No grandchildren, but my two cats take that place in my heart.
I cannot find any thing to correct.
Well done.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Roy, you have done it again. Another great poem. This heartfelt poem about your grandson and all children is well done.
My mother used to say that she is as rich as many children she has. I value my two children, as well. No grandchildren, but my two cats take that place in my heart.
I cannot find any thing to correct.
Well done.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
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Love that Nancy pets are family for us too! Thank you for this most lovely review, blessings, Roy
Comment from mermaids
Each child was born to dance on dreams is a wonderful line that shows the gift of each child. Your poetic form captures the love you have for your grandson. Arrayed in hope to grow to seek is another line that adds to the strength of the poem.
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Each child was born to dance on dreams is a wonderful line that shows the gift of each child. Your poetic form captures the love you have for your grandson. Arrayed in hope to grow to seek is another line that adds to the strength of the poem.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from MissMerri
Wow! What beautiful grandsons you have Roy! And the poem is so loving and sweet and appropriate for a birthday boy. He will know how much he's loved when he reads this. Your rhymes and meter are melodic and beautiful and the meaning is clear and beautifully expressed. A lovely birthday poem, from a loving granddad. I enjoyed this very much.
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Wow! What beautiful grandsons you have Roy! And the poem is so loving and sweet and appropriate for a birthday boy. He will know how much he's loved when he reads this. Your rhymes and meter are melodic and beautiful and the meaning is clear and beautifully expressed. A lovely birthday poem, from a loving granddad. I enjoyed this very much.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you Adonna, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, and well wishes, blessings, Roy
Comment from kiwijenny
You write poetry that is pure joy personified
Happy birthday Jo Jo.
I enjoyed this immensely
Children truly are a blessing from the Lord
God bless
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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You write poetry that is pure joy personified
Happy birthday Jo Jo.
I enjoyed this immensely
Children truly are a blessing from the Lord
God bless
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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I know you adore your kids and grands too Jenny, So thanks you for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from rmj09
This deserve's a six so this is mine to you ******.
The poem focus is what children bring to us.
The poem story line development a gift from God this six year old. Too bring joy, spice to life and the joy of learning about the world around and dream of their life with God. They are an example of the true world for they care about all.
The rhyming is ab cd
The poem is very personal as it is a poem about his grandson.
Roy, Use your gift and write those you love a Christmas poem each year and you'll always be with them. Rita
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This deserve's a six so this is mine to you ******.
The poem focus is what children bring to us.
The poem story line development a gift from God this six year old. Too bring joy, spice to life and the joy of learning about the world around and dream of their life with God. They are an example of the true world for they care about all.
The rhyming is ab cd
The poem is very personal as it is a poem about his grandson.
Roy, Use your gift and write those you love a Christmas poem each year and you'll always be with them. Rita
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you, I have been doing every year for many years now, Rita, for my wife, children and grandchildren, I learnt that from my son in law's revered departed grandma, thank you for the wonderful review, my friend, blessings, Roy
Comment from Sandra Stoner-Mitchell
What a lovely family you have, Roy, your grandsons are gorgeous. I have two November grandchildren, and they are precious to me too. This is a lovely tribute to all your grandchildren, my friend, and a pleasure to read. :) Sandra
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What a lovely family you have, Roy, your grandsons are gorgeous. I have two November grandchildren, and they are precious to me too. This is a lovely tribute to all your grandchildren, my friend, and a pleasure to read. :) Sandra
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you Sandra, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from Lesley Collier
A delightful poem in dedication to a grandson who was born in November and brings great hope to his family as he shines his light in God's way as do all of his
little ones. Well written with wonderfully descriptive words and a tribute to those children who light up the life of the elderly!
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A delightful poem in dedication to a grandson who was born in November and brings great hope to his family as he shines his light in God's way as do all of his
little ones. Well written with wonderfully descriptive words and a tribute to those children who light up the life of the elderly!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you Lesley, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from rhymelord
Dear Roy,
Great, near immaculate metre and solid couplet rhymes make for good reading and, as always, your bright, optimistic nature and big heart shine through.
Reg
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Dear Roy,
Great, near immaculate metre and solid couplet rhymes make for good reading and, as always, your bright, optimistic nature and big heart shine through.
Reg
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you Reg,for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
