November's child.
Our dear grandson.83 total reviews
Comment from Jeanie Mercer
Hope your special boy had a happy Thanksgiving birthday! This poem is well written, with good rhyme, rhythm and flow, and the subject is charming and loving. (Psalm 127:3 is one of my favorite scriptures.) Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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Hope your special boy had a happy Thanksgiving birthday! This poem is well written, with good rhyme, rhythm and flow, and the subject is charming and loving. (Psalm 127:3 is one of my favorite scriptures.) Best regards, Jeanie Mercer
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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Thanks so much for these wonderful words and very lovely review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Dorothy Farrell
Such a lovely poetic dedication to your grandson Roy. The picture shows three lovely children of whom you must be very proud. Good aabb rhyme throughout and I really like your final couplet. Another good poem from you. Warm regards Dorothy x
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Such a lovely poetic dedication to your grandson Roy. The picture shows three lovely children of whom you must be very proud. Good aabb rhyme throughout and I really like your final couplet. Another good poem from you. Warm regards Dorothy x
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Thanks again, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, I'm pleased you liked it, blessings, Roy
Comment from Lovinia
Hello Roy
What a delight. Three beautiful grandsons. They all look so sweet ... and loved, as all children deserve to be. Happy birthday ... belated, to your dear little Jo. I hope he had a wonderful day. :)) There is nothing more blessed than children. It is lovely of you to include them all in your special birthday wish.
Excellent rhyme and meter, and loads of the poetic technique of alliteration, assonance and consonance. Your closing couplet is beautiful, if only all children could experience that. The love and pride in your 'boys' is evident in this poem of joy. When I see such a threesome, I think of my dear three sons, in my heart my little boys, in reality, young men. :)) Hugs - Lovi xoxo
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Hello Roy
What a delight. Three beautiful grandsons. They all look so sweet ... and loved, as all children deserve to be. Happy birthday ... belated, to your dear little Jo. I hope he had a wonderful day. :)) There is nothing more blessed than children. It is lovely of you to include them all in your special birthday wish.
Excellent rhyme and meter, and loads of the poetic technique of alliteration, assonance and consonance. Your closing couplet is beautiful, if only all children could experience that. The love and pride in your 'boys' is evident in this poem of joy. When I see such a threesome, I think of my dear three sons, in my heart my little boys, in reality, young men. :)) Hugs - Lovi xoxo
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Yes they grow up so quickly Lovi, we enjoyed our girls, but we have more time and wisdom with which to enjoy our grandchildren even more than our own! Thanks for the great review, and the understanding empathy that comes with tvalueing love because of God's great love, blessings, and joy of the season to you and yours, Lovi, Roy & Elaine
Comment from alvina224224
Such a beautiful poem, Roy, and such beautiful grandchildren. You must be extremely proud of them. and rightly so. The "fruit of the womb" can sometimes turn sour, but it doesn't stop you from loving them.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Such a beautiful poem, Roy, and such beautiful grandchildren. You must be extremely proud of them. and rightly so. The "fruit of the womb" can sometimes turn sour, but it doesn't stop you from loving them.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Thanks Alvina, for the wonderful review and comments, and compliments, blessings, Roy
Comment from Aussie
Wonderful photo of your special grandson. Good AABB rhyming for your lovely poem for Jo-Jo's birthday. children grow up too quickly. I bet you are all looking forward to Christmas - children's time, I think. Well done poet.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Wonderful photo of your special grandson. Good AABB rhyming for your lovely poem for Jo-Jo's birthday. children grow up too quickly. I bet you are all looking forward to Christmas - children's time, I think. Well done poet.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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I certainly am Kay, Thank you Kay too, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from ProSongwriter
Hi Roy ...
I'm all out of sixes, but if I had one, I'd surely apply it here. What handsome fellas these three young men are ... must get it fro Grandpa!
Children are, indeed, special. They are God'special gift of no equal We should cherish them and bring them up in His name.
Simply wonderful! God Bless ...
Alan
PS: Not feeling well tonight, so reviews are a bit brief. Please forgive me.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Hi Roy ...
I'm all out of sixes, but if I had one, I'd surely apply it here. What handsome fellas these three young men are ... must get it fro Grandpa!
Children are, indeed, special. They are God'special gift of no equal We should cherish them and bring them up in His name.
Simply wonderful! God Bless ...
Alan
PS: Not feeling well tonight, so reviews are a bit brief. Please forgive me.
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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You are forgiven Alan, Thank you too, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
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My pleasure, Roy!
Comment from anabellapongasi
Roy, what an adorable picture of your grandsons, they are all very cute! And obviously you are one very proud grandfather. Happy sixth birthday to Jo-Jo.
This is a lovely poem and prayer you have written especially for him. A real pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing.
Blessings,
Anabella
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Roy, what an adorable picture of your grandsons, they are all very cute! And obviously you are one very proud grandfather. Happy sixth birthday to Jo-Jo.
This is a lovely poem and prayer you have written especially for him. A real pleasure to read. Thank you for sharing.
Blessings,
Anabella
Comment Written 28-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Thank you Anabella, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from Ben Colder
Good tribute to your grandson. Sorry to be so late responding but been with mine as well for Thanksgiving we celebrate here in America. Well done. Bro. Good looking bunch.
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Good tribute to your grandson. Sorry to be so late responding but been with mine as well for Thanksgiving we celebrate here in America. Well done. Bro. Good looking bunch.
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 28-Nov-2015
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Thanks so much Ben, for the wonderful support, and great review, enjoy your family, bro, blessings, Roy
Comment from Curly Girly
I loved this delightful poem! It was fun and positive to read. Indeed, children are a blessing from the Lord, and it would be good if more people remembered all this.
I loved the last stanza:
Each child was born to dance on dreams,
to walk in favour, love's bright beams.
Nice!
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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I loved this delightful poem! It was fun and positive to read. Indeed, children are a blessing from the Lord, and it would be good if more people remembered all this.
I loved the last stanza:
Each child was born to dance on dreams,
to walk in favour, love's bright beams.
Nice!
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you Nicole, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from evilynne
Your poem is a wonderful birthday wish for your grandson and all children. They grow up much to fast. Your love for your grandchild shines through your words. Evi
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Your poem is a wonderful birthday wish for your grandson and all children. They grow up much to fast. Your love for your grandchild shines through your words. Evi
Comment Written 27-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thank you Evi, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
