Though I'm not perfect...
I can choose a virtue.73 total reviews
Comment from N.K. Wagner
Absolutely perfect, Roy. I enjoyed watching you build the faith, hope, love Trinity while keeping a humble Voice. Outstanding, sir. :) Nancy
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Absolutely perfect, Roy. I enjoyed watching you build the faith, hope, love Trinity while keeping a humble Voice. Outstanding, sir. :) Nancy
Comment Written 26-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 27-Nov-2015
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Thanks Nancy for this marvellous review, the outstandingly empathetic comments and stars, blessings, Roy
Comment from Tessa Kay
I'm sorry I don't have a six left. Love, hope, faith beautifully woven together, and the solution to any kind of problem. I hope you do well in the competition.
Loved it. :)
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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I'm sorry I don't have a six left. Love, hope, faith beautifully woven together, and the solution to any kind of problem. I hope you do well in the competition.
Loved it. :)
Comment Written 26-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Your approval is all I need Tessa, thanks again for the lovely review and comments, blessings, Roy
Comment from RPSaxena
Hello Roy,
Lovely piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is simple as well as impressive.
Smooth and captivating flow with nice rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
Its last stanza is particularly noteworthy:
"If surely one more virtue comes
then faith can bind them all,
for love and hope combined with faith,
rebuilds a broken wall."
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Hello Roy,
Lovely piece of poetry beautifully depicting its theme!
Wording is simple as well as impressive.
Smooth and captivating flow with nice rhyming scheme and lively imagery.
Its last stanza is particularly noteworthy:
"If surely one more virtue comes
then faith can bind them all,
for love and hope combined with faith,
rebuilds a broken wall."
Comment Written 26-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Thank you RP, for this wonderful review, and gracious thoughts, and fantastic words and stars, blessings, Roy
Comment from Tomes Johnston
This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a great take on the Biblical passage from the author here. We would all do well to remember this.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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This is an interesting poem that the author has created with this piece of writing. This is a great take on the Biblical passage from the author here. We would all do well to remember this.
Comment Written 26-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Thanks again tomes, for this great review, blessings, Roy
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My pleasure.
Comment from Pyrrho
I certainly approve of the thoughts in the subject poem and the rhyme and meter can be faulted only by the pickiest of poetry prudes. However, the last line fell flat for me ... thus I admit to being one of the poetry prudes. I believe you gave up with the easy rhyme of wall instead of working to end with the same pizzazz as the rest of the poem. Here is what I consider a somewhat better ending, but I am confident you can beat it if you choose to try.
If surely one more virtue comes
then faith can bind them all,
for love and hope combined with faith,
Make all of us walk tall
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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I certainly approve of the thoughts in the subject poem and the rhyme and meter can be faulted only by the pickiest of poetry prudes. However, the last line fell flat for me ... thus I admit to being one of the poetry prudes. I believe you gave up with the easy rhyme of wall instead of working to end with the same pizzazz as the rest of the poem. Here is what I consider a somewhat better ending, but I am confident you can beat it if you choose to try.
If surely one more virtue comes
then faith can bind them all,
for love and hope combined with faith,
Make all of us walk tall
Comment Written 26-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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We hope and believe different things, one is dead, one is still alive, but thanks for the kind and gracious review, blessings, Roy
Comment from Janet Foor
This is a very special scripture that is so often read at weddings. It speaks so clearing that love is what is most important. If only they we could all remember that. Well doe Roy.
Blessings and Happy Thanksgiving.
Janet
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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This is a very special scripture that is so often read at weddings. It speaks so clearing that love is what is most important. If only they we could all remember that. Well doe Roy.
Blessings and Happy Thanksgiving.
Janet
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Thanks Janet, for this wonderful review, and excellent words, blessings, Roy
Comment from drivenbackward
I wish hope, love, and good-natured faith ruled the world. Unfortunately, I do believe that obliterating evil with absolutely no mercy whatsoever is the only real way to eliminate it. I'm not sure if I ended up on a different wavelength, but that's where your poem brought me.
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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I wish hope, love, and good-natured faith ruled the world. Unfortunately, I do believe that obliterating evil with absolutely no mercy whatsoever is the only real way to eliminate it. I'm not sure if I ended up on a different wavelength, but that's where your poem brought me.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 26-Nov-2015
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Thanks so much for the most excellent review, you've been very busy, on my work, an extra special, thank you, blessings. Roy
Comment from GWinterwin
Great poem Roy with words that certainly tell of the three greatest things one could possess. Good word flow and rhyming make it even better. Have a happy thanksgiving my friend.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Great poem Roy with words that certainly tell of the three greatest things one could possess. Good word flow and rhyming make it even better. Have a happy thanksgiving my friend.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
Comment from misscookie
I like the artwork you choose for your poem
I thought it was a perfect match.
I love the words within you your write and the message within.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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I like the artwork you choose for your poem
I thought it was a perfect match.
I love the words within you your write and the message within.
Thank you for sharing.
Cookie
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you Cookle, for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
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You're very welcome.take care.
Cookie
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You too Cookie
Comment from daycee1
This was a really cute story, it was just plain amazing. I feel that this poem was really enhancing how people should feel today. I for one feel connected to this poem, I really loved it, good job.
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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This was a really cute story, it was just plain amazing. I feel that this poem was really enhancing how people should feel today. I for one feel connected to this poem, I really loved it, good job.
Comment Written 25-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 25-Nov-2015
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Thank you for this wonderful review, and empathetic thoughts, blessings, Roy
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Your welcome!
