Great Blue Heron
free verse69 total reviews
Comment from rspoet
The Great Blue Heron is a beautiful creature
as long as you are not a fish or frog
A talented hunter
she'll wait poised in shallow waters
and spear any who dear to come near
When you see her take flight
and glide down the water
it is grace in motion
Your poem captures her spirit in words
with a gorgeous picture to match
Very well done
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
The Great Blue Heron is a beautiful creature
as long as you are not a fish or frog
A talented hunter
she'll wait poised in shallow waters
and spear any who dear to come near
When you see her take flight
and glide down the water
it is grace in motion
Your poem captures her spirit in words
with a gorgeous picture to match
Very well done
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Love your poem. Thanks so much. Elaine
Comment from kiwijenny
Herons are majestic...and you capture this with words like serene,
Visible soul...it's good mermaids
Well penned . I love nature and how it prompts poems
Well done
God bless
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
Herons are majestic...and you capture this with words like serene,
Visible soul...it's good mermaids
Well penned . I love nature and how it prompts poems
Well done
God bless
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Pam (respa)
-Great artwork. The Great Blue Heron is one of my favorites.
-A lovely poem about this beautiful bird.
-Very good imagery.
-I find it peaceful, as the heron is peaceful.
-A few of my favorite lines are:
* "a presence so serene"
* "she is the visible soul
of Cape cod Canal" (Cape Cod ?)
* "nature's gift of
beauty"
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
-Great artwork. The Great Blue Heron is one of my favorites.
-A lovely poem about this beautiful bird.
-Very good imagery.
-I find it peaceful, as the heron is peaceful.
-A few of my favorite lines are:
* "a presence so serene"
* "she is the visible soul
of Cape cod Canal" (Cape Cod ?)
* "nature's gift of
beauty"
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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You are very welcome.
Comment from l.raven
HI Elaine, what a beautiful bird...makes you wonder how it can stand on those skinny legs...LOL...I love your poem and your story told...a beautiful picture sweet girl...luff Linda xxoo
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
HI Elaine, what a beautiful bird...makes you wonder how it can stand on those skinny legs...LOL...I love your poem and your story told...a beautiful picture sweet girl...luff Linda xxoo
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
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you are so welcome Elaine...xxoo luff
Comment from Gypsy Blue Rose
Hello :)
Beautiful poem about a Great Blue Heron. The well written poem is in free verse with a nice flow. I like the presentation and lovely picture. Good job!
Gypsy
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
Hello :)
Beautiful poem about a Great Blue Heron. The well written poem is in free verse with a nice flow. I like the presentation and lovely picture. Good job!
Gypsy
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from redrocklover
The picture you used of the blue heron is beautiful. You did an excellent job of capturing the time and space you were in while out walking.
Linda
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
The picture you used of the blue heron is beautiful. You did an excellent job of capturing the time and space you were in while out walking.
Linda
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from Curly Girly
It sounds as if you live in paradise. You describe your sights and scenes very well. This is not something that city dwellers would get a chance to see on a stroll.
nature's gift of
beauty
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
It sounds as if you live in paradise. You describe your sights and scenes very well. This is not something that city dwellers would get a chance to see on a stroll.
nature's gift of
beauty
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Thanks for a great review. Elaine
Comment from flylikeaneagle
The Cape Cod blue heron is beautiful. You described the bird well. Her coloring is beautiful. She is focused on lunch with tasty treats of fish. You got to enjoy the moment. Did you shoot the photo? I love looking at the animals of nature. note - Capitalize the c in cod. Excellent! flylikeaneagle
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
The Cape Cod blue heron is beautiful. You described the bird well. Her coloring is beautiful. She is focused on lunch with tasty treats of fish. You got to enjoy the moment. Did you shoot the photo? I love looking at the animals of nature. note - Capitalize the c in cod. Excellent! flylikeaneagle
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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I did not take the photo, but the bird looks like the Great Blue Heron I observed. Thanks for reading and enjoying. Elaine
Comment from Joyce Long
Beautiful poem and picture. Typo-Cape cod/Cod Canal. It would be great to walk where you could see the elegant bird. They have such patience and then are so quick to grab their lunch out of the water.
I certainly enjoyed reading this poem and imagining the picture in my mind's eye.
Thank you for sharing.
Joyce 11-29-15
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
Beautiful poem and picture. Typo-Cape cod/Cod Canal. It would be great to walk where you could see the elegant bird. They have such patience and then are so quick to grab their lunch out of the water.
I certainly enjoyed reading this poem and imagining the picture in my mind's eye.
Thank you for sharing.
Joyce 11-29-15
Comment Written 29-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 07-Dec-2015
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Thanks for pointing out the typo, I appreciate your encouraging review. Elaine
Comment from A.A.A.EXHILARATING RIDE
Oh! You capture nature so deep and vividly as it stops and stirs a Greater Oneness within and outer. What a wonderful picture and its depiction as the soul of Cape Cod Canal, obviously a divine walking place eager to inspire the love of a creative soul. Thank you, for sharing your blessings of the Light, Maureen*&*
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
Oh! You capture nature so deep and vividly as it stops and stirs a Greater Oneness within and outer. What a wonderful picture and its depiction as the soul of Cape Cod Canal, obviously a divine walking place eager to inspire the love of a creative soul. Thank you, for sharing your blessings of the Light, Maureen*&*
Comment Written 24-Nov-2015
reply by the author on 29-Nov-2015
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I am honored by your encouraging review. This is a beautiful bird. Thanks so much. Elaine
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Truly a beautiful bird, Elaine, enhanced in your observation and poem. Blessings for a joyous Christmas, Maureen*&*